[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade: Angels {~A Dark Beyblade Story~}

(Apr. 20, 2021  7:09 PM)eggblader Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  7:06 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Maybe. Your theory is definitely interesting.

ima say it then. shasa.
nah, its obviously- *gets slapped*
(Apr. 20, 2021  7:16 PM)Pixi Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  7:09 PM)eggblader Wrote: ima say it then. shasa.
nah, its obviously- *gets slapped*

What do you mean? It's totally S- *coughs so hard I can't be heard anymore*
(Apr. 20, 2021  7:18 PM)PinkRose Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  7:16 PM)Pixi Wrote: nah, its obviously- *gets slapped*

What do you mean? It's totally S- *coughs so hard I can't be heard anymore*

-Suiryu Basara
Alena Yagami

Age: 13 (Prologue), 14 (Main Story)

Gender: Female

Eye Color: Yellow (Left), Blue (Right), Crimson Red (Resonance, both)

Hair: White with Red Accents

Physical Appearance: Alena has a pretty petite figure and is rather tall for her age and has a pink half-heart on her left cheek. She wears a black tank top with red stripes at the bottom, a white coat with red outlines, black tights with red stripes going down the legs and black slippers.


Personality:

Rude: Alena is extremely rude to many new people she meets and treats them horribly. This earns her the title of "Bratty Blader" in District Tournaments

Abusive: Following up to Rudeness, Alena takes great pleasure in hurting people whether its verbally or even PHYSICAL

Destructive: In battle, she has an everlasting thirst for destruction.

Secret Soft Side: Despite her rough and mean exterior, she was a genuine care for the butler and his kids who take her in after leaving HELL


Bey: Crusher Anahel Dk Nr -Massacre

Moves: Crusher Death, Crushing Blast, Narrow Counter, Angels End
Rampage Longinus Drake Jolt' -Devastate
Phantom Fafnir Ratchet Absorb -Drain
Havoc Satan Hurricane Roller -Hell
Soul Deathscyther 0Vortex Jaggy' -Scythe
(Apr. 21, 2021  7:42 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Rampage Longinus Drake Jolt' -Devastate
Phantom Fafnir Ratchet Absorb -Drain
Havoc Satan Hurricane Roller -Hell
Soul Deathscyther 0Vortex Jaggy' -Scythe

Can I just say I love Havoc Satan's name?
Episode 1: Angel Of Darkness! Crusher Anahel! Summary

A team of burgulars step foot inside a mansion which has said to be the home of the strongest blader in Japan! The blader wrecks their beys instantly as screams echoed throughout the mansion.
Flame Ragnaruk Ωuter Eternal -Wing

Metal Ring: -Wing - a Metal Ring with wings that looks like that of Glides Stamina Wings.

Layer: Flame Ragnaruk (FR) - looks kinda like Blaze Ragnaruk but more bulkier and jagged. like its predecessors, Ragnaruk features 2 stamina wings made of metal

Disk: Ωuter (Ω)

Driver: Eternal (Et)

Owner: Rangelina Kiyama (Daughter Of Rantaro)

Special Moves: Flame Tornado, Sextuple Winged Cyclone, Eternal Stance

(Apr. 20, 2021  6:52 PM)eggblader Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  6:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Cosmic Valkyrie 12Vortex Power -Sword

Metal Ring: -Sword - feaatures 3 sword like blades.

Layer: Cosmic Valkyrie (CV) - has the traditional Valkyrie shape. Between the 3 swords is a gold rubber wing. The 3 swords tips are pointed forward for major damage.

Disk: 12Vortex

Driver: Power

Owner: Vala Aoi

Moves: Cosmic Saber, Rush Shoot

whos vala aoi. valts kid? im not gonna say who he married cuz that might start a war. so is if valts kid? or second cousin removed or something.

Confirming it now! Yes it is Valts kid (Daughter more specifically)
Phantom Fafnir Ratchet Absorb -Drain

Metal Ring: -Drain: Has the same shape as Geist

Layer: Phantom Fafnir (PF) - a rounder Geist Fafnir but with slightly more rubber (about as much as Wizard but not too much)

Disk: Ratchet

Driver: Absorb

Owner: Far De La Hoya (Son of Free)

Special Moves: Phantom Spin, Phantom Claw, Absorb Break


(Ragnaruk is in the post above)
Havoc Satan Hurricane Roller-Hell

Metal Ring: -Hell: a triangulur metal ring with 3 trident like points that poke out

Layer: Havoc Satan (HS) a overall bulker version of Kreis Satan with Metal Rollers

Disk: Hurricane

Driver: Roller (Rl) - a driver similar to Loop. the ball tip is free spin like Orbit and there are 4 Rollers surrounding the ball to keep the bey upright.

Owner: Sora Karlisle (son of Sisco)

Special Moves: Roller Defense, Roller Drift, Roller Drive
Character Contest soon.
Awesome I think I can come up with something?
Form for character contest

*Your bey MUST be apart of the Angel Layer System which is a Metal Ring and Layer, refer to the bottom of this post for taken Metal Rings. You must come up with your own or you have the option to let me come up with one.*

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Height:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Beyblade Name:

Beyblade Parts: (if new parts, please describe them)

Beyblade Type:

Appearance:

Personality:

Special Moves:


Taken Metal Rings
(Apr. 26, 2021  9:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Form for character contest

*Your bey MUST be apart of the Angel Layer System which is a Metal Ring and Layer, refer to the bottom of this post for taken Metal Rings. You must come up with your own or you have the option to let me come up with one.*

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Height:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Beyblade Name:

Beyblade Type:

Appearance:

Personality:

Special Moves:


Taken Metal Rings

OH NICE! I CAN'T WAIT TO MAKE MY OC AND BEY!
(Apr. 26, 2021  9:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Form for character contest

*Your bey MUST be apart of the Angel Layer System which is a Metal Ring and Layer, refer to the bottom of this post for taken Metal Rings. You must come up with your own or you have the option to let me come up with one.*

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Height:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Beyblade Name:

Beyblade Type:

Appearance:

Personality:

Special Moves:


Taken Metal Rings

Can I make my now and post it on this thread or on the day that the character contest start
(Apr. 26, 2021  9:09 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote:
(Apr. 26, 2021  9:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Form for character contest

*Your bey MUST be apart of the Angel Layer System which is a Metal Ring and Layer, refer to the bottom of this post for taken Metal Rings. You must come up with your own or you have the option to let me come up with one.*

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Height:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Beyblade Name:

Beyblade Type:

Appearance:

Personality:

Special Moves:


Taken Metal Rings

Can I make my now and post it on this thread or on the day that the character contest start

the contest starts today so yes.
Ok thanks for knowing

(Apr. 26, 2021  9:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Form for character contest

*Your bey MUST be apart of the Angel Layer System which is a Metal Ring and Layer, refer to the bottom of this post for taken Metal Rings. You must come up with your own or you have the option to let me come up with one.*

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Height:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Beyblade Name:

Beyblade Type:

Appearance:

Personality:

Special Moves:


Taken Metal Rings

Name: Izuki Anamo

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Height: 5’4

Hair Color: Purple

Eye Color: Cyan

Beyblade Name: Power Destroyer

Disc: Demon

Driver: Vn

Metal Ring: Destroy

Layer: Power

Appearance: A black dragon with white claws, has purple eyes, and black skin.

Beyblade Type: Balance

Personality: Nice, but one day he felt power from his beyblade.

Special Moves: Destroyer Dive, Power Slash, Dark Teleportation, Power Boost, Destroyer Shoot, Ultimate Destroyer Shoot, and Dark Ability.
(Apr. 26, 2021  9:38 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Ok thanks for knowing

(Apr. 26, 2021  9:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Form for character contest

*Your bey MUST be apart of the Angel Layer System which is a Metal Ring and Layer, refer to the bottom of this post for taken Metal Rings. You must come up with your own or you have the option to let me come up with one.*

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Height:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Beyblade Name:

Beyblade Type:

Appearance:

Personality:

Special Moves:


Taken Metal Rings

Name: Izuki Anamo

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Height: 5’4

Hair Color: Purple

Eye Color: Cyan

Beyblade Name: Power Destroyer

Metal Ring: Destroy

Layer: Power

Angel Core: Destroyer

Appearance: A black dragon with white claws, has purple eyes, and black skin.

Beyblade Type: Balance

Personality: Nice, but one day he felt power from his beyblade.

Special Moves: Destroyer Dive, Power Slash, Dark Teleportation, Power Boost, Destroyer Shoot, Ultimate Destroyer Shoot, and Dark Ability.

cool. and Parts?

(also there is no Angel Core, its just one fused Layer with a Metal Ring)
Ok so can i edit it for a few minutes

(Apr. 26, 2021  9:38 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Ok thanks for knowing

(Apr. 26, 2021  9:01 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Form for character contest

*Your bey MUST be apart of the Angel Layer System which is a Metal Ring and Layer, refer to the bottom of this post for taken Metal Rings. You must come up with your own or you have the option to let me come up with one.*

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Height:

Hair Color:

Eye Color:

Beyblade Name:

Beyblade Type:

Appearance:

Personality:

Special Moves:


Taken Metal Rings

Name: Izuki Anamo

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Height: 5’4

Hair Color: Purple

Eye Color: Cyan

Beyblade Name: Power Destroyer

Metal Ring: Destroy

Layer: Power

Appearance: A black dragon with white claws, has purple eyes, and black skin.

Beyblade Type: Balance

Personality: Nice, but one day he felt power from his beyblade.

Special Moves: Destroyer Dive, Power Slash, Dark Teleportation, Power Boost, Destroyer Shoot, Ultimate Destroyer Shoot, and Dark Ability.

Don’t look what i posted I was trying to update my post


But luckily I updated it.
(Apr. 26, 2021  9:55 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Ok so can i edit it for a few minutes

(Apr. 26, 2021  9:38 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Ok thanks for knowing


Name: Izuki Anamo

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Height: 5’4

Hair Color: Purple

Eye Color: Cyan

Beyblade Name: Power Destroyer

Metal Ring: Destroy

Layer: Power

Appearance: A black dragon with white claws, has purple eyes, and black skin.

Beyblade Type: Balance

Personality: Nice, but one day he felt power from his beyblade.

Special Moves: Destroyer Dive, Power Slash, Dark Teleportation, Power Boost, Destroyer Shoot, Ultimate Destroyer Shoot, and Dark Ability.

Don’t look what i posted I was trying to update my post


But luckily I updated it.

but what is the disk and driver?
Ok I’ll update it

I did update my post right now
So, where do I describe the Bey parts? Under the Type category?
I did it under the bey name
(Apr. 26, 2021  10:06 PM)PinkRose Wrote: So, where do I describe the Bey parts? Under the Type category?

sure that'll work.
I have a question when will the contest end?