Okay, first let me start off by saying that I respect anyone who is confident enough to sing and then post it out on the internet. I also know that Paradise is very hard to sing (like pretty much any song by Coldplay) and just you being able to sing it to that standard is pretty good.
Definitely, your singing needs work (just fine-tuning the pitch and stuff), but I'm no professional so don't take it too harshly from me. But the parts that you do sing well are very good.
I really think it's a great thing you're doing here and I would never have the courage to do it. Please keep it up. I will definitely listen to any songs you decide to sing next.
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