I got new story with chapters or i dunno.

Its call B.O.D.D meaning Beywheelz on the Destroyer Dome, I make my own, new beywheelz parts.

Characters (Click to View)

Jason Ramirez
Age:13
Bey:Crushing Fang Dragoon
Typepeed
Special Moves:Bite Blade,Advance Frame, Dragoon's Fang

A blader who has a dream to be the number 1 blader on Metal Bey City, together with Crushing Fang Dragoon, nothing breaks them apart.


Kaizer Ionis
Age:13
Bey:Blasting Chain Strength
Typeower
Special Moves:Chain Drive, Machina Aura, Suckerpunch

A blader who is alone and heartless, lost his parent when he was 3, adopted by his uncle, Kaizer is Jason's most fierce opponent.



Jessica Johnson
Age:13
Bey:N/A


Is Jason's childhood friend, who has great knowledge of science and math, she uses both math and science for beywheelz.



Rayzor Ken
Age:13
Bey:Flashing Sword Knight
Typeower
Special Moves:Grand Fleet, Iron Blade, Eye of the Knight.


Is Kaizer's nephew, helps him when he is trouble, has great blading skills.

Now its for the chapters.

Chapter 1 (Click to View)

"Go Crushing Fang Dragoon!" Jason shouts!
"Dragoon circles around the Destroyer Dome or a.k.a Sphere O97" said the DJ
Dragoons hits the opponent's bey which ends in a crash out
"Dragoon makes an epic blow!!! and Jason with Dragoon won the match"
crowd cheers!!!!!
Kaizer arrives then says "Such a weakling" then he says "nothing beats my Blasting Chain Strength"
"Lets see what you got!"said Jason.

At the Destroyer Dome...

"3...2...1...Let it Rip!!" Both excellent bladers shout and launch their beys!
Dragoons circles around the Destroyer Dome at high speed!
But then Strength Defends!
"You know Jason you dont got any power more than mine!" Kaizer said
"Its because your a Power-Type and Im a Speed-Type user"Jason shouted
"Cant catch me!"Jason shouted
Dragoon's speed beats Strength!
"Go Strength!Special Move, Chain Drive!"Kaizer shouts
Dragoon's surface breaks the Dragoon and Jason lose
"And the winner is!,um the winner is..who are you anyway?" the DJ asked
"Kaizer Ionis" Kaizer answers "Then the winner is Kaizer Ionis!!!Give him a round of applause!

Thats all folks better wait.
Sorry.....

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The grammar could use some work. Im a bit confused, is this beywheelz, destroyer dome, or beywheelz in a destroyer dome? Well, not a bad start

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Thank you dude.....I was inspired from your beywheelz story, pretty cool.....

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Thanks Still wondering though, is this beywheelz in a destryer dome?

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

It looks pretty cool, but about the characters, I don't know much about BeyWheelz, but aren't the people with them called Wheelers?

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Was warned for liking T.K. more then me.

oops hehe, its beywheelz on the destroyer dome, it looks radical.

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