New beyblade series idea

Characters Jimmy Main character bey flame gemios
Joey the kenta of this part bey grand fireblaze

Jimmy and Joey were both young 11 year old bladers on summer vacation they were both In the same town but they didn't ever know eachother existed on wendsday they bumped into eachother at the park luckily this was the world of beyblade so there were stadiums everywhere joey battled everyone in his way that included Jimmy today they both reached for their beys and launchers they counted down 3 2 1 Let It Rip! And launched the battle was really intense but Joey knew that if anyone was in trouble it was him he had to use his special move so Joey called out Special move Dragon burn blast! and it knocked jimmys bey over hard but the tilt turned around and uppercutted joey right back but Jimmy was still in trouble he had a special move but it would wipe all the trees in a half mile radius out but he went anyways Jimmy called Out Special move Tip Swinger then gemios shrunk to the floor of the stadium went towards the tip and when it got under the bey it popped up knocked the bey over and hurdled back down like a meteor the next thing anyone saw was wAs dust when it cleared up which only took about 10 seconds gemios was at the near end of it's spin but victory belonged to Jimmy that afternoon Joey and Jimmy became friends and both had a nice sleep knowing how amazing the battle was.
This belongs in the Your Creations forum.
This is not very creative at all. Also the chapter needs to be a bit longer. But other than that it is pretty good. Smile