Redemption (prequel to beyblades aren't just spinning tops)

Now this is a Prequel to my first story, Beyblades Aren't Just Spinning Tops. The story revolves around Sai Katawari, the protagonist. The council doesn't actually exist yet. Btw, Sai is actually more ghetto than usual.
Chapter 1!: The First Battle!
It's okay, but I don't really like it. It's mediocre.
(Jul. 31, 2012  2:03 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote: It's okay, but I don't really like it. It's mediocre.

You don't like anything...
(Jul. 31, 2012  2:34 AM)Shirayuki Wrote:
(Jul. 31, 2012  2:03 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote: It's okay, but I don't really like it. It's mediocre.

You don't like anything...

I like tons of stuff, and I dislike tons of stuff.
(Jul. 31, 2012  2:46 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote:
(Jul. 31, 2012  2:34 AM)Shirayuki Wrote:
(Jul. 31, 2012  2:03 AM)SoulEater57 Wrote: It's okay, but I don't really like it. It's mediocre.

You don't like anything...

I like tons of stuff, and I dislike tons of stuff.

Then my advice to you is that unless you are providing constructive criticism to the writer, do not post saying that the story was bad or whatever.