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so, it's another story I made! maybe I'll try to continue this, ya' know, keep going until I can't take it anymore. Let's start!
Chapter 1: It all started
Chapter 2: First Blood
Chapter 3: The jokes on them
Chapter 4: Now or Never
To be continued(or not)...
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okay...
so, it's another story I made! maybe I'll try to continue this, ya' know, keep going until I can't take it anymore. Let's start!
Chapter 1: It all started
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*boom* Bombs were exploding everywhere. Me and My squadron tried our best to reach the isolated bunker. "If we can get to the bunker, maybe we can plan a strategy to win this war" said Jasper. "Maybe a drink of Vodka will do!" said Deniel. "I see enemies approaching, sir!" shouted Gordon. I looked, and there were three human figures. They were 10 feet tall, walking in hind legs. They carry some sort of gun, wearing bullet-proof armor and a belt that carries most of their equipment. "Okay team. We got three Raskals ahead of us. You'd think we can surprise them?" I asked them. "Those things can endure our bullets!" said Chris. "That's what plans are for, right?" I replied him
Deniel and Gordon started to work. Placing Vapor bombs on each side of the church. The church looks like a ruined place. Shattered glass everywhere, few pillars still standing, and the insides bombed. But with all of this, a miracle happened- During the bombing, the altar and the Jesus statue never broke into pieces. It seems like it was never touched. "Okay, Gordon & Chris, Go upstairs and defend up there. Deniel, Jeff, and Cole, defend the outside of the church. Terence, Sebastian and I will defend the inside and the back portion. Alessandra, activate the bombs until I say so. Got it?" I said. "Sir yes sir!" all of them said. "Ali, come with Chris" I added. "Got it sir!" She replied.
We were at our positions. Deniel loaded his rocket launcher, Ali reloading her AK-147. I reloaded my shotgun, and aimed. All of them did the same thing. We saw moving figures along the road. We all aimed at the figures, and seconds later I saw a rocket being launched. "Get down!" I said. The rocket flew, blowing up a pillar. I looked back, and their were ten figures. "Open Fire!" I said. We triggered our guns and bullets flew. The bullets simply clanked and dropped broken from the creatures. A Raskal started to attack, shooting at the place of Gordon. He responded back with lots of bullets, Ignoring the bullets will never penetrate its armor.
"Ric!! Get out NOW!" I heard Ali screamed. I looked back, And saw a Raskal aiming at me. I felt nervous, dropping my weapon and trembling while looking at the Raskal. "Is it the end?" I thought. Blue energy was gathering around the creature's weapon. I closed my eyes, remembering my life. Then I heard a blast. I opened my eyes and a saw blood all over me. I heard Deniel shouting, Ali screaming, Terence running towards me. I fell, and opened my eyes one more time, then I lay dead at the ground.
Deniel and Gordon started to work. Placing Vapor bombs on each side of the church. The church looks like a ruined place. Shattered glass everywhere, few pillars still standing, and the insides bombed. But with all of this, a miracle happened- During the bombing, the altar and the Jesus statue never broke into pieces. It seems like it was never touched. "Okay, Gordon & Chris, Go upstairs and defend up there. Deniel, Jeff, and Cole, defend the outside of the church. Terence, Sebastian and I will defend the inside and the back portion. Alessandra, activate the bombs until I say so. Got it?" I said. "Sir yes sir!" all of them said. "Ali, come with Chris" I added. "Got it sir!" She replied.
We were at our positions. Deniel loaded his rocket launcher, Ali reloading her AK-147. I reloaded my shotgun, and aimed. All of them did the same thing. We saw moving figures along the road. We all aimed at the figures, and seconds later I saw a rocket being launched. "Get down!" I said. The rocket flew, blowing up a pillar. I looked back, and their were ten figures. "Open Fire!" I said. We triggered our guns and bullets flew. The bullets simply clanked and dropped broken from the creatures. A Raskal started to attack, shooting at the place of Gordon. He responded back with lots of bullets, Ignoring the bullets will never penetrate its armor.
"Ric!! Get out NOW!" I heard Ali screamed. I looked back, And saw a Raskal aiming at me. I felt nervous, dropping my weapon and trembling while looking at the Raskal. "Is it the end?" I thought. Blue energy was gathering around the creature's weapon. I closed my eyes, remembering my life. Then I heard a blast. I opened my eyes and a saw blood all over me. I heard Deniel shouting, Ali screaming, Terence running towards me. I fell, and opened my eyes one more time, then I lay dead at the ground.
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"Ric, RIC!!" I said. I grabbed his hands and started to cry. It was a sorrowful moment for me, As he was a good friend to me. It all started when he and I joined the army. It was hard for us, as the hard training to be a soldier is, well, hard. Mud all over us, Hot sweat flowing on our face, and muscle pains. Then It started- The was between the aliens and us. Gen. Ferrer informed us of Aliens arriving at earth at 6:66 at Saturday, July 6, 2066. We were informed that they started attacking Las Vegas, So the Gen. said that we will fight this treat and bring an end to it.
"It's ok, Ali. We know what you feel right now. Currently Deniel brought down the alien, Gordon needs back-up now. We'll need to go now." said Terence. "Yeah... let's *sniff* go..." I said. I started to cry, and said good bye to Ric. I reached the place where Gordon is fighting. He was injured at his right knee, and seemingly can't walk. "Well, It seems my fire tooting didn't pay off. I guess we should activate the vapor bombs." He said to me. "Yeah, I think we should." I told him. I picked up the detonator, and placed my thumb at the button. "What are you waiting for? Press it!" said Gordon. My hand started to shake, then I dropped the detonator. "I can't. Ric sai-" "If Ric was still alive, then he'll say detonate the bombs already." he said to me. I picked it up, and whispered,"for Ric, a good, loyal friend", and pressed the button.
The bombs exploded like, well, bombs. "The aliens are toasted now!" I said. "yeah, hey can you help me get
up?" Gordon asked me. I pulled his hand, yet he was to heavy and I fell down, just in front of him. I blushed a little, as our lips were just inches away, as we were about to kiss. I stood up, and helped him. I carried him in my shoulders, and we both looked at each other mutually. Then we got down the stairs. Downstairs, Deniel and Terence were talking. "Ok, so Ric is out and I'm in charge. we'll need to get to the bunker and plan. Its to dangerous if we stay in here." said Terence. "How about Gordon? he's injured." asked Jasper, filled with blood. "No man get's behind. We'll all help him. right now I see another wave" said Jeff. "It looks like their not Raskals sir. Oh no, we got a problem sir!" said Cole. As if bad luck started, 5 Executioners came. They looked like human, but carry big axes that can break any metal. They were filled with blood, and wore black suits. The last time I saw one of this, they killed our captain. "Let's go. They move at turtle-pace." said Terence. And we left.
"It's ok, Ali. We know what you feel right now. Currently Deniel brought down the alien, Gordon needs back-up now. We'll need to go now." said Terence. "Yeah... let's *sniff* go..." I said. I started to cry, and said good bye to Ric. I reached the place where Gordon is fighting. He was injured at his right knee, and seemingly can't walk. "Well, It seems my fire tooting didn't pay off. I guess we should activate the vapor bombs." He said to me. "Yeah, I think we should." I told him. I picked up the detonator, and placed my thumb at the button. "What are you waiting for? Press it!" said Gordon. My hand started to shake, then I dropped the detonator. "I can't. Ric sai-" "If Ric was still alive, then he'll say detonate the bombs already." he said to me. I picked it up, and whispered,"for Ric, a good, loyal friend", and pressed the button.
The bombs exploded like, well, bombs. "The aliens are toasted now!" I said. "yeah, hey can you help me get
up?" Gordon asked me. I pulled his hand, yet he was to heavy and I fell down, just in front of him. I blushed a little, as our lips were just inches away, as we were about to kiss. I stood up, and helped him. I carried him in my shoulders, and we both looked at each other mutually. Then we got down the stairs. Downstairs, Deniel and Terence were talking. "Ok, so Ric is out and I'm in charge. we'll need to get to the bunker and plan. Its to dangerous if we stay in here." said Terence. "How about Gordon? he's injured." asked Jasper, filled with blood. "No man get's behind. We'll all help him. right now I see another wave" said Jeff. "It looks like their not Raskals sir. Oh no, we got a problem sir!" said Cole. As if bad luck started, 5 Executioners came. They looked like human, but carry big axes that can break any metal. They were filled with blood, and wore black suits. The last time I saw one of this, they killed our captain. "Let's go. They move at turtle-pace." said Terence. And we left.
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We were moving in a fast pace, hurrying to the bunker. "faster! we'll need to get there before they get us!" shouted Terence. "Sir! Gargoyles!" shouted Basti. I raised my AK-147 and aimed at the creatures. I triggered the weapon and bullets flew, killing the strange creatures. "Move it! Move it!" I shouted. We moved as fast as we move, hearing gunshots, Bombs exploded, and people screaming. "Guess more of us are trying to get to the bunker." said Jasper. "let's just get in there first. hopefully a radio is waiting for us" said Terence
We finally reached the bunker. It looks like a small cottage home made out of solid steel. Bombs can't affect his types of structure, and sturdy enough to handle most attack. When we got inside, we saw medic bags and lots of ammo. "do you guys see any radio, communicating device or something?" I questioned them. "Here!" shouted Cole. I looked and saw the turrets moving. "We can stay here and defend here. problem is supply" said Cole. "Great idea!" said Sebastian. "Ali, what do you think?" I asked her. "Can we really defend the base?" she asked me. "Hopefully. if not, we better be ready." I replied to her
"Sir! Executioners!" shouted Jeff. "great. Let's start the trap!" said Terence. Cole nodded, and grabbed the rope, pulling it down. The doors open and the Executioner saw us. Terence, Carrying a Electric Thunder shocker, said, "Its now or never". He aimed his weapon, and triggered the weapon. Electric shot out of the weapon, hitting an executioner, killing it. the other executioner draw out their weapons, and attacked. "NOW!" shouted Terence. Ali triggered the button, and Vapor bombs exploded, killing the rest of the executioner. "Nice job team!" said Cole. "Guys! second wave!" shouted Sebastian, pointing at a group of Pouncers. Pouncers are Jumping killers that, well, pounce to kill. "Give them the turrets! Cole, lock the doors!" shouted Ali. Cole did what she says, and Sebastian Triggered the turret like mad. It shot every Pouncer down, killing them. "Oh no" said Terence.
Terence saw a Diablo flying near the ruined buildings. Diablos are creatures who eats people's hearts the carries a scythe-like weapon. "Shoot or not?" asked Sebastian. "Remember last time? shooting it makes it bigger!" said Jeff. "You know, I was wondering, it says 6:00 in the morning in my watch, and its still night time. what?" said Gordon. "hmm, let me try something" I said, picing up the electric thunder shocker. I pulled the triggered and lightning flew, hitting the diablo. It screamed, burning and disappearing in thin air. "This aliens are affected to light. because light in my lightning shocker burned the diablo, it means-" I said. "Then we got an Ace against them" said Gordon
We finally reached the bunker. It looks like a small cottage home made out of solid steel. Bombs can't affect his types of structure, and sturdy enough to handle most attack. When we got inside, we saw medic bags and lots of ammo. "do you guys see any radio, communicating device or something?" I questioned them. "Here!" shouted Cole. I looked and saw the turrets moving. "We can stay here and defend here. problem is supply" said Cole. "Great idea!" said Sebastian. "Ali, what do you think?" I asked her. "Can we really defend the base?" she asked me. "Hopefully. if not, we better be ready." I replied to her
"Sir! Executioners!" shouted Jeff. "great. Let's start the trap!" said Terence. Cole nodded, and grabbed the rope, pulling it down. The doors open and the Executioner saw us. Terence, Carrying a Electric Thunder shocker, said, "Its now or never". He aimed his weapon, and triggered the weapon. Electric shot out of the weapon, hitting an executioner, killing it. the other executioner draw out their weapons, and attacked. "NOW!" shouted Terence. Ali triggered the button, and Vapor bombs exploded, killing the rest of the executioner. "Nice job team!" said Cole. "Guys! second wave!" shouted Sebastian, pointing at a group of Pouncers. Pouncers are Jumping killers that, well, pounce to kill. "Give them the turrets! Cole, lock the doors!" shouted Ali. Cole did what she says, and Sebastian Triggered the turret like mad. It shot every Pouncer down, killing them. "Oh no" said Terence.
Terence saw a Diablo flying near the ruined buildings. Diablos are creatures who eats people's hearts the carries a scythe-like weapon. "Shoot or not?" asked Sebastian. "Remember last time? shooting it makes it bigger!" said Jeff. "You know, I was wondering, it says 6:00 in the morning in my watch, and its still night time. what?" said Gordon. "hmm, let me try something" I said, picing up the electric thunder shocker. I pulled the triggered and lightning flew, hitting the diablo. It screamed, burning and disappearing in thin air. "This aliens are affected to light. because light in my lightning shocker burned the diablo, it means-" I said. "Then we got an Ace against them" said Gordon
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"Sir! I see two figures at the north of the bunker! they look human!" shouted Cole. I looked, and saw humans running towards the bunker. "Bring the doors down!" I shouted. Sebastian opened the doors, and in came two bloody soldiers. "What's your code team name? where are the others?" I asked them. "Sir, I am Captain Henry from Team Alpha, and this is Rody." Henry replied. "They were killed, but we were able to escape." said Rody. Sebastian closed the doors, and took the binoculars. He saw Lot's of things going around, But he saw something that will threaten them. "Sir, We got company. Three Diablo's coming this way, and I see ten pouncers,too" Sebastian told me. "Great. Ok guys, get the lightning rifles and you two, get the vapor bombs. We'll need them" I told them
Cole took the turrets, Ali Reloaded Ric's shotgun, Deniel readying his Lightning rifle, Henry and Rody reloading their AK-47, and I readying the vapor bombs. "Are we ready? this is the matter of life and death" I said. "Sir yes sir!" they replied to me. "then its Now or never. Sebastian! OPEN THE GATES!" I shouted. He opened it, and we saw lots of aliens approaching us. "GO GO GO!" Ali shouted. We charged and blasted our rifles. "Take this Weirdos!" I shouted. Bombs exploded and most aliens were vaporized. the turrets successfully kill a lot of pouncer, while Deniel killed a Diablo on his own. Me and Ali blasted pouncers, and Terence, Henry, and Rody killed a Raskal. "For Humans!" I shouted.
As we were about to win, a flying creature flew right in the battle field. It looks like a 20-foot being with three claws on each hand. The other alien retreated, and the creature charged at us. "Vaporized that thing!" Ali shouted. Cole pressed the trigger, and The vapor bombs we planted explode, yet the creature stand there unhurt. "what the?!" Cole said. Deniel blasted his rifle, hitting the creature in its head, but it is still unhurt. "What the hell is that thing!??" he asked fearfully. The creature raised its claws, and slashed it were Sebastian was standing. Luckily, He dodged the attack and blasted like mad. "C'mon already! Die die DIE!!" He shouted
Cole took the turrets, Ali Reloaded Ric's shotgun, Deniel readying his Lightning rifle, Henry and Rody reloading their AK-47, and I readying the vapor bombs. "Are we ready? this is the matter of life and death" I said. "Sir yes sir!" they replied to me. "then its Now or never. Sebastian! OPEN THE GATES!" I shouted. He opened it, and we saw lots of aliens approaching us. "GO GO GO!" Ali shouted. We charged and blasted our rifles. "Take this Weirdos!" I shouted. Bombs exploded and most aliens were vaporized. the turrets successfully kill a lot of pouncer, while Deniel killed a Diablo on his own. Me and Ali blasted pouncers, and Terence, Henry, and Rody killed a Raskal. "For Humans!" I shouted.
As we were about to win, a flying creature flew right in the battle field. It looks like a 20-foot being with three claws on each hand. The other alien retreated, and the creature charged at us. "Vaporized that thing!" Ali shouted. Cole pressed the trigger, and The vapor bombs we planted explode, yet the creature stand there unhurt. "what the?!" Cole said. Deniel blasted his rifle, hitting the creature in its head, but it is still unhurt. "What the hell is that thing!??" he asked fearfully. The creature raised its claws, and slashed it were Sebastian was standing. Luckily, He dodged the attack and blasted like mad. "C'mon already! Die die DIE!!" He shouted
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