Hey guys I just finished the front cover for Issue 2!

can u post it?

Magazine 2 doesn't come out yet. sorry.

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Dang your good...even though this isn't a competition, I feel compelled to beat you! Lol, anyways, good job, like the edits.

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

Dang your good...even though this isn't a competition, I feel compelled to beat you! Lol, anyways, good job, like the edits.

Believe me, you have seen nothing yet. I just downloaded a new Photoshop. I am in NO WAY WHATSOVEVER in a competition. I'm doing this so people can get info. You know Magazines and Newspapers go hand in hand so we could become partners in the FUTURE.

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hey beybeybladestation whos the reviewer 4 the magazine

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if u wannna do a pokemon battle PM me i will not do triple battles at all (only flat lvl 50 battles) on balck/white my freind code is 2193-7681-3483 i used to have my partys at the top but then it EPIC FAILED

1. Capitalising every word in a sentence is a put-off.
2. Typo's even in the 2nd edition of the first issue is also a put-off.
3. Capitalisation of "TO" on first page is done on purpose?
4. "no one cared much too test against it" - too -> to
5. "This also means that frauds and scams will become less in the Bey Marketplace" - become less frequent?

All in all a pretty good read.

1. Capitalising every word in a sentence is a put-off.
2. Typo's even in the 2nd edition of the first issue is also a put-off.
3. Capitalisation of "TO" on first page is done on purpose?
4. "no one cared much too test against it" - too -> to
5. "This also means that frauds and scams will become less in the Bey Marketplace" - become less frequent?

All in all a pretty good read.

Thanks, though capitalizing was done deliberately, originally it looked so bad UnCapped that I decided to CAP key words.

TO was done on purpose

Too -> To - Yah I missed that one.

And the frequent one.

Thanks saying it's good

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My criticism is pretty much the grammar. Your words do get a bit cut off on the tops and bottoms of both ads and articles. Is it one ad per article? I only saw one ad in there. Could I be an editor for grammatical mistakes? I like this a lot more than the newspaper, very good job. Well done.

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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

My criticism is pretty much the grammar. Your words do get a bit cut off on the tops and bottoms of both ads and articles. Is it one ad per article? I only saw one ad in there. Could I be an editor for grammatical mistakes? I like this a lot more than the newspaper, very good job. Well done.

Well Ga, it's grammar that kept me up too. I'm going to use this awesome program I got to check grammar. Also this Issue was made way before this thread, while we were having the maintenance. Just wait for Issue 2's cover, it's amazing!

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1. I noticed a few grammar/spelling mistakes. Get an editor that checks the articles before the issue is published.
2. Follow a single theme for every page. Don't have page one orange, and then page 2 green and etc.

Other than that, its nice.

Dang your good...even though this isn't a competition, I feel compelled to beat you! Lol, anyways, good job, like the edits.

Believe me, you have seen nothing yet. I just downloaded a new Photoshop. I am in NO WAY WHATSOVEVER in a competition. I'm doing this so people can get info. You know Magazines and Newspapers go hand in hand so we could become partners in the FUTURE.

Ha! Wouldn't that be cool!

Anyways, looking forward to the next issue.

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"Life isn't about how hard you can hit;
it's about how hard you can get hit, and keep moving forward"
{[YT]} [|BEYBLOG|] (â—ŠSoG-My Bookâ—Š)/<DA>\

Medz
Ya I just downloaded a program for checking grammar + spelling

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Cool dude! I just can't wait for the next issue. Also, just something to add, but can you but an image background on the back?

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Cool dude! I just can't wait for the next issue. Also, just something to add, but can you but an image background on the back?

Yep! I did that for the 2nd issue!

Guys, the newest one available review will be of Horogium

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Congratulations on your first publish! I really like enjoyed this magazine.

Changes I would make:
Some of the color balances made it really really hard to read. Pink on Dark Blue

The first pages article could have been a little smaller. I saw the X and Check and was huh what is wrong with the left image??? After scrolling all the way down I read that it is no longer banned AHHHHH ! Got it! Maybe a caption above the images or something at least.

Again the text color under the Bey Market Place was too much for my eyes to handle. This happened a few other times in the article.

One of your staff writers names got cut off AHHH!

Anyway these are just my personal opinions.

I can't wait for the second issue.

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What? Pink? Your computer is different then. Weird. Well thanks! But it was pretty easy to understand the check and X, it said Libra Unbanned Underneath

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Like I said just my opinion...

I just tried to view it again but the link was broken just went to a black screen?

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Youtube Channel - BeybladeJapan Shop - WBO Shop - JapanLinked Social

***CONTESTS*** (Click to View)

Are you ready for the next give away!

Ok then here are the rules:

1) You gotta be a subscriber
2) You have to post a video response to my videos (A mention in the description is always nice)
3) You have to join the Beyblade Japan FaceBook page (Link is on my channel description)
Beyblade Japan Facebook Page http://on.fb.me/dQcdTy

What can I win? A brand new BB-108 Takara Tomy L Drago Destroy!!!!

Contest ends April 30th midnight GMT+9 Tokyo Time!
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FANG CONTEST
See this video to enter http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ew9M9Y_2P_U

3,2,1 Go Shoot!!!

I just tried to view it again but the link was broken just went to a black screen?

Are you sure? Try again! Weird... it's working fine. I guess it's just your computer

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Everyone, I am making a new post for the following reason, to introduce our new staff members:

Head Hasbro Editor: Lord Wolfblade
Side Hasbro/TT Reviewer: JonnB
Head Takara/Hasbro Editor: TheFusionRuler

Congrats to all!

Still need one FULL Head Editor for Takara Tomy!

~BeyBladeStation

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Is this head as in grammar? or as in performance? Although I do not buy blades often, I do learn quite a bit about TT blades. Of course, I'm sure there are much better candidates out there for the latter, but I would consider myself best for the former.

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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

uhh i would like to advertise my beyblade story, the link is in my sig, thx

Dracovianaius out

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Interesting for advertising can you advertise my beyblade team Galaxy wings on the forum australia

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Everyone, I am making a new post for the following reason, to introduce our new staff members:

Head Hasbro Editor: Lord Wolfblade
Side Hasbro/TT Reviewer: JonnB
Head Takara/Hasbro Editor: TheFusionRuler

Congrats to all!

Still need one FULL Head Editor for Takara Tomy!

~BeyBladeStation

I maybe can do the Full takara But maybe can you Pm me eith the details?

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Signature was too large. Read the rules.

Everyone, I am making a new post for the following reason, to introduce our new staff members:

Head Hasbro Editor: Lord Wolfblade
Side Hasbro/TT Reviewer: JonnB
Head Takara/Hasbro Editor: TheFusionRuler

Congrats to all!

Still need one FULL Head Editor for Takara Tomy!

~BeyBladeStation

isnt the TheFusionRuler ment 2 be the reviwer?

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if u wannna do a pokemon battle PM me i will not do triple battles at all (only flat lvl 50 battles) on balck/white my freind code is 2193-7681-3483 i used to have my partys at the top but then it EPIC FAILED

Everyone Above. Yes, theFusionRuler is the 2nd Reviewer!

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Nile, and Daconavicus, I'll see to your advertising!

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Hey Guys, I t is ME BeyBladestation, I am using my friends account due to some problems.
I have officially finished page 3! Yay!

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