"It looks like I have an strong afinity for falling down holes"

Made this for one of my best friends, any comments/suggestions appreciated! I want to make it look as good as possible! Also, I do know that Sheena's hair is a different colour on the avatar than the signature, I'll fix that later.
[Image: sheenaavatarreb3.png]
[Image: sheenasignatureepngki3.png]
I think you should blend the font in more in the first one or have the stroke on the font more transparent.

The second one is cool, but the "Sheena" somewhat bugs me. Maybe have it more rounded off?
G Wrote:I think you should blend the font in more in the first one or have the stroke on the font more transparent.

The second one is cool, but the "Sheena" somewhat bugs me. Maybe have it more rounded off?

Yeah, there is a bunch of things I need to fix in the avatar. I made it up really quickly.

Rounded off? What do you mean exactly?
I should have said more curved, my bad. Like the font looks too straight foreword and it sticks out form Sheena's sleeve. Maybe have the "She" part of Sheena follow the sleeve's crease slightly.
Oh, I see what you mean. I might try that out.