Hi, so i wanted to post my Beyblade Fanfiction that I've been working on for like 4 months now. I hope you enjoy Chapter 1!
Beyblade Burst
A boat sails into frame
???: “Nice, I’m finally here!”
???: “Japan! Birthplace of Beyblade!”
The boat docks and ??? runs to the ladder down
???: “3..2..1..Go Shoot!”
Two bladers were battling in the park.
Baki: “I’ll beat you, my bey Gulity Fafnir will burst your bey instantly!”
Benny: “No you won’t, Prominence Belial, outspin him!”
Baki’s Guilty Fafnir then hit Benny’s Bey into the sky and it burst.
Baki: “See I won!”
??? walked up to Baki
???: “You like to Beyblade?”
Baki: “Yeah I love beyblading!”
???: “Well I’m Keith, and this is my bey Astral Ragnurok!”
Then on the T.Vs, BC Sol’s headquarters was shown.
Baki and Keith: “BC Sol, I’ll join their team one day.”
Valt walked into frame.
Keith (His Thoughts): “Valt! He’s so cool, one day I want to battle him!
Valt: “Yo what’s up?”
Valt: “I came with news about the blading world!”
Baki and Keith stood there ready for the news.
Valt grabbed his Beyblade, Holy Valkyrie
Valt: “A new Beyblade system has been announced! The Mystical System!”
Baki and Keith: *Gasp*
Valt took Valkyrie apart and placed it on the table in front of him.
Valt: “There are five parts in the Beyblade, the Core, the Blade, the Armor, the Disc, and the Driver.”
Keith looked at Valkyrie, I want to make a bey like that!
Baki looked at Valkyrie, I want to make a bey like that and Boa’s bey!
Valt then put Valkyrie back together.
Valt: “Now go out there and make some Mystic Beys!”
Then the T.V turned off, and Baki and Keith were excited ready to make their Mystic Beys
Baki: “Hey Keith, why don’t you come to my place to make a Mystic Bey too!”
Baki told Keith to his house to make Mystic Beys.
Inside Baki’s mansion, Baki’s maid, Irene came over and opened the door.
Irene: “Hello, Master Baki, you’ve returned home.”
Baki: “Irene, get the 3d printers ready.”
Irene: “Ugh, yes Master Baki.”
Irene had worked for Baki since she was 7 years old.
In the printer room, Baki and Keith were typing away on their keyboards.
Keith: “I need ultimate balance in my bey!
Baki: “Defense is the key in my bey!”
Then in about 1 hour, both Keith and Baki’s bey were done.
Keith: “My bey, Destruction Kratos is done now!”
Baki: “Dynamic Bahamut is finished as well.”
In the battle room.
Keith: “Alright Baki, let’s battle!”
Baki: “I’m down.”
Thoma, Baki’s butler, came downstairs to Baki and Keith
Thoma: “Master Baki asked me to be the referee of this match.”
Thoma: “Inspect your opponent’s Beyblade”
Keith’s mind “Bahamut is a counter-clockwise spinning bey, with a transforming blade, it seems to have the same disc as my bey, it’s driver features a huge metal ball too!”
Baki’s mind “Kratos is a clockwise spinning bey, with bound blades within all its two sides, those axes seem to be the biggest threat, we have the same disc, and his driver is like Aiga’s but with metal as the tip, hm, I’ll need to put everything into my launch.”
Thoma: “Ready and set!”
Baki: “3!”
Keith: “2!”
Baki and Keith: “1!”
“Go shoot!”
Baki spun in a circle before landing on both feet, pulling off a excellent launch
Keith pulled his ripcord as hard as possible, pulling off a good launch.
Bahamut drift, until it took the center
Keith: “Your going down Baki!”
Baki: “No I won’t lose, Bahamut!”
Bahamut’s avatar appeared, and Keith got ready for his assault.
Keith: “Kratos, awaken!”
Kratos’ avatar appeared, it’s axe gleamed.
Keith: “Bound Axe!”
Kratos slammed into the wall and it’s bound blade fully bound off the wall.
Keith: “Now, Destruction Impact!”
Kratos slammed into Bahamut, and burst itself.
Keith: “What just happened!”
Baki: “We need better launches that’s what.”
The Next Day
Keith was staying at Baki’s mansion, and the three went out on errands for Baki’s parents.
Irene walked over to a jewelery store to look around whilst Baki and Keith went to the park to see all the bladers in town.
???: “Now, end him!”
Baki and Keith walked over and saw a caped boy.
???: “Fallen Valkyrie, Fallen Wing Beat!”
Baki and Keith: “Valkyrie!?”
Beyblade Burst
Mystic!
Chapter 1: Keith Shadis, Blader from EuropeA boat sails into frame
???: “Nice, I’m finally here!”
???: “Japan! Birthplace of Beyblade!”
The boat docks and ??? runs to the ladder down
???: “3..2..1..Go Shoot!”
Two bladers were battling in the park.
Baki: “I’ll beat you, my bey Gulity Fafnir will burst your bey instantly!”
Benny: “No you won’t, Prominence Belial, outspin him!”
Baki’s Guilty Fafnir then hit Benny’s Bey into the sky and it burst.
Baki: “See I won!”
??? walked up to Baki
???: “You like to Beyblade?”
Baki: “Yeah I love beyblading!”
???: “Well I’m Keith, and this is my bey Astral Ragnurok!”
Then on the T.Vs, BC Sol’s headquarters was shown.
Baki and Keith: “BC Sol, I’ll join their team one day.”
Valt walked into frame.
Keith (His Thoughts): “Valt! He’s so cool, one day I want to battle him!
Valt: “Yo what’s up?”
Valt: “I came with news about the blading world!”
Baki and Keith stood there ready for the news.
Valt grabbed his Beyblade, Holy Valkyrie
Valt: “A new Beyblade system has been announced! The Mystical System!”
Baki and Keith: *Gasp*
Valt took Valkyrie apart and placed it on the table in front of him.
Valt: “There are five parts in the Beyblade, the Core, the Blade, the Armor, the Disc, and the Driver.”
Keith looked at Valkyrie, I want to make a bey like that!
Baki looked at Valkyrie, I want to make a bey like that and Boa’s bey!
Valt then put Valkyrie back together.
Valt: “Now go out there and make some Mystic Beys!”
Then the T.V turned off, and Baki and Keith were excited ready to make their Mystic Beys
Baki: “Hey Keith, why don’t you come to my place to make a Mystic Bey too!”
Baki told Keith to his house to make Mystic Beys.
Inside Baki’s mansion, Baki’s maid, Irene came over and opened the door.
Irene: “Hello, Master Baki, you’ve returned home.”
Baki: “Irene, get the 3d printers ready.”
Irene: “Ugh, yes Master Baki.”
Irene had worked for Baki since she was 7 years old.
In the printer room, Baki and Keith were typing away on their keyboards.
Keith: “I need ultimate balance in my bey!
Baki: “Defense is the key in my bey!”
Then in about 1 hour, both Keith and Baki’s bey were done.
Keith: “My bey, Destruction Kratos is done now!”
Baki: “Dynamic Bahamut is finished as well.”
In the battle room.
Keith: “Alright Baki, let’s battle!”
Baki: “I’m down.”
Thoma, Baki’s butler, came downstairs to Baki and Keith
Thoma: “Master Baki asked me to be the referee of this match.”
Thoma: “Inspect your opponent’s Beyblade”
Keith’s mind “Bahamut is a counter-clockwise spinning bey, with a transforming blade, it seems to have the same disc as my bey, it’s driver features a huge metal ball too!”
Baki’s mind “Kratos is a clockwise spinning bey, with bound blades within all its two sides, those axes seem to be the biggest threat, we have the same disc, and his driver is like Aiga’s but with metal as the tip, hm, I’ll need to put everything into my launch.”
Thoma: “Ready and set!”
Baki: “3!”
Keith: “2!”
Baki and Keith: “1!”
“Go shoot!”
Baki spun in a circle before landing on both feet, pulling off a excellent launch
Keith pulled his ripcord as hard as possible, pulling off a good launch.
Bahamut drift, until it took the center
Keith: “Your going down Baki!”
Baki: “No I won’t lose, Bahamut!”
Bahamut’s avatar appeared, and Keith got ready for his assault.
Keith: “Kratos, awaken!”
Kratos’ avatar appeared, it’s axe gleamed.
Keith: “Bound Axe!”
Kratos slammed into the wall and it’s bound blade fully bound off the wall.
Keith: “Now, Destruction Impact!”
Kratos slammed into Bahamut, and burst itself.
Keith: “What just happened!”
Baki: “We need better launches that’s what.”
The Next Day
Keith was staying at Baki’s mansion, and the three went out on errands for Baki’s parents.
Irene walked over to a jewelery store to look around whilst Baki and Keith went to the park to see all the bladers in town.
???: “Now, end him!”
Baki and Keith walked over and saw a caped boy.
???: “Fallen Valkyrie, Fallen Wing Beat!”
Baki and Keith: “Valkyrie!?”