Needs a name. Beystory.

Prologue.
‘’Please!!!’’ I begged to my mum, ’Please can I get the new beyblade!!!’’.Takara-Tomy recently released the new bey Frost Fenris A225 SA/SD and I really wanted it. ’’No!’’ my mum replied. ’Oh come on!’’. My mum is a brown haired turtle, literally! .She has a tint of green in her skin and as soon as dad died she always seems to creeps back into her shell, but in her case, her room when I want something. ’I promise I’ll stop bugging you!’’ I said hoping that would work.’’ Deal!’’ she said, here’s $33.24 buy it and keep the change, but no more beys after this!’’ she said. As soon as she handed me the money I was racing out the door. ’Thanks!’’ I said as I ran.
Is it good?