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My story The journey of L-Drago and his master John

Dec. 20, 2010  3:38 AM
 
John walked down the alleyway to his house when all of a sudden a bey shot at him hitting him and knocking him down. Heh said Brent the school bully how do you like the force of my Cyber Bull 100HF. Its ok but wait till you see this said John as he took out his launcher and Loaded his Lightning L-Drago 100HF. The Bey he had recieved from his father before he left. 3 2 1 Let It Rip! L-Drago zoomed through the alleyway and shot straight at Cyber Bull Special Move Draconian Blast yelled John as his bey rammed
into Brent's Cyber Bull knocking it into pieces. Oh no screamed Brent as he looked up to get John but John had already made it home and was polishing his L-Drago. To be continued if anyone wants characters in this comment and ill add you just include your bey and what your character looks like P.S. all the parts have to be real.
Dec. 20, 2010  3:53 AM
 
I'm using him for my story, but anyone who wants to use him can. Ichiga Niguzaki, wears the same clothes as ryuga, but looks more like ginga with blue hair instead of red, his bey is icicle phoenix 145HF/S and the special move is icicle bomb, it creates icicles and shoots them at the opposing bey. give credit to kyuubi-master as he created Ichiga for my story
Dec. 20, 2010  4:04 AM
 
Chp 2 The next day John had slept in and his mom woke him up he checked his watch and saw that it was already 10:30. Aw man im going to be late for the tournament. Hurriedly he pulled on his jeans sneakers and his t-shirt that featured L-Drago's face on it. Bye mom said John as he ran to the beypark bye honey said his mom make me proud. At the tournament there were many good bladers but John grazed through them all with L-Drago. The time came for the final match with John facing Ichiga Niguzaki and his bey
Icicle Phoenix 145HF/S. John studied his opponent who looked to be the same age as him he wore A white coat which flew behind him like a cape black shirt and black pants and Big blue hair that shined like his beys clear wheel. He looked tough. You ready shouted Ichiga. Never Better yelled John. 3 2 1 Let It Rip! their two beys flew in the stadium clashing together furiously. Special move Icicle Bomb yelled Ichiga. Suddenly icicles formed on Ichiga's bey and began launching at L-Drago.
Icicle Phoenix 145HF/S. John studied his opponent who looked to be the same age as him he wore A white coat which flew behind him like a cape black shirt and black pants and Big blue hair that shined like his beys clear wheel. He looked tough. You ready shouted Ichiga. Never Better yelled John. 3 2 1 Let It Rip! their two beys flew in the stadium clashing together furiously. Special move Icicle Bomb yelled Ichiga. Suddenly icicles formed on Ichiga's bey and began launching at L-Drago.
Icicle Phoenix 145HF/S. John studied his opponent who looked to be the same age as him he wore A white coat which flew behind him like a cape black shirt and black pants and Big blue hair that shined like his beys clear wheel. He looked tough. You ready shouted Ichiga. Never Better yelled John. 3 2 1 Let It Rip! their two beys flew in the stadium clashing together furiously. Special move Icicle Bomb yelled Ichiga. Suddenly icicles formed on Ichiga's bey and began launching at L-Drago.
L-Drago was hit hard and lost some stamina but John quickly retaliated buy using a Special move called Dragons Lightning it then began to rain down lightning all over Phoenix but Phoenix stayed strong. The two beys then clashed against each other suddenly two bey spirits of a Dragon and Phoenix rose from the beys. The Dragon had three heads and was a purplish hue while the Phoenix looked like it was on fire but frozen. Go L-Drago screamed John while Ichiga screamed go Phoenix there was a huge explosion and
L-Drago was hit hard and lost some stamina but John quickly retaliated buy using a Special move called Dragons Lightning it then began to rain down lightning all over Phoenix but Phoenix stayed strong. The two beys then clashed against each other suddenly two bey spirits of a Dragon and Phoenix rose from the beys. The Dragon had three heads and was a purplish hue while the Phoenix looked like it was on fire but frozen. Go L-Drago screamed John while Ichiga screamed go Phoenix there was a huge explosion and
when the dust cleared Phoenix was on its side with L-Drago spinning around it. Ichiga shamed by his loss fell on his knees when he looked up he saw a hand posed ready to shake his. End of Chp 2
Dec. 20, 2010  5:27 AM
 
Chp 3 Hey that was a great battle said John as he shook Ichiga's hand why dont you come with me up to the prize counter to collect my prize. Sure said Ichiga and they went to the counter. John recieved 4,000 beypoints for winning the tourney and got a RF performance tip. Yes i finally got the part i needed as he took of his HF and put his RF on L-Drago. Here said John as he gave Ichiga half of the points as he only needed the 2,000. Why dont you join me on my journey i need a team to compete in the World
Tournament your good and you will get a lot of points. Sure said Ichiga but we need a name. How about Team Cosmos said John sounds great said Ichiga and they began their journey. End of Chp 3
Tournament your good and you will get a lot of points. Sure said Ichiga but we need a name. How about Team Cosmos said John sounds great said Ichiga and they began their journey. End of Chp 3
Tournament your good and you will get a lot of points. Sure said Ichiga but we need a name. How about Team Cosmos said John sounds great said Ichiga and they began their journey. End of Chp 3
If you want to be a members of Team Cosmos and want a character tell me now because im continuing it tomorrow.
If you want to be a members of Team Cosmos and want a character tell me now because im continuing it tomorrow.
Dec. 20, 2010  5:37 AM
 
This is almost as bad as Blader: Kenny's stories, by the way, like Fightning Animals ... Try at least adding proper punctuation, such as : " " , ...
Dec. 20, 2010  5:55 AM
 
Alright thanks.
Dec. 20, 2010  6:09 AM
 
Nice Job!!!!!!!! Awesome story, I like chapter 1 when he defeats the bully.
Dec. 20, 2010  6:13 AM
 
Well thanks Mfb Unboxer hey you want a character.
Dec. 20, 2010  6:51 AM
 
YeaH! Heres my character:

His name is Horu Mizuki, he wears a black shirt with red stripes, wears the pants that Ginga has that has the launcher Case and all that stuff that Ginga has on his pants, wears shoes just like Tsubasa's, he has Nile's hair, black eyes, Black with Red gloves, and he wears a Ninja Face cover but it still shows his eyes and hair. His Beyblade is called Galaxy Horuseus 105D, it is colored the same as the anime except for the track and bottom they are colored Black swirled with Red and Blue, the bottom is colored plain blue. Its special move is called Galaxy Sphere and it makes the beyblade go to an illusion in the Galaxy and then it cant move and Galaxy Horuseus attacks it 1000 times full speed faster than jet or anything thats very fast.
Dec. 20, 2010  1:29 PM
 
Alright ill put you in at around 4:30 or something because i have school today Youll be a strong rival to John and youll be a member of Team Cosmos.
Dec. 20, 2010  6:41 PM
 
Thanks! Ill add you to my buddy list. I am looking forward to r4ead the story, by the way I hope you make more story. Thanks again!
Dec. 20, 2010  11:07 PM
 
Chp 4 The Second Tournament In Ichiga's eyes. We finally made it to the second tournament. John says its thanks to me, but i think he deserves the most credit. Well its time for the first battle lets see how i do. 3 2 1 Let It Rip! "Prepare to be defeated" cried Usa my opponent " My Flame Pegasus DF145WD will defeat you". "Not so fast" I cried "special move Icicle Bomb". The icicles struck Flame Pegasus severely lowering its stamina. "Alright then time for my special move go Inferno Starblast Attack" cried
Usa. That very instant Flame Pegasus caught on fire and soared into the sky then it came crashing down on top of Phoenix i thought it was all over until i saw Flame Pegasus's wheel had gotten stuck into Phoenix. I saw this as my chance to win and used my special move sending Pegasus flying out of the stadium giving me victory. End of part 1 Chp 4
Usa. That very instant Flame Pegasus caught on fire and soared into the sky then it came crashing down on top of Phoenix i thought it was all over until i saw Flame Pegasus's wheel had gotten stuck into Phoenix. I saw this as my chance to win and used my special move sending Pegasus flying out of the stadium giving me victory. End of part 1 Chp 4
Usa. That very instant Flame Pegasus caught on fire and soared into the sky then it came crashing down on top of Phoenix i thought it was all over until i saw Flame Pegasus's wheel had gotten stuck into Phoenix. I saw this as my chance to win and used my special move sending Pegasus flying out of the stadium giving me victory. End of part 1 Chp 4
Usa. That very instant Flame Pegasus caught on fire and soared into the sky then it came crashing down on top of Phoenix i thought it was all over until i saw Flame Pegasus's wheel had gotten stuck into Phoenix. I saw this as my chance to win and used my special move sending Pegasus flying out of the stadium giving me victory. End of part 1 Chp 4
Usa. That very instant Flame Pegasus caught on fire and soared into the sky then it came crashing down on top of Phoenix i thought it was all over until i saw Flame Pegasus's wheel had gotten stuck into Phoenix. I saw this as my chance to win and used my special move sending Pegasus flying out of the stadium giving me victory. End of part 1 Chp 4
Usa. That very instant Flame Pegasus caught on fire and soared into the sky then it came crashing down on top of Phoenix i thought it was all over until i saw Flame Pegasus's wheel had gotten stuck into Phoenix. I saw this as my chance to win and used my special move sending Pegasus flying out of the stadium giving me victory. End of part 1 Chp 4
Usa. That very instant Flame Pegasus caught on fire and soared into the sky then it came crashing down on top of Phoenix i thought it was all over until i saw Flame Pegasus's wheel had gotten stuck into Phoenix. I saw this as my chance to win and used my special move sending Pegasus flying out of the stadium giving me victory. End of part 1 Chp 4
Usa. That very instant Flame Pegasus caught on fire and soared into the sky then it came crashing down on top of Phoenix i thought it was all over until i saw Flame Pegasus's wheel had gotten stuck into Phoenix. I saw this as my chance to win and used my special move sending Pegasus flying out of the stadium giving me victory. End of part 1 Chp 4
Chp 4 part 2 The Second Tournament In John's eyes. I had beaten my first two opponents and was getting ready to battle in the semifinal battle when my opponent came up and introduced himself to me. His name was Horu Mizuki. He wore a black shirt with strange red stripes across it and pants that had all his bey accessories on the belt. He wore a black and red ninja mask that only revealed his dark black eyes. He also had red and black gloves, cool shoes, and great hair. He told me i was going to lose because
Horuseus was going to crush my bey. I of course said bring it on. 3 2 1 Let It Rip! His bey was awesome it was Galaxy Horuseus 105D. It began to mercissley attack my L-Drago and got worse when he used his special move Galaxy Sphere. Our beys got warped into a space like area i commanded L-Drago to attack but it couldnt move. Then his bey appeared glowing and attacking my bey so fast i couldnt see where it was coming from. It all appeared over for me because L-Drago had nearly stopped spinning then i had an
Horuseus was going to crush my bey. I of course said bring it on. 3 2 1 Let It Rip! His bey was awesome it was Galaxy Horuseus 105D. It began to mercissley attack my L-Drago and got worse when he used his special move Galaxy Sphere. Our beys got warped into a space like area i commanded L-Drago to attack but it couldnt move. Then his bey appeared glowing and attacking my bey so fast i couldnt see where it was coming from. It all appeared over for me because L-Drago had nearly stopped spinning then i had an
idea to increase my spin so i used my new special move Gravity Reverser! It was a move only a left spinning bey could use as it reversed the airflow the other direction allowing my bey to gain spin and the other bey to lose spin. It was working and soon his bey had almost stopped spinning then i commanded L-Drago to attack using Draconian Blast which knocked Horuseus out of the stadium giving me the win. End of Chp 4 Howd you like it Mfb Unboxer?
Chp 5 The Finals A Tag Team Battle! Hello bladers this is Blader DJ here to announce the pairing for the final match witch will be a tag team battle. The pairs are John and Ichiga the rising stars and the founders of Team Cosmos VS Fukaba and Jin the twin brothers of the century lets get down to business. 3 2 1 Let It Rip! "John look they have Storm Gemios 100HF and Rock Gemios C145B" said Ichiga "they'll be tough to beat". "Special move Twin Power" cried Fukaba and Jin in unision. Then their beys started
Dec. 21, 2010  12:08 AM
 
moving next to each other sharing their power then they ran towards our beys doing serious damage to ours. So i said they used a combo attack so why dont we try combining your Icicle Bomb and my Gravity Reverser so that the icicles will shoot the other way. Ichiga said sure. So we did then the Bey Spirits of our beys came out and did a wonderful dance in unision and knocked our oppenents beys out of the stadium and with that we won. After we had recieved our prizes we were confronted by Fukaba, Jin, Usa,
and Horu who said they wanted to join Team Cosmos we said yes. End of Chp 5 So now they have a team of 6 hmm what could happen now? Also if anyone would like to help me with the story pm me.
and Horu who said they wanted to join Team Cosmos we said yes. End of Chp 5 So now they have a team of 6 hmm what could happen now? Also if anyone would like to help me with the story pm me.
and Horu who said they wanted to join Team Cosmos we said yes. End of Chp 5 So now they have a team of 6 hmm what could happen now? Also if anyone would like to help me with the story pm me.
and Horu who said they wanted to join Team Cosmos we said yes. End of Chp 5 So now they have a team of 6 hmm what could happen now? Also if anyone would like to help me with the story pm me.
Dec. 21, 2010  12:22 AM
 
here is my character
Name Dain ?
looks like my avatar
beyblade burn pegasus 125f
speacial move: burn blast pegasus blazes in fire
dark move pegasus blinding wing 100 fury cactches on fire and hits the other bey 100 times
affiliation hero
Dec. 21, 2010  12:25 AM
 
@ scipio123 are you good or bad
Dec. 21, 2010  12:26 AM
 
i ment to put leone not pegasus
so it should be burn leone125f
im good
Dec. 21, 2010  12:28 AM
 
Awesome I liked it!
By The Way LDRAGO KING, you spelled "Which" to "Witch" on Chapter 5.
Dec. 21, 2010  12:41 AM
 
Thanks Mfb Unboxer and scipio123 youll be introduced in the seventh chapter.
Dec. 21, 2010  5:54 AM
 
Chp 6 The Mysterious Stranger "Well guys were on our way to the third tournament as a team" said John. "Yeah and hopefully i can get some good training in so one day i can beat you John" said Horu. "Halt" said a voice from nowhere. All of a sudden a hooded figure jumped down in front of us and pointed at John and said i challenge you to a battle! "I accept your challenge" said John. 3 2 1 Let It Rip! The stranger's bey was Burn Leone 125F it looked tough. "Let me start this off go L-Drago attack" cried John
Dec. 21, 2010  5:59 AM
 
See, that looks a lot better than when there was a serious lack of proper punctuation for speech.
Dec. 21, 2010  6:02 AM
 
L-Drago stuck Leone but it did not move. "Surprised" said the stranger. "Now its my turn go special move Burn Blast"! yelled the stranger. Suddenly Leone burst into flames and charged into L-Drago knocking it back and severely lowering its spin. "Woah that was powerful!" said John astonished. But can you handle this? " Special move Gravity Reverser" cried John! "Heh that wont work take this Dark Move Flaming Leone Blast 100 Fury". yelled the stranger! As he held his hands straightforward two balls of flame
formed in his hands and went to Leone then Leone's Bey Spirit came out full of flames and started attacking L-Drago."Does it ever stop?" cried John. "Not until it hits 100 times" yelled the stranger! By the time it was over L-Drago had already stopped spinning and its facebolt had cracked. "No that was my only memory of my father" cried John! as his beys spirit soared into the sky out of sight. "Here kid" said the stranger tossing a heavy object at John. "What is it?" John asked. "Its a metal facebolt with
formed in his hands and went to Leone then Leone's Bey Spirit came out full of flames and started attacking L-Drago."Does it ever stop?" cried John. "Not until it hits 100 times" yelled the stranger! By the time it was over L-Drago had already stopped spinning and its facebolt had cracked. "No that was my only memory of my father" cried John! as his beys spirit soared into the sky out of sight. "Here kid" said the stranger tossing a heavy object at John. "What is it?" John asked. "Its a metal facebolt with
formed in his hands and went to Leone then Leone's Bey Spirit came out full of flames and started attacking L-Drago."Does it ever stop?" cried John. "Not until it hits 100 times" yelled the stranger! By the time it was over L-Drago had already stopped spinning and its facebolt had cracked. "No that was my only memory of my father" cried John! as his beys spirit soared into the sky out of sight. "Here kid" said the stranger tossing a heavy object at John. "What is it?" John asked. "Its a metal facebolt with
it you can use a dark move also it makes your bey heavier upgrading its attack and defense take it youve earned it" said the stranger. John screwed it on his bey and instantly L-Drago's spirit dived down from the sky and in the facebolt which then formed on it a L-Drago symbol. "L-Dragos back yes thank by the way whats your name" said John. "My name is to be continued End of Chp 6 Howd you all like it?
it you can use a dark move also it makes your bey heavier upgrading its attack and defense take it youve earned it" said the stranger. John screwed it on his bey and instantly L-Drago's spirit dived down from the sky and in the facebolt which then formed on it a L-Drago symbol. "L-Dragos back yes thank by the way whats your name" said John. "My name is to be continued End of Chp 6 Howd you all like it?
Chp 7 The Surprise At The Tournament. The stranger had revealed himself as Dain and finally took off his hood and showed his fair dark hair to us. Dain also helped John train with his dark move. The team spent the 3 days before the tournament training extensively and they were all ready to use there heavily trained beys to win and Dain had decided to join the team. "Welcome bladers this is Blader DJ welcome to the third tounament, if you all were planning to use your beloved beys we have a surprise for you
you all will be using beys you make from parts that we have in stock well bladers make your way to the parts booth and start picking. "What we cant use our own beys" cried the team in unison! "Oh well lets just take this tourney slow then gang" said John. They all agreed and went to the parts booth. By the time for the tournament to start John had Storm Pegasus 100RF Ichiga Had Burn Phoenix 145MS Dain had Rock Leone D125WB Horu had Mercury Anubis 85WF Usa had Flame Orso C145S and Zukaba and Jin had
you all will be using beys you make from parts that we have in stock well bladers make your way to the parts booth and start picking. "What we cant use our own beys" cried the team in unison! "Oh well lets just take this tourney slow then gang" said John. They all agreed and went to the parts booth. By the time for the tournament to start John had Storm Pegasus 100RF Ichiga Had Burn Phoenix 145MS Dain had Rock Leone D125WB Horu had Mercury Anubis 85WF Usa had Flame Orso C145S and Zukaba and Jin had
Earth Gemios DF145 SF and Infinity Gemios 125 FS. Let the tounament begin. They all made it to the final battle in which the tounament had another surprise a battle royale The matchups were John Ichiga Dain Usa Horu Zukaba Jin and a mysterious blader named Alexis. 3 2 1 Let It Rip! The beys started clashing together All of the bladers commanded their beys to attack and in the attack the only beys left spinning were John Dain Jin and Alexis whose bey was Dark Aquario 100SF whom was vicious. Soon Aquario had
knocked Anubis and Gemios out of the stadium. Leaving only it and Pegasus. After a long and furious battle John won and Alexis dissapeared. Well bladers the prize for this tourney is a two for the first is to be able to compete in the last tournament and the second is the beys you used today only bladers who made it to the finale though this is Blader DJ sighning off End Of Chp7 So the bladers made it to the final tounament what could be waiting for them ther and what is up with Alexis?
Dec. 21, 2010  7:36 AM
 
nice chapter this isa pretty good story so far.
Dec. 21, 2010  2:33 PM
 
Thanks
Dec. 21, 2010  2:42 PM
 
heres my character
name jake
bey galaxy bull 105 sd
and he is bad and starts the dark force and steals beys
Dec. 21, 2010  3:01 PM
 
Poison Serpant7 ill put you in next chapter.
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