[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle

ok @"Strikegamerv6", here we go. im being completely honest
grammar: 3.9/5 it could be better
characters: 1.9/5 i know it hurts but you need to give a little more life into the characters.
story: 2.5/5 things dont blend together as well as i thought it would. you have strawberry chunks in your shake (if you know what i mean)
battles: 1.89/ to be honest you need to add some more impact to battles like  KRRSSSSSHSHHHHHHH!!!! KRAKCKRRAAACK! i dunno what a break sound would be but thats up to you.

oops tally up 10.19/20
Thank you eggblader my next chapter will come out in 10 mins
(Apr. 27, 2021  6:32 PM)eggblader Wrote: ok @"Strikegamerv6", here we go. im being completely honest
grammars: 3.9/5 it could be better
characters: 1.9/5 i know it hurts but you need to give a little more life into the characters.
story: 2.5/5 things dont blend together as well as i thought it would. you have strawberry chunks in your shake (if you know what i mean)
battles: 1.89/ to be honest you need to add some more impact to battles like  KRRSSSSSHSHHHHHHH!!!! KRAKCKRRAAACK! i dunno what a break sound would be but thats up to you.

oops tally up 10.19/20 to be honest you need more impact in the story and you asked for it, but some sentences seem like words that are being spit out. you need some more life. (not you the story)

oops what the heck happened
Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
                       Chapter 9
         Hero Of Origin, Origin Achllies!!

Rantaro: Alright Asher who are you going to team up with?

Me: I actually don’t know.

Justin: The tournament is starting soon you have to pick someone to team up with!!

Me: How about Valt!!

Rantaro: Let’s head around the arena to see where Valt is!!

(At the Main Arena)

Valt: Sorry Asher I already have chosen a partner!!

Me: Aw man!!

Justin: Maybe Dante wants to team up!!

(Runs around to find Dante)

Me: Dante there you are wanna team up!!

Dante: I would love to!!

Me: Finally!!

Dante: But I already found a partner!!

Me: Come on!!

(Me runs off)

Rantaro: Wait Asher!!

(Justin stops Honcho)

Justin: Honcho you got to find a partner I will take care of Asher!!

Rantaro: Thanks Justin, catch you later!!

Me: I can’t find anyone to team up with!!

(I bump into someone)

???: Ouch!!

Me: Sorry man, it's my fault!! Wait what!?!?

???: Not a problem!!

Me: Aiger Akabane!!

Aiger: That’s me!! Who are you?

Me: I’m Asher Suzuki

Aiger: So your Asher huh!

Me: How do you know who I am?

Aiger: Everyone’s talking about you!
Me: Awesome!!

Aiger: Hear your looking for a partner?

Me: Yup! Wanna team up?

Aiger: Sure! But I wanna see how strong you are!!

(Goes to locker room)

Aiger: Meet Origin Achilles!!

Me: Sweet!!

Aiger: Don’t hold back!!

(My thoughts) Origin Achllies a clockwise spinning balance type. It looks like the armor on this thing can add extra attack and defense having 2 swords on it and 2 shields. You can also switch the modes on it. This is going to be fun!!

Aiger/Asher 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Aiger: Go Achilles, Origin Launch!!

Me: Bionic Launch!!

(Achllies and Apollo keep pushing each other back and forth in a flurry of attacks)

Me: Keep going!!

Aiger: I don’t think so, Origin Shield!!

(Apollo is knocked into the wall)
Apollo: Let’s go!!

(I enter super resonance)

(Aiger’s Thoughts): Is that?

(Apollo starts sparkling rainbow)

Aiger: SHOW THEM WE’RE THE STRONGEST TEAM IN THE WORLD!!!!

Achilles: Let’s go!!

(Aiger enters hyper resonance)

Aiger: ORIGIN SWORD!!!

ME: BIONIC WHIP!!!

(Huge explosion happens)

Aiger/Me: Keep Going!!!!

(Achllies and Apollo get sent flying out of the stadium but Achllies lands first)

Aiger: Wait what!!

(I pick up achilles and Apollo)

Me: Here you go Aiger that was fun!!

Aiger: I have made my decision. I want you to be my partner!!

Me: Sweet!!

Aiger: I'm going to do some training!! See you around!!

(I run off to find Justin and honcho)

Rantaro: Hey guys!!

Justin: Hey!

Rantaro: Did you find Asher?

Justin: Nope I looked everywhere. Did you find a partner?

Rantaro: Yup he is unbearable at times but deep down he makes a perfect partner!!

(I come running in)

Justin: There you are! Where have you been!?

Me: Just finding the perfect partner!!

Rantaro: Who is it?

Me: You will find out soon enough!!

(At opening ceremony)

Justin: Jake, Noah, Emma? What are you doing here?

Emma: Are you kidding me! We wouldn't miss this for the world!!

Noah: Sorry you couldn’t be down there with them.

Announcer: Hello everyone!! Welcome to the Legend’s Tag League!!
We have our top 12 bladers up on the stage so let’s go over the Tag Teams!! We have Valt and Free!!

Valt: Heyo!! We are going to win!!

Announcer: Silas Karlisle and Rantaro Kiyama!!

Rantaro: In it to win it!!

Announcer Dante Koryu and Lui Shirosagi!!

Dante: We are going to rise up and win!!

Announcer: Hyuga and Hikaru Hizashi!!

Hikaru/Hyuga: We are going to surge ahead!!

Announcer: We also have Aiger Akabane and Asher Suzuki!!

Justin: He is teamed up with Aiger!?

Aiger: Time to go turbo!!

Me: Me and Aiger are going to win!!

Announcer: Last but certainly not least!! We have Shu Kurnai and Harry Tanaka!!

Harry: Listen up legends!! I am going to break all your beys!!

Shu: Grr!!

Announcer: What Harry Tanaka just made a bold Announcement!!

Valt: You're not beating me any time soon!!
Announcer: Our First Matches will be!! Aiger/Asher Vs Shu/Harry after that battle we will hope into a match of strength Valt/Free Vs Dante/Lui last but not least!! Hygua/Hikaru Vs Rantaro/Silas!!

Aiger: Man we get to battle Shu!! This will be epic!!

Me: Let’s go practice!!

Aiger: Race you there!!

I hope the @TheGolden Blade checks out my fan fic he was the one who inspired me to do it!!
Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 10
Legends Debut, Magnum Spryzen!!

Aiger: Go Achilles!! Origin Breaker!!

(Apollo goes flying out of the stadium)

(Justin catches Apollo and gives it to me)

Aiger: Your super strong!!

Me: Thanks we’re totally going to win!!

Aiger: Are opponents really tough but we can do it!!

Justin: Uh guys I am right here!!

Me: Sorry Justin.

Aiger: You know this guy?

Me: Yup he is my best friend!!

Aiger: Well nice to meet you!

Me: So Aiger what mode are you using?

Aiger: Balance mode with the Origin armor!!

(Would Aiger Akabane and Asher Suzuki come up to the stage time for your battle)

Justin: Time for you to win!!

Announcer: Alright everyone!! We got a special match!! Our Crimson Nova Aiger Akabane with our rising star Asher Suzuki!!

Aiger/Me: We are winning this match!!

Announcer: Aiger and Asher will be battling the legendary Shu Kurnai!!
With our rising blader determined to break every bey!! Harry Tanaka!!

Harry: Aiger!! Achilles will fall to my Hermes!!

Aiger: We will see about that!!

Me: Shu we finally get to face off!! I am so excited!!

Shu: Meet Magnum Spryzen!!



Announcer: We have our new Bionic Stadium!! It has two steep hills, and on the steep hills there is a spinning plate!!
Reff: First battle, ready set!!

Shu/Me/Aiger/Harry 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Me: Go Apollo!!

Announcer: Apollo starts off by climbing the hill!!

(Apollo climbs up the steep hill and picks up speed in the free spinning plate)

Me: Bionic Upper!!

Announcer: Apollo is heading straight Spryzen!! But hermes is coming to deliver a blow!!

Harry: Say goodbye to Apollo, Wicked Whip!!

(Achllies starts hitting Hermes with hard)

Aiger: You're not destroying any beys!!

(Apollo and Spryzen clash)

Me: Apollo!!

Apollo: Let’s go!!

(I enter super resonance)

(Shu’s Thoughts): He has gotten way stronger!!

Shu: Go Spryzen!!

(Shu enters hyper resonance, Spryzen enter Hyper Flare)
Me: It’s glowing gold!?

Aiger: Achilles!!

(Aiger enters Hyper Resonance, Achlies enters Hyper Flare)

Harry: Hermes!!

(Harry enters Hyper Resonance, Hermes enters Dark Flare)

Apollo: What is the matter.

Me: I can’t go that far.

Aiger: Asher give it your all and have fun, I believe in you!!

Apollo: He believes in you, but you need to believe in yourself!!

(I enter deep resonance)

Me: BIONIC SWORD!!!!

(Apollo clashes with Spryzen, Apollo bursts but Spryzen gets knocked out)

Shu: What!?

Aiger: Origin Breaker!!

Harry: Wicked Pulse!!!

(Both beys get knocked out but Achlies hits the ground first)

Reff: It’s Wicked Hermes with a ring out finish, the winners are Shu and Harry!!

Aiger: Aw man, we lost!!

Me: I guess we did!

(At locker room)

Justin: Hey Asher!

Me: Yeah?

Justin: I am heading out to defeat Harry!!

Me: Seriously?

Justin: Yeah just wanted to tell you that.

Aiger: It is way too dangerous you could get your bey destroyed!!

Justin: I am the only person that can defeat him!!

(Justin runs off)

Me: Wait!!

Aiger: Hold it!

Me: What is it!?

Aiger: He needs to do this on his own.

Me: Your right!

Aiger: Well I am heading out to practice do what you want while I’m gone.

Me: Ok
(Runs off to Lui and Dante’s locker room)

Lui: What are you doing here we are practicing!!

Dante: Hey Asher long time no see!

Me: Hi Lui is Lunior up and running now!?

Lui: Obviously why would you care!!

Me: Because battling with you was fun!! I don’t want Harry to ruin beyblade!!

Dante: Hello right here!?

Lui: Do what you want!!

(Lui and Dante your battle with Valt Aoi and Free De La Hoya is about to start)

Dante: Catch you later Asher!!

Me: I got to go up and watch this match!!

Announcer: Alright folks!! Today we will be doing an awesome match!!
It is our Wonder Boy Valt Aoi with The High School Prodigy Free De La Hoya!!

Free: You're going down, Lui!

(Lui laughs)

Lui: The only one going down is you!!


Dante: It’s time to take you down Valt!!
Valt: You can try but you're going down!!

Reff: First battle, ready set!!

Valt/Dante/Free/Lui: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Announcer: Dragon and Valtrek go up the steep slope and pick up speed on the spinning plate!!

Valt: Go Valtrek!!

Dante: Dragon!!

Announcer: Fafnier and Luinir go in an all out clash!!

Free: Haaa Fafnir!!

(Free enters hyper resonance, Fafnir enters hyper flare)

Lui: Luinor end this!!

(Lui enters hyper resonance, Luinor enters Hyper Flare)

Announcer: While Fafnir and Luinor are having the clash of the century Dragon and Valtrek!!

(Valtrek and Dragon send each other flying)

Valt: Rush Launch!!

Announcer: Valtrek is readying a super attack!!

Dante: Dragon!! Omega Recoil!!

(Valtrek hits the wall and starts wobbling)
Valt: It’s time!! Hero Reboot!!

Announcer: Wow Valtrek gets the pedal to the metal!!

Dante: What!?

Valt: Valtrek!!!

(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtrek enters Hyper Flare)

(Valtrek speeds up and hits Dragon, Dragon gets sent out of the stadium)

Announcer: Valtrek just sliced right through Dragon’s attacks!!

(Fafnir starts spinning slowly)

Lui: End this, Assaulting Scream!!

Announcer: Luinor is about to hit Fafnir Into tomorrow!!

Valt: Not yet!! Hero Sword!!

(Valtrek hits Luinor out of the stadium)

Reff: It’s Hero Valtrek with a ring out finish, the winners are Valt Aoi and Free De La Hoya!!

Free: Well it’s over.

Lui: If Valt wasn’t there it would have been over!

Dante: Valt I wanna battle again!!

Valt: I’m ready to take you down anyday!!

(At Harry’s Hideout)

Justin: Harry Tanaka!! I challenge you to a battle!! Don’t hold back!!

Harry: Breaking you will be fun!!

Harry: First battle, get ready!!

Harry/Justin: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Justin: Janus take center stage!!

(Janus takes the center)

Harry: Go, Wicked Break!!

(Hermes keeps attacking Janus)

Justin: Dawn Guard!!

Harry: Hermes attack!!

(Hermes armor flies off)

Justin: Send it’s armor back at it!!

(Janus sends the armor back at it, Hermes starts glowing red)

Harry: Hermes!!

(Harry enters hyper resonance, Hermes enters Dark Flare)

Justin: Go Janus!!

(Justin enters super resonance)
Justin: Super Sunset Crash!!

Harry It’s over!!

(Janus gets crushed on both sides)

Justin: Janus!!!!

Harry: DOUBLE WICKED WHIP!!!!!

(Janus starts cracking, Janus breaks)

Justin: WHAT!?!?

Harry: How does it feel!!

(Justin starts crying)
Now that I read this what is going to be the next evolution for Janus?
(Apr. 29, 2021  12:42 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Now that I read this what is going to be the next evolution for Janus?

You will see Smile
Ohhhh now this is getting really intresting!!!
(Apr. 29, 2021  1:06 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Ohhhh now this is getting really intresting!!!

Glad you like it Smile
I did for all the chapters
I really like this, this has potential in it. Great work so far.
(Apr. 29, 2021  2:43 AM)TheGolden Blade Wrote: I really like this, this has potential in it. Great work so far.

Thx I'm so glad you like it (Puts on huge smile)

Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 11
Rebirth Solar Janus!!!

Announcer: Tomorrow we will continue the tournament with Hikaru and Hyuga Vs Silas and Rantaro!!

Me: Where’s Honcho and Justin they were supposed to meet me here!?

Rantaro: Asher!! Sorry I’m late I got carried away with training!!

(Justin walks over)

Me: Hey Justin wanna practice!!
Justin: I can’t.

Me: What do you mean?

(Justin shows them Janus)

Rantaro: Who did this!!!

Justin: Harry.

Me: I’m going to show him what’s what!!!

Justin: Asher you need to focus on the tournament, your chance to battle him will come.

Rantaro: Justin let’s go.

Justin: Where?

Rantaro: We are fixing Janus!!

Justin: Honcho I don’t think we can.

Rantaro: Come on we can do this let’s head over to the raging bulls!!

(At the raging bulls)

Shu: What do you guys need?

(Justin shows him Janus)

Shu: Don’t tell me.

Justin: Yup Harry did this.

Rantaro: Harry reminds me of him.

Shu: Harry is just like him.

Me: Guys can we hurry up and fix Janus.

Rantaro: Alright what kind of bey should it be?

Justin: I want it to be a defense type that has never ending defense!!

Shu: Alright let’s get started!

(After bey is created)

Justin: It’s done!!

Me: Awesome!!

Justin: Say hello to Solar Janus!!

Rantaro: Let’s give it a test run!!

Shu: Inspect your opponents bey!

(Rantaro’s Thoughts): Solar Janus a defense type. It has one free spinning star that surrounds the whole layer. It will have lots of defense and stamina but not that much attack. Let’s rock it’s world.

Shu: First battle, ready set!!

Rantaro/Justin: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

(Janus takes the center right away)

Rantaro: Your bey may be fast but Roktavor has stamina and style!!
Justin: Solar Spin!!!

(Roktavor keeps attacking but Janus keep defending)

Rantaro: Roktavor!!!

(Rantaro enters Hyper Resonance, Roktavor enters Hyper Flare)

Rantaro: Triple Wing Tornado!!!

(Roktavor sends Janus flying, Janus hits the wall)

Justin: Janus!!!

(Justin enters super resonance)

Justin: Super Solar Crash!!

(Roktavor bursts)

Rantaro: What the!?

Shu: It’s Solar Janus with a burst finish, the winner is Justin Aoki!!

Justin: Alright!!

Me: Not too shabby!!

Rantaro: I admit defeat! You were awesome in that battle!!

Justin: Thanks guys I’m gonna keep on winning!!

(Next day at the Arena)

Announcer: Hello bey fans!! Today we will be taking a dive right into the final match of the 1st round!! We have Rantaro Kiyama and Silas Karslile against Hyuga and Hikaru Hizashi!!

Rantaro: I’d hate to defeat you guys but I will have to today!!

Silas: If you won’t defeat them then I will!

Hikaru: Nobody’s beating us today!!

Reff: First battle, ready set!!

Hyuga/Hikaru/Rantaro/Silas: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Announcer: Hyperion goes for an all out flurry of attacks against Satomb!!

Silas: That won’t work Triple Twister!!

Announcer: Satomb blocks all of Hyperions attacks!! While that’s going on Helios is hitting Roktavor everywhere!!

Hikaru: Sol Strike!!

Rantaro: Triple Wing Tornado!!

Announcer: Roktavor and Helios are giving each other a run for their money!!

Hyuga: Hyperion!!!

(Hyuga enters Hyper Resonance, Hyperion enters Hyper Flare)

Hikaru: Helios!!!

(Hikaru enters Hyper Resonance, Helios enters Hyper Flare)
Rantaro: Roktavor!!!

(Rantaro enters Hyper Resonance, Roktavor enters Hyper Flare)

Silas: Satomb!!!

(Silas enters Hyper Resonance, Roktavor enters Hyper Flare)

Announcer: Helios and Hyperion climb up the slope and pick up speed on the spinning plate they are making are geering up!!

(Helios and Hyperion clash)

Hikaru/Hyuga: Twin Impact!!!

(Helios Launches Hyperion into Roktavor and Satomb)

Rantaro/Silas: No way!?

(Roktavor and Satomb burst)

Reff: It’s Inferno Hyperion with a burst finish, the winners are Hyuga and Hikaru Hizashi!!

Announcer: Wow they just showed us the move of the century!!

Rantaro: Those were great moves guys!!

(Silas walks away)

Announcer: Tomorrow the second round will start, the matchups are…
Valt and Free vs Silas and Rantaro, Aiger and Asher vs Lui and Dante,
Shu and Harry vs Hyuga and Hikaru!!

Me: Awesome I get another chance at Lui!!
Aiger: This is gonna be fun!!

Dante: Lui let’s get training!!

(Lui laughs)
Solar Janus sick!!!


I like the evolution name better than Dawn Janus
(Apr. 29, 2021  11:58 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Solar Janus sick!!!


I like the evolution name better than Dawn Janus

Thank you, Apollo is going to evolve soon and I need an Evolution name for it so if you want to can you come up with one?
Ok sweet I’ll think of one
(Apr. 29, 2021  4:50 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:
(Apr. 29, 2021  11:58 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Solar Janus sick!!!


I like the evolution name better than Dawn Janus

Thank you, Apollo is going to evolve soon and I need an Evolution name for it so if you want to can you come up with one?

Starlight Apollo sounds good to me
Thank you for the Idea I will put it in consideration

Alright we have two names that I really Like so we will do a vote between Nebula Apollo and Starlight Apollo if nobody Votes or it is a tie I will do a random drawing
Thank you CheetoBlader and Dragon blader Z for coming up with the names Smile

Preview
Me: Valt and Free vs Rantaro and Silas!!
Me: This battle is going to be epic!!
Me: Free used that move!?
Me: Luinor is going to be defeated!!
Next time on Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Legends Of BC Sol Showdown
3 2 1 let it rip
Thanks and also can you make two of Nebula Apollo’s moves Nebula Launch and Double Nebula Launch
I will see what I can do Smile

Also the vote's are due by Monday morning!
How do we vote and can we vote at all?
Just say what name u want
Nebula Genesis
Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
                   Chapter 12
      Legends of BC Sol Showdown!!!

Valt: It’s gonna be super fun battling Silas and Honcho!

Free: Silas is probably going after me so you need to take Honcho down!

Valt: Leave it to me!!

(Aiger and My Locker room)

Aiger: So I am going on defense and you will take down Luinor while I go after Dragon!

Me: I finally get to take down Lui once and for all!

(Justin walks in)

Justin: You guys practicing?

Aiger: We have to win or else it will slow us down!!

Justin: Do you wanna practice Aiger and Asher!

Aiger/Me: You know it!!
(At the main Arena)

Announcer: Hey everyone today we are having the second round!!

(Crowd goes wild)

Announcer: First up we got a BC Sol clash!! Rantaro Kiyama and Silas Karsile Vs Valt Aoi and Free De La Hoya!!

Me: This is gonna be a sweet match!!

Justin: You said it!!

Valt: Let’s keep up the pace Free!!

Rantaro: Sorry Valt but it all ends here!!

Silas: Free this is where your blading journey ends!

Free: Let’s get this over with.

Reff: First battle, ready set!!

Silas/Rantaro/Valt/Free: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Announcer: Roktavor starts off by taking the center!!

Rantaro: Triple Wing Storm!!

(The storm sends Valtrek flying up the slope)

Valt: Valtrek!!!

(Valt enters Hyper resonance, Valtrek enters Hyper Flare)

Announcer: Fafnir goes in to help Valtrek, but Satomb starts attacking!!

Silas: Jynx Drift!!!

Free: Gyrate Spin!!

Announcer: Valtrek picks up speed by going down the slope!!

Valt: Hero Sword!!

(Valtrek breaks through the wind barrier)

Rantaro: I’m not done!!

(Rantaro enters Hyper Resonance, Roktavor enters Hyper Flare)

Rantaro: Triple Wing Hurricane!!!

(Valtrek gets hit with the hurricane and starts wobbling)

Valt: Hero Reboot!!!

(Valtrek picks up speed and hits Roktavor, Roktavor bursts)

Valt: Awesome!!

(Valtrek stops spinning)

Silas: Triple Twister!!!

Free: Fafnir!!!!

(Free enters Hyper Resonance, Fafnir enters Hyper Flare)

(Silas enters Hyper Resonance, Satomb enters Hyper Flare)

Silas: Roller Drift!!

Announcer: Fafnir is sent flying is this going to be a ring out!!

Free: Your good I admit but not good enough!!

(Fafnir lands hard on the slope)

Free: Gyrate Break!!

SIias: That won’t work!!

(Fafnir slams Satomb into the wall, Satomb bursts)

Silas: Wait what!?

(Everyone silent)

Reff: Um Free De La Hoya with a burst finish, the winner is Free De La Hoya and Valt Aoi!!

Silas: How did you do that!!

Free: Your free spinning wheel is made out of rubber so that the stronger you hit the wall the more damage you take, should have studied D-.

(Silas roars)

Me: He really needs to chill, he just lost.

Silas: ASHER SUZUKI IF YOU COULD DO BETTER BE MY GUEST!!!!!

Me: How did he hear me from all the way up here!?

Announcer: Ok the last match was unexpected but now we have a tussle of strength!! Dante Koryu and Lui Shirosagi Vs Asher Suzuki and Aiger Akabane!!

(Crowd goes wild)

Dante: Me and Dragon are gonna rise up!!

Aiger: Achilles is winning this!!

Lui: So you’ve gotten stronger show me!!

Me: One meal of stronger coming right up!! Would you like some water with that!!

Reff: First battle, ready set!!

Dante/Lui/Aiger/Asher: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Announcer: Achilles is quick to take center stage!!

Dante: Go, Dragon Launch!!

Announcer: Dragon makes attack after attack!!

(Luinor pick up speed and hit Achllies but Apollo comes in)

Me: Bionic Upper!!

Announcer: Apollo sends Luinor flying!!

(Dragon keeps rushing attacks at Achilles)

Aiger: Not gonna work, Origin Defense!!

Announcer: Achilles ramps up it’s defense to the next level!!

Dante: Rise up Dragon!!

(Dante enters Hyper Resonance, Dragon enters Hyper Flare)

Aiger: Achllies!!

Achilles: Leave it to me!!

(Aiger enters Hyper Resonance, Achilles enters Hyper Flare)

Announcer: Dragon hits the wall and now it’s spring loaded attack is locked!!

Dante: Go rise give it your all!! Omega Break!!

(Achllies starts wobbling)

Aiger: Origin Shield!!

(Achllies knocks Dragon out)

Me: Go Apollo!!

(I enter Ultra Resonance, Apollo starts sparking Hyper Flare)

Lui: Go Luinor!!!

(Lui enters Hyper Resonance, Luinor enters Hyper Flare)

Lui: Assaulting Smash!!

Me/Apollo: BIONIC SWORD!!!!

(Humongous explosion happens)

Aiger: BLOW EM AWAY!!!!

(Achllies comes in and knocks out Luinor)

Reff: It’s Origin Achllies with a ring out finish, the winners are Aiger and Asher

(Me and Aiger fall to the ground)

Me: I had it you know.

Aiger: From where I was standing you needed me.

Me: Touche.

(Lui walks away)

Dante: Lui wait for me!

Announcer: Aiger and Asher just showed us the battle of a lifetime!! Tomorrow's final battle of the second round will be Hyuga and Hikaru Hizashi Vs Shu Kurnai and Harry Tanaka!!

Preview
Me: The Tag Team Champions against the strongest bladers in the tournament.
Me: What is Harry planning?
Me: Hyperion Helios no.......
Me: We're going up against Honcho I have to win!
Next time on Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Time To Go All Out Legends Bash!!!
3 2 1 Let It Rip!!!
I got a better idea for voting if the people like my post or cheeto’s post thats what the votes are going to be
(Apr. 30, 2021  11:40 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: I got a better idea for voting if the people like my post or cheeto’s post thats what the votes are going to be

That's a good Idea I will take it but if nobody votes by Monday Morning 11:00 I will randomly choose

Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 13
Time To Go All Out Legends Bash!!!

(At Hyuga and Hikaru’s locker room)

Aiger: So do you guys have a plan to deal with Shu and Harry!
Hyuga: I am gonna go zoom zoom and kablamo!!

Me: So you're gonna go whoosh then bang bang bang!!

Hyuga: Kablamo!!

Me: Zap boom bam!!

Hikaru: I have no clue what they're talking about.

Aiger: Neither do I.

(Would Hyuga and Hikaru Hizashi start heading up to the stage your match is about to start)

Hikaru: We will catch you guys in the finals!!

Me: You bet!!

Announcer: Ok everyone!! We have the final match of the second match!!

(Crowd goes wild)

Announcer: Let’s get started!!

Hikaru: Shu we are winning this!!

Harry: I get to destroy two of the strongest legends, goodbye to your beys!!

Reff: First battle, ready set!!

Hikaru/Hyuga/Harry/Shu: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

(Hyperion and Helios start clashing)

Hyuga/Hikaru: Twin Strike!!

(Hyperion and Hyuga send spryzen flying with twin strike)

Harry: Get in there Hermes!!

Announcer: Hermes starts hitting Helios and Hyperion with a barrage of attacks!!

Hyuga: Inferno Strike!!

Announcer: Hyperion charges up with a counter strike!!

Hyuga: Hyperion!!

Hikaru: Helios !!

(Hyuga and Hikaru enter Hyper Resonance, Helios and Hyperion enter Hyper Flare)

Harry: Destroy!!!!

(Harry enters Hyper Resonance, Hermes enters Dark Flare)

Announcer: Spryzen hits Hermes off balance!?

Shu: This is not the way to battle!!

Harry: I am going to destroy them and you're not stopping me!!

Announcer: Hermes betrays Spryzen by hitting it out of the stadium!!

(The armor comes flying off)

Harry: Double Wicked Launch!!!!
Hikaru: Sol Strike!!

Announcer: Hyperion and Helios are getting pummeled!!

Hikaru: Helios no!!

Hyuga: Hyperion hang in there!!

Harry” It’s the end!! Double Wicked Cannon Whip

Announcer: Hyperion and Helios are getting crushed!!!!

Harry: Break!!!!

(Hyperion and Helios Break)

Hikaru: Helios No!!!!

Hyuga: Hyperion!!!!

Announcer: I cannot believe it, Helios and Hyperion have been….

Reff: It’s a burst finish. The winner of the match is Shu Kurnai and Harry Tanaka!!

Harry: How does it feel to be totally destroyed!!

Me: We got to get over to Hyuga and Hikaru’s locker room now!!

(I run off)

Aiger/Justin: Wait for me!!

(At Hyuga and Hikaru’s locker room)

Me: Honcho your here too?

Rantaro: I am their coach. I need to help them with this!!

Hikaru: It’s over we lost this important match now we can’t make it to the finals.

Justin: You can fix them right!?

Hikaru: No, not in time for the third round.

Hyuga: Hyperion……

Aiger: Does that mean?

Hikaru: We are forfeiting.

Me: It’s all because of that monster!!

Hyuga: Asher please beat Harry for me and Hyperion.

Me: I promise I will defeat him!!

(The next day)

Announcer: Everyone we need your attention please!!

Me: Huh?

Announcer: Due to the fact that Hyuga and Hikaru were forced to forfeit the tournament it will have to be cut shorter because it is uneven!! You need 2 wins to enter the Finals now so that means Lui and Dante and Silas and Rantaro cannot make it into the finals.

Rantaro: Are you kidding!?
Dante: Aw we can’t battle any more!

(Lui walks away)

Announcer: Hold on I never said you could not battle!! They still need to battle you to move on to the finals!! So the match ups are Honcho/Silas Vs Asher/Aiger!!

Aiger: Asher this is a match we cannot afford to lose!!

Me: Ok I’m putting on my serious face!!

Announcer: And Valt/Free Vs Shu and Lane!!!! If Shu and Lane lose and Asher and Aiger win they will face off but if Asher and Aiger lose Valt and Free will win the tournament by default!!

Harry: Valt Aoi Free De La Hoya I have to destroy Achllies and Apollo before you two!!

Dante: Hey what about me and Lui why don’t we get to battle!!!!

Announcer: I am sorry but it was a random drawing!

Lui: Well I am going to go train for the Legend’s League where I will destroy all of you!!

Announcer: Ok let’s get started with our first battle!!

Me: Apollo this is a match we cannot afford to lose!

Apollo: I understand I know we can do this!!

(Aiger and Asher come up to the stage please)

Announcer: Ok folks! It’s time for the next match!! Rataro Kiyama and Silas Karslile Vs Asher Suzuki!!

Rantaro: I am winning this Asher!!

Me: In your dreams!!

Reff: First battle ready set!!

Aiger/Me/Silas/Rantaro: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Aiger: Achilles attack!!

Rantaro: Not yet!! Roktavor!!!!

(Rantaro enters Hyper Resonance, Roktavor enters Hyper Flare)

Rantaro: Triple Wing Tornado!!!!

Announcer: Roktavor has sent Achllies sky high!!

Aiger: Achilles!!!!

Achilles: Let’s go!!

(Aiger enters Hyper Resonance, Achilles enters Hyper Flare)

Aiger: Origin Dive!!!!

(Achllies lands on Satomb, Satomb bursts)

Silas: What!!!!

Me: Apollo!!!!

(I enter Ultra Resonance, Apollo starts sparking gold)

Announcer: Apollo picks up speed and is getting ready to land a huge attack on Roktavor!!

Rantaro: Not yet!! Triple Wing Storm!!!!

Me: Break through!! Bionic Sword!!!!!

(Apollo breaks through the wind barrier and bursts Roktavor)

Reff: It’s Bionic Apollo with a burst finish. The winners are Aiger Akabane and Asher Suzuki!!!!

Me: Awesome!!!!

Announcer: That battle was incredible!!! Aiger and Asher have a chance to redeem themselves if Shu and Harry lose the next match!!

(At Rantaro and Silas’s locker room)

Rantaro: Looks like we tanked.

Silas: Even though we lost….

Rantaro: Huh?

Silas: Battling with you wasn’t the worst thing in the world.

(Rantaro puts his arm around Silas)

Rantaro: New you would come around!!

Silas: *Sighs*

Harry: It will be so much fun to destroy Achllies and Apollo!!

(Harry roars)

Beyblade Burst Bionic Battle
Chapter 14
Wicked Destruction!!!

Valt: Go Valtrek!!

Free: Fafnir!!

(Both beys hit the ground)

Free: You’ve gotten stronger.

Valt: So are you getting serious today?

Free: Yup I am bringing everything if I wanna take down Harry.

(I walk in)

Valt: Hey Asher been a long time since we last spoke!

Me: Yeah I guess.

Valt: Something wrong?

Me: It’s just so upsetting that the tournament was thrown around because Hyuga and Hikaru had to forfeit.

Free: That’s exactly what Harry wanted.
Me: Huh?

Free: He wanted to show them true despair, and he did that by destroying Hyperion and Helios and making them quit the tournament.

Valt: He wants to destroy all of our beys, that's not the way we blade!!

Me: That’s why you guys are taking him down, then we can take him down!

(Would Valt Aoi and Free De La Hoya come up to the stage please)

Valt: See you around!

Announcer: Ok everyone! Today we have a matchup that will change the course of this whole tournament!! Valt Aoi and Free De La Hoya Vs Shu Kurani and Harry Tanaka!!

Valt: Shu It’s going to be awesome battling you again!!

Shu: Same for me!

Reff: First battle ready set!!

Free/Valt/Shu/Harry: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Free: Fafnir!! Gyrate Break!!

Announcer: Fafnir picks up some serious speed and sends Hermes flying!!

Valt: SHU!!!!

Shu: VALT!!!!

Valt: Valtrek!!!!

(Valt enters Hyper Resonance, Valtrek enters Hyper Flare)

Shu: Spryzen!!!

(Shu enters Hyper Resonance, Spryzen enters Hyper Flare)

Valt: Hero Sword!!!

Shu: Magnum Whip!!!

Announcer: Valtrek and Spryzen go in an all out flurry of strikes!!

Harry: Wicked Pulse!!

Free: Gyrate Spin!!!

Announcer: Fafnier tries to break through but it’s defense is too strong!!

Harry: Push it out of here!!

(Hermes uses it’s defense to push fafnir out of the stadium)

Free: Get outta there, Gyrate Claw!!

Harry: Hermes!!!

(Harry enters Hyper Resonance, Hermes enters Dark Flare)

Free: Wait what!!

Harry: Get out!!

Announcer: Hermes knocks out Fafnir using it’s incredible defense!!!

Valt: Hero Reboot!!
Shu: Counter Break!!

Announcer: Is this going to be the final blow!!

Harry: Not without me!!

(Hermes comes in front of Spryzen, Valtrek sends Hermes and Spryzen flying out of the stadium)

(Everyone silent)

Reff: It’s Hero Valtrek with a ring out finish. The winner is Valt Aoi and Free De La Hoya!!

Announcer: I cannot believe this Hermes purposely got in front of Sprzen so both of them would get knocked out!!

Shu: Grr!!

Valt: Why would you do that!! We were battling!!

Harry: Simple enough you're not ready to be destroyed yet!!

Valt: *Gasps*

Announcer: Ok apparently Shu and Harry are going to be facing Asher and Aiger in the next match!!

Me: I can’t believe he did that on purpose!!

Aiger: We should get up there for our next match!

Justin: Go in and win it!!

Announcer: Apparently folks our next match is Asher and Aiger Vs Harry and Shu!!

Me: Harry your winning streak is over, I am going to stop you!!

Harry: You can try but there is no stopping me!!

Reff: First battle, ready set!!

Me/Aiger/Shu/Harry: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Me: Go Apollo hit Spryzen with Bionic Launch!!

Shu: Spryzen dodge!!

Announcer: Close call but Spryzen barely got out of that pinch!!

Aiger: Achilles go!!

Achilles: Leave it to me!!

(Aiger enters Hyper Resonance, Achilles enters Hyper Flare)

Harry: Hermes!!

(Harry enters Hyper Resonance, Hermes enters Dark Flare)

Announcer: Achilles and Hermes go in for a super clash!!

Me: Apollo, Bionic Whip!!

Announcer: Apollo lands a strong attack that sends Spryzen all the way up the slope!!

Shu: Spryzen!!!!


(Shu enters Hyper Resonance, Spryzen enters Hyper Flare)

Me: Let’s go Apollo!!

Apollo: Let’s go all out!!

(I enter Ultra Resonance, Apollo starts Sparking Gold)

Me: Bionic Sword!!

Announcer: Apollo sends Spryzen flying out of the ring!! But it starts wobbling

Harry: Destroy!!!!

Announcer: Hermes armor gets knocked off and it’s going in for the crush!!

Harry: Double Wicked Whip!!

Me: No Apollo!!!!

Aiger: You're not destroying any bey!!

(Achllies knocks me away from Hermes, but Achilles starts getting crushed)

Me: *Gasps*

Harry: You wanna be destroyed by my guest!!

(Achllies starts cracking, then breaks)

Aiger: Achilles no….

Shu: *Gasps*

Reff: It’s Wicked Hermes with a burst finish. The winner of this match is Shu and Harry!!

Announcer: I cannot believe it, to save Apollo from destruction Achllies was destroyed!!

Harry: YES I DESTROYED ORIGIN ACHILLES!!!!!

Me: Harry I have had enough, meet me at your secret Hideout thingy and I am going to take you down there!!!!!

Harry: Apollo will be destroyed!!!!

(At Harry’s Hideout)

Me: I am here. Let's do this!!

Me/Harry: 3 2 1 let it rip!!

Me: Go Apollo!!!

Apollo: Let’s do this!!

(I enters Hyper Resonance, Apollo enters Hyper Flare)

Harry: Hermes Destroy!!!!

(Harry enters Hyper Resonance, Hermes enters Dark Flare)

Me: Bionic Upper!!!!

(Armor comes flying off)

Harry: Wicked Cannon!!

Me: Dodge it!!

(Apollo barely dodges the attack)

Harry: Fell right into my trap!! Wicked Impulse!!

(Apollo gets sent flying)

Harry: Now, Double Wicked Launch!!

(Apollo gets pummeled from all sides)

Me: Get out of there!!!!

Harry: What!?

Me: Bionic Sword!!

Harry: It’s Over!!! Double Wicked Whip!!!

(Apollo gets crushed from both sides)

Me: Apollo noooooo

(Apollo starts cracking, Apollo breaks)

Me: Apollo…

Harry: How does it feel to be completely destroyed!!

(I run out of Harry’s hideout)

Me: Apollo please don’t leave!!!!
Apollo: It’s finished.

(I start crying)