Any suggestions? I edited it a lot.

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It's good, but just mention that Cyber's original release was a red painted Metal Wheel, and try to make the last four sentences of the Cyber section more "fluid"- Try to connect them or reword them so they don't sound like a fragment. (it isn't, just couldn't think of a good word)

After that, add that Cyber is outclassed and mention what outclass it.

It's good, but just mention that Cyber's original release was a red painted Metal Wheel, and try to make the last four sentences of the Cyber section more "fluid"- Try to connect them or reword them so they don't sound like a fragment. (it isn't, just couldn't think of a good word)

After that, add that Cyber is outclassed and mention what outclass it.

Done.

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You missed the "and" when you put Cyber is too thin and light.

Make the the last sentence complete - "Lightning, Gravity, and Meteo are better choices | for attack"

The stamina of Cyber should be reworded into its own sentence. Or, I'll do it for you.

"Having no use in Stamina because of its recoil, Cyber is outclassed in all fields."

Then add the "Lightning Gravity" thing and you're done in my opinion.

You missed the "and" when you put Cyber is too thin and light.

Make the the last sentence complete - "Lightning, Gravity, and Meteo are better choices | for attack"

The stamina of Cyber should be reworded into its own sentence. Or, I'll do it for you.

"Having no use in Stamina because of its recoil, Cyber is outclassed in all fields."

Then add the "Lightning Gravity" thing and you're done in my opinion.

Done.

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However, you should put that Cyber lacks smash attack because it has no spikes or notches, in order to be specific enough. Other than thatyou're really done.

Also, you should change your one-worded posts, since they kinda count as spam. Just tellin' you.

However, you should put that Cyber lacks smash attack because it has no spikes or notches, in order to be specific enough. Other than thatyou're really done.

Also, you should change your one-worded posts, since they kinda count as spam. Just tellin' you.

Fixed. Now I think it's done.

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Yep, it is finish now. Lets wait for approval. Good Job.

Metal Wheel: Cyber
Weight: 29.46 grams

Cyber is styled like a HWS version of the Metal System Pegasis. It's original release is painted a crimson red. It has a three "winged" design, similar to the orignal Pegasis wheel and the Storm Metal Wheel. However, it lacks Smash Attack due to it's bad design with no spikes or protrusions, it lacks the proper slopes for Upper Attack and it is too thin and light to have any competitive use for Attack or Defense. Having no use in Stamina because of its recoil, Cyber is outclassed in all fields.
Overall, Lightning, Gravity and Vulcan are better choices for Attack.

This paragraph needs work.
It's like this:
It is red. It's has a shiny colour. It is round. It spins in right spin.

Drop the stuff about upper attack. Upper attack has not been useable in any MFB combo so far, and is a long way from being useable. So there's no point In writing it, otherwise we would have to add it to every article where the wheel has a tiny bit of slope.

just to add to other versions this draft is off the tt bey but as said in your draft it was released with a game hasbro also released this bey with a game with a MF just thought you might want to add that some where

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Metal Wheel: Cyber
Weight: 29.46 grams

Cyber is styled like a HWS version of the Metal System Pegasis. It's original release is painted a crimson red. It has a three "winged" design, similar to the orignal Pegasis wheel and the Storm Metal Wheel. However, it lacks Smash Attack due to it's bad design with no spikes or protrusions, it lacks the proper slopes for Upper Attack and it is too thin and light to have any competitive use for Attack or Defense. Having no use in Stamina because of its recoil, Cyber is outclassed in all fields.
Overall, Lightning, Gravity and Vulcan are better choices for Attack.

This paragraph needs work.
It's like this:
It is red. It's has a shiny colour. It is round. It spins in right spin.

Drop the stuff about upper attack. Upper attack has not been useable in any MFB combo so far, and is a long way from being useable. So there's no point In writing it, otherwise we would have to add it to every article where the wheel has a tiny bit of slope.

Fixed.

just to add to other versions this draft is off the tt bey but as said in your draft it was released with a game hasbro also released this bey with a game with a MF just thought you might want to add that some where

Added.

Now it's ready for approval.

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Actually, drop the whole "However" in the Cyber secttion, since the sentence before it has no relation. Split the Cyber section in two, with the first paragraph about appearance and the second about performance.

Also change the early wording of some of the sentences, as they start out with "it". Make them connect, or do something else with them.

Actually, drop the whole "However" in the Cyber secttion, since the sentence before it has no relation. Split the Cyber section in two, with the first paragraph about appearance and the second about performance.

Also change the early wording of some of the sentences, as they start out with "it". Make them connect, or do something else with them.

Fixed. I also fixed 2 "its, it's" mistakes in the Cyber section.

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You still didn't fix the ugly sentences like what I wrote before.

It is red. It is metal. It is for attack. It sucks.
Fix that.

Yeah, starting off three straight sentences with "it" isn't really good.

Is that better?

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The sentence about Cyber's poor smash seems out of place. Use a "clear topic opener".

Metal Wheel: Cyber
Weight: 29.46 grams

Cyber is styled like a HWS version of the Metal System Pegasis with a three "winged" design. Its original release is painted a crimson red.
Like the original Pegasis wheel, it was meant for Attack. However, t lacks Smash Attack due to its bad design with no spikes or protrusions and it is too thin and light to have any competitive use for Attack or Defense. Having no use in Stamina because of its recoil, Cyber is outclassed in all fields.
Overall, Lightning, Gravity and Vulcan are better choices for Attack.

Make the "t" into "it".

Also, under the 100 Section, add a Defense Combo, look in Diamond's Thread about it. I'll try to find one.

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I think it's done now.

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Use in Stamina Customization
100 can be put to use in the custom Scythe Kronos 100EDS.

Use in Attack Customization
100 can be put to top-tier use in the combo MF Blitz Unicorno 100R2F.

Use in Destabilizer Customization
100 can be used in the Destabilizer Flame Cancer 100SF.

Use in Defense Customization
100 can be put to go use in the low track defense customization, MF-H Basalt Bull 100RS.

I was about to write an article on this bey, but I saw this draft, and I think it is ready to be put on the Beywiki, after those combo changes are made.

Note: Cyber Pegasis 100HF was originally released with the Nintendo DS game Metal Fight Beyblade Bakuten Cyber Pegasis.

Face: Pegasis

The Face depicts Pegasus, one of the 88 constellations in space. It was redesigned for this model.

Clear Wheel: Pegasis
Weight: 2.9 grams

The original release of Pegasis is a blue transparent plastic wheel. In this release, however, it is completely clear. The edges of the Clear Wheel are shaped in a wing like pattern, each ending in a pointed ‘head’ shape, representing the body form of Pegasis, the symbol its design is influenced by.

Metal Wheel: Cyber
Weight: 29.46 grams

Cyber is essentially the re-molded Pegasis wheel intended to be used in the Hybrid Wheel System format including a Clear Wheel, unfortunately the contact points are a tad more inward than the original Pegasis Metal Wheel and the weight is 7 grams lighter which is the real problem with this Wheel making it essentially useless for attack. Perhaps if it was released with the original weight and a Clear Wheel on top of that, it would have been more successful

Use in Attack Customization
If you somehow don't have access to competitive wheels, MF Cyber Unicorno 145RF is a viable Attack combo.

Track: 100
Weight: 1.0 grams

This track is currently the third lowest track available, but is outclassed in terms of Attack and Stamina by the 85 and 90 Tracks. 100 usually has no problem with floor scrapes, and while it is generally an outclassed part, is still competitively viable, particularly in Attack customizations where it is able to make good contact with most opposing Beyblades.

Use in Stamina Customization
100 can be put to use in the custom Earth Bull 100WD.

Use in Attack Customization
100 can be put to top-tier use in the combo MF Lightning L-Drago 100RF.

Use in Defense Customization
100 can be put to use in the MF-H Basalt Bull 100RS.

Bottom: HF
Weight: 0.5 grams

HF has a very similar movement speed to that of F, with the main difference being a slight Stamina improvement due to the hole in the middle of the tip. But, with this comes the detriment of even less grip to the stadium floor than F, and also increased fragility. It has been outclassed by many Bottoms, including RF, R2F, LRF, MF and XF.

Other Versions
MF Cyber Pegasis 100HF - Hasbro DS Ver. with red Metal Face
Cyber Pegasis 105F - Hasbro ‘Legend’ series (Blue Clear Wheel, Cyber unpainted)

Overall
Cyber Pegasis is comprised of outclassed parts, 100 once had a time to shine but that time has ended with more prevalent tracks such as TH170 and 230 making it not a very competitive option. Cyber was a disappointment, if design a bit differently it would have exceeded its Metal System predecessor but as it is, it is completely unreliable and an overall useless wheel compared to VariAres, Blitz or Lightning. There is little to no reason to buy this Beyblade aside from collection purposes.

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"riginal Pegasis Metal Wheel and the weight is 7 grams lighter which is the real problem with this Wheel, making it essentially useless for attack." added comma. 100 is also quite versatile due to low height and no problem with floor scrapes.

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Face: Pegasis

The Face depicts Pegasus, one of the 88 constellations in space. It was however completely redesigned for this model. Cyber Pegasis’ Face features a a technological, cybernetic, profile-view of a Pegasus.


Metal Wheel: Cyber
Weight: 29.46 grams

Cyber is styled like a Hybrid Wheel System version of the Metal System Pegasis with a three-winged design. Its original release is painted a crimson red.
Like the original Pegasis Wheel, it was meant for Attack, notably Force Smash. However, in fact, Cyber is even more useless than Pegasis, which at least enjoyed momentary use in competitive Attack types. This Hybrid Wheel System version is lighter than Pegasis in order to compensate for the Clear Wheel on top of it, and its wings are ever so slightly rounder and not as pronounced, which ruins its potential of achieving decent attacks. Having no use in Stamina nor in Defense because of its Recoil, Cyber is outclassed in all fields.
Overall, it should be one of the last choices for Attack.

Use in Attack Customization
If you somehow don't have access to competitive Wheels, MF Cyber ____ 145RF is a viable Attack combo, mostly in Hasbro metagames.

Overall
Cyber Pegasis 100HF doesn’t have many good parts other than the Spin Track “100" which can be obtained in more useful Beyblades like Lightning LDrago 100HF. '''There is little to no reason to purchase this Beyblade, aside from collection purposes.'''

Fix 'Pegasus' under Face: Pegasis, it's in the first few words of the sentence.

Fix the word 'Hyrbid' into Hybrid, second line, under Cyber.

Otherwise, it looks fine and ready to go to me.

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How do I still have 17th most posts here...?

Well, it does represent Pegasus : "Pegasis" is a voluntary mispelling by TAKARA-TOMY, but the actual winged horse is called Pegasus.