PattyCakeChamps! Poetry thread

Poll: Was my poetry ok ?

Yes
100.00%
2
No
0%
0
Total: 100% 2 vote(s)
Please Comment I am trying to get better.
Poison:
Love stings like poison.
When your heart brakes and you don't know what to do.
Remember this that I tell you.
Poison has an antidote.
Love has one to.
It is called moving on .....
Thank You I wrote this uhmmmm... # years back so when I was eleven none recent yet. I must be inspired
(May. 04, 2011  11:03 PM)PattyCakeChamp! Wrote: Thank You I wrote this uhmmmm... # years back so when I was eleven none recent yet. I must be inspired

Haha glad I inspired you. Nice job, well done...