I can't draw, but I have an idea of what it would look like.
Core -  Coyote
Blade - shadow
like the dark fusion wheel but 5 bladed and can switch between fang mode (5 bladed mode) and stay mode (circle mode)
Disk - pressure
An 8 winged disk that makes a lot of downforce
Driver - fusion'
Superweight - 6

As nice these ideas are please keep in mind that these thread isn’t exactly for drawing but it’s still a very cool idea nonetheless

Ok fair point

Beyblade Characters Birthdays:
Alex Akane - 2/24
Ron Kiowa - 3/18
Gale Ten - 7/27
Alice Luna - 3/1
Big New Character Reveals!
Conner Clouse - Destructive Charon. Punish. Beam. Superweight 10
Main Qutor - Shinning Michael. Light. High. Superweight 11
Phil Pinch - Proficient Phoenix. Burn. Friction. Superweight 12

Hey
I made my own beyblade thread called "beyblade burst all stars" you should check it out if you want

Hey
I made my own beyblade thread called "beyblade burst all stars" you should check it out if you want

I have checked it out

Cool
thank you

Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 2 Sneak Peak:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Bully 1: Your such a loser!
Ron eyes starts to tear up
Ron: Why are you doing this to me!?
Bully 2: Because only little kids play with Beyblades grow up!
Ron makes a shocked face
Both of the bully’s laugh and walks off
Ron stays their laying on the ground
Ron (thoughts): Is Beyblade really just for little kids?

Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 2 Sneak Peak (2):

Spoiler (Click to View)

Rolo is walking down the street thinking
Rolo (thoughts): I can’t let those bully stop me from doing what I love!
Rolo smiles
Rolo (thoughts): Time to make my own Cyber bey!
Rolo runs down the street determined to make his new bey

Something else I want to mention…
The Cyber Crush design contest starts today and ends next Saturday!
Here’s how it works:

Core

Cyber Blade 

Disk

Driver

Super weight

Whoever wins will get their character and bey a special episode!

So what are you waiting for!? Join the contest today!

Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 2 Sneak Peak (2):

Spoiler (Click to View)

Rolo is walking down the street thinking
Rolo (thoughts): I can’t let those bully stop me from doing what I love!
Rolo smiles
Rolo (thoughts): Time to make my own Cyber bey!
Rolo runs down the street determined to make his new bey

Something else I want to mention…
The Cyber Crush design contest starts today and ends next Saturday!
Here’s how it works:

Core

Cyber Blade 

Disk

Driver

Super weight

Whoever wins will get their character and bey a special episode!

So what are you waiting for!? Join the contest today!

Name: Vincent Green

Age: 15

Birthday: April 16th

Height: 5'9" (175 cm)

Weight: 137 lbs (62 kg)

Appearance: Vincent is a very athletic and buff kid with black hair that goes in multiple directions with four big blobs of hair shaped like triangles  going to the left of his head with four others going to the right of his head while the rest of the hair goes down to cover his forehead and the hair being short in the back only covering the back of his head and not going to the neck. Vincent's eyes are black in color but change to silver when he goes into his resonance state. Vincent's casual outfit consists of a white t-shirt with an orange and brown zip up jacket left unzipped, green pants with a brown belt, and brown sneakers. His blading outfit though is a blue t-shirt under an orange undershirt, orange pants with a blue long cloth tied to the waste for the use as a belt, blue boots, and two blue wristbands with one on each wrist.

Aura/Resonance: When Vincent goes into his resonance state his eyes with turn grey and a blue aura is released with the blader powers up. Though that aura then disappears automatically as all of that power released from going into the resonance state is then given to his bey. The only way to notice if Vincent is still in his resonance state is to look at the colors of his eyes where even if the aura is gone the eyes will still stay silver till Vincent leaves that state and they turn back to black.  The eyes of Vincent's bey's avatar will also change to silver when it's in its resonance state to show a connection between Vincent and itself.

Personality/origins: Vincent is a kind caring child who loves to battle strong opponents and get stronger so he completer his goal  which is to become the strongest blader ever. Vincent lives with his grandpa due to the tragic passing of his father and mother which is one of the reasons he is kinda to people as he understands the pain of loss and doesn't want to bring pain onto others. Vincent is also a big eater as he needs to consume a lot of calories so he can keep the strength he has currently. Vincent is also the leader of a bey club at his school which contains six people with one of those members being his rival, Victor who wants to become the strongest in the world just like Vincent and is neck and neck in power with Vincent.

Beyblade: Cannon Vanara.Two.Rise.Superweight Pro

Core: Vanara (A orange right spinning core which has the avatar of Vanara in the center which is a monkey with silver hair,  wearing a orange robes, blue eyes, yellow necklace, and having a golden staff.)

Cyber Blade: Cannon (A orange right spinning cyber blade which is pretty round but has three blue plastic blades that can be released to be used for Vanara's special moves.)

Disk: Two (A disc which has blue plastic that surrounds the metal of the disc with the plastic having many ragged edges.)

Driver: Rise (Just a normal rise driver which is orange in color.)

Super Weight: Pro (A super weight which is split between four main metal points which causes the weight of the super weight to be distributed evenly throughout the bey.)

Type: Right spinning stamina

Special Moves:
Vanara's Force: When spinning at high speed Vanara is able to release the blue wings on the Cannon blade and use the wings to generate a upward force of wind and create a tornado which blocks all upward attacks sent at Vanara.

Vanara's Roar: When spinning at high speeds Vanara is able to generate a cyclone around itself by using the blades on the Cannon blade. Which increases Vanara's speed and attack power.

Vanara's Blow: By using the rim of Rise Vanara is able to grind on the stadium and gain a speed and attack power boost.

Vanara's Instinct: Unlike other bladers Vanara and Vincent have grown their resonance to such a extreme that Vincent doesn't always have to control Vanara and if Vincent's reaction time is too slow, Vanara's avatar is able to awaken and go into a state where it goes on auto pilot and fights on its own. Which gives it a speed boost as Vanara is able to react on its own to things and use the most efficient way to get out of the situation. This technique is used usually to dodge a fast attack type's attack by allowing Vanara to dodge the attack on its own if Vincent isn't able react to it and gain a advantage when fighting another bey by allowing Vanara to attack a opponent's bey in the most efficient way possible. To tell if Vanara is in this state or not Vanara will glow white with a blue aura coming off itself if it is using the technique.

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The episode for the character whoever wins the contest will be Episode 14.

Something else I want to mention…
The Cyber Crush design contest starts today and ends next Saturday!
Here’s how it works:

Core

Cyber Blade 

Disk

Driver

Super weight

Whoever wins will get their character and bey a special episode!

So what are you waiting for!? Join the contest today!

Name: Zeno Takei

Age: 13

Height: 5'6

Birthday: 12/25

Appearance: Spikey hair with yellow on the right and white on the left. A black arm guard on the right, his launching hand. An open white jacket with sleeves cut off at the shoulders and a black shirt. White shorts and yellow high tops with white highlights. More on the scrawny side.

Personality: While seeming not that mean. Zeno is easily irritable and seems to hold grudges over hilariously small reasons. Despite this, Zeno can be quite helpful although in a very bluntly rude way, although many tend to take it the wrong way. He also has a form of resentment for literally anyone who's more popular than him, and attempts to assert he is better than everyone. This personality sprouted through means no one other than Zeno himself knows, yet doesn't want to share.

Vie Zelus Zero Quick'-SuperWeight 4
Vie: A four sided Cyber Blade with white and accents of gold, it's shape has similarities to that of Z Achilles, although it has more aggressive contact points..
Zelus: A yellow, white, and black core depicting that of the Greek God of Jealousy and Rivalry. Features metal on the outer edges of the core, similar to the Perseus core from DB
Zero: A disc that prioritizes weight and not much else.
Quick': I think you've seen this one before.
SuperWeight 4: A SuperWeight with 4 main points of weight, perfect for two sided beys.

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Since I was bored I was thinking of something kinda interesting…

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Basically when you look at the custom products for Cyber Crush listings you’ll realize the months I post the new episodes line up wit the release of the beys (of course there not real). So I thought of treating the beys like they were actually releasing as if they are tt beys.
For example every month corocoro has news on new beys…
So let’s say Cyber Crush was an actual series from tt
January corocoro (last month) would probably reveal the Cyber Crush series anime poster, and reveal Cyber Aires, Guardian Roc, and Flame Griffin and their parts. Also probably get manga poster for series as well. For this month’s corocoro you would most likely get a reveal of the first random booster with Bright Athena and the rest of rb. So maybe every month I would pretend like if there was news in corocoro like if Cyber Crush was REAL. I dunno it just be kind of interesting in a good way 🤔
I know it’s a weird idea but it would keep the thread alive (sorta)

Also character contest is still going on until next Saturday so if you want to join this would be the time
People In So Far Include’s…
The Goat0531
And
greg8972
So hurry up because time’s running out! (If you want to join anyways)

Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 2 Sneak Peak (2):

Spoiler (Click to View)

Rolo is walking down the street thinking
Rolo (thoughts): I can’t let those bully stop me from doing what I love!
Rolo smiles
Rolo (thoughts): Time to make my own Cyber bey!
Rolo runs down the street determined to make his new bey

Something else I want to mention…
The Cyber Crush design contest starts today and ends next Saturday!
Here’s how it works:

Core

Cyber Blade 

Disk

Driver

Super weight

Whoever wins will get their character and bey a special episode!

So what are you waiting for!? Join the contest today!

Ok
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Character

Spoiler (Click to View)

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Name: Theano Achlys
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Age: 13 (Alex is 10!?)
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Gender: Female
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Nationality: Greek
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Appearance: A bobbed black hair with a "hellfire blue" color on the inside. Hellfire blue eyes. Black short nails. Gray blouson sleeve shirt tucked on black Cullotes with a silver button. Above the blouson there’s a hellfire blue capelet with three silver buttons. Gray boots.
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Personality - She's an witty teen and maybe a bit emo, though she says that's not a phase. She has a big fear tolerance, to the point you might feel she is fearless, the type of person that watches horror films for fun and can pick a cockroach without flinching (she still feels disgust). She doesn't understand the concept of personal space and likes to taunt everyone, but it's all just harmless fun. If you befriend her, you'll see that she's just acting tuff on the outside. She is a bit ambitious and anticipative.
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Extras: Her family is as happy as it gets, what a huge contrast she makes. She is adopted, not a big deal for her though. She'll love to have a conversation about anything horror-related.

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Bey:

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Cyber Blade - Anguish: A left spin attack type symmetrical cyber blade with a slight elliptical shape. It features two long jaggy wing-like blades on opposing sides and two opposing sword-like spikes coming out from the gap between said "wings" (picture a shape somewhat similar to Beat Lynx in Attack Mode). These aforementioned spikes create a big smash attack point, but it also gives recoil.
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Cyber Core - Thanatos: A left spin Cyber Core that features a horizontal motif: A figure with a grimm look wearing a greek helmet, it represents its namesake: Thanatos, the Greek personification of death. There seems to have two sets of wings coming out of it, fitting with the Anguish's wing-like blades.
Teeth position: 2 above average teeth, 1 huge tooth (takes the spot of 2. Not unburstable btw).
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Superweight - 13: A superweight with average weight. It features one weight on one side and 3 on the other, increasing attack. It is not much unbalanced.
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Disc - Vicious: A Disc that is low mode compatible. The disc features an elliptical shape with a small metal perimeter to make it circular. The weight perfectly aligns with Anguish's spike-blades after 2 clicks.
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Driver - High Xterminate': An attack type driver that features a Rubber hole flat tip. It can reach incredible speeds.

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Special moves ig

Spoiler (Click to View)

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Anguishing Hammer: Thanatos hits the opponent with it's swords after two clicks, dealing major damage.
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Vicious Strike: Thanatos speeds up and takes a sharp turn to hit the opponent.
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Xterminate Shoot: Thanatos speeds around the tornado ridge with great speed.

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Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 2 Sneak Peak (2):

Spoiler (Click to View)

Rolo is walking down the street thinking
Rolo (thoughts): I can’t let those bully stop me from doing what I love!
Rolo smiles
Rolo (thoughts): Time to make my own Cyber bey!
Rolo runs down the street determined to make his new bey

Something else I want to mention…
The Cyber Crush design contest starts today and ends next Saturday!
Here’s how it works:

Core

Cyber Blade 

Disk

Driver

Super weight

Whoever wins will get their character and bey a special episode!

So what are you waiting for!? Join the contest today!

Character: Hector Torro

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Appearance: blue glide suit with black gloves and boots with an hawk symbol on the back.

Personally: an excited blader who loves the sky, he is always excited for the next challenge any blader can give him.

Beyblade:

Core - Hawktrose (Hawk - trose)

Blade - wing (a blade with a wing design that creates upforce allowing the beyblade to hover around the stadium)

Disk - hover (a disk with 8 wings that creates massive upforce)

Driver - surface (like wide defense for burst)

Superweight - light (a superweight with a wing like design that is lightweight)

Special moves:
Hawk flyer
Hawk smashing claw

Participants In Character Contest So Far:
The Goat0531
Hollowmind13
Turbo blader
Greg8972
If You Want To Be The Next Join Soon!
Remember Whoever wins will get there character and Bey to appear in Episode 14 & 15!
Maybe I’ll send the winner something special as well… 😏

Spoiler (Click to View)

Also I if there were actual Cyber Crush products then expect the design contest bey to be a rare type bey (similar to Brave Solomon or Dynamite Persus) except way better

Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 2 Sneak Peak (3):

Spoiler (Click to View)

Ron: It’s done!
Ron holds up his bey
Ron: Guardian Roc is born!
Ron (thoughts): Now it’s time for me to make my mark on the world!
Ron smiles

Since this is the final sneak peak for episode 2 stay tuned for it on Wednesday February 22 at 6pm CT!

Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 2:
Protection! Guardian Roc!

Spoiler (Click to View)

We see Ron walking down the sidewalk

Ron: Hmm..

Two bullies then come out of nowhere and push him

Ron falls to the ground

Ron: Hey!

The two bullies laugh

Bully 1: Such a loser and a baby!

Bully 2: Yeah!

Ron eyes start to tear up

Ron: Why are you doing this to me!?

Bully 1: Because you play Beyblade which only little kids play!

Bully 2: Yeah!

Ron: No Beyblade is for everyone!

Bully 1: Nah only 5 year olds play that! Grow up.

Both bullies laugh and walks off

Ron: Is Beyblade really just for little kids?

A few days later…

Alex is standing outside looking around for Ron

Alex: Ron where did ya go!?

Ron appears in a black shirt and jacket with sun glasses

Alex: Uh why are you dressed like this?

Ron: I quit Beyblade.

Alex makes a shocked face

Alex: Why!? you love it.

Ron: Only losers play that!

Alex sighs

Alex: Did those guys bully you again?

Ron: What if they did…?

Alex: Ron, you shouldn’t let jerks hurt you and change you just be yourself!

Ron: The old me long gone!

Alex uses his hand to slap his face

Alex: Oh man…

The two bullies then come

Ron: Ay! What’s up!

The bullies look at Ron confused

Ron: Uh… dab me up!

The bullies then laugh

Bully 1: Really!?

Ron looks confused and takes off glasses

Ron: What’s wrong? You don’t want to be my friend?

Bully 2: Uh no.

Ron: But I stopped Beyblade!

Bully 1: For only a few days! Plus even if you did stop nobody would want to be friends with you!

Alex: Hey back off!

The bullies look at Alex then walk off

Bully 2: You guys are both losers anyway!

Alex makes a angry face

Alex then looks around and realizes Ron is gone

Alex: Not again… Ron!?

Ron is walking down the sidewalk crying

Ron then wiped his tears away

Ron: Enough of this. It’s time for me to do what I love!

Ron takes off his black jacket and runs home

Ron: I’m going to create my own Beyblade and start my own new era!

Ron while at home in basement

Ron is typing on computer

Ron: Hmmm…

The computer shows facts about the Cyber Crush system

Ron: So there’s these parts: Core, Superweight, Blade, Disk and of course the driver huh!?

Ron: Well let’s see more about it…

The computer says that the Superweight helps add a lot of weight to the bey and gives it more power

Ron smiles

Two hours later…

Ron holds up his bey

Ron: It’s complete! Guardian Roc!

Ron (thoughts): Now it’s time to show Alex my new creation! He he! And it’s now time for me to make my mark on the world!

Meanwhile at  bc sol…

???: Go Valkyrie!

Valkyrie spins around the stadium

Random kid runs up to the person while holding a iPad

Random Kid: Valt! Valt! Look at this!

Video of Alex vs Ron’s battle shows

Valt: Cyber system huh?

Valt smiles

Someone walks up to Valt

???: Seems like a new era of Beyblade begins huh?

Valt: Yes Free!

We see a shot of Free smiling

To be continued…

Next Episode: Cyber Battle!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!

Hope you enjoyed that episode! Next Episode releases next Wednesday! Remember character contest ends Saturday!
Ratings would also be welcomed. See ya later ✌️

What to expect in episode 3

Spoiler (Click to View)

Expect to see Alex and Ron go at it with there beys.
And maybe see more of Valt and Free.

Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 2:
Protection! Guardian Roc!

Spoiler (Click to View)

We see Ron walking down the sidewalk

Ron: Hmm..

Two bullies then come out of nowhere and push him

Ron falls to the ground

Ron: Hey!

The two bullies laugh

Bully 1: Such a loser and a baby!

Bully 2: Yeah!

Ron eyes start to tear up

Ron: Why are you doing this to me!?

Bully 1: Because you play Beyblade which only little kids play!

Bully 2: Yeah!

Ron: No Beyblade is for everyone!

Bully 1: Nah only 5 year olds play that! Grow up.

Both bullies laugh and walks off

Ron: Is Beyblade really just for little kids?

A few days later…

Alex is standing outside looking around for Ron

Alex: Ron where did ya go!?

Ron appears in a black shirt and jacket with sun glasses

Alex: Uh why are you dressed like this?

Ron: I quit Beyblade.

Alex makes a shocked face

Alex: Why!? you love it.

Ron: Only losers play that!

Alex sighs

Alex: Did those guys bully you again?

Ron: What if they did…?

Alex: Ron, you shouldn’t let jerks hurt you and change you just be yourself!

Ron: The old me long gone!

Alex uses his hand to slap his face

Alex: Oh man…

The two bullies then come

Ron: Ay! What’s up!

The bullies look at Ron confused

Ron: Uh… dab me up!

The bullies then laugh

Bully 1: Really!?

Ron looks confused and takes off glasses

Ron: What’s wrong? You don’t want to be my friend?

Bully 2: Uh no.

Ron: But I stopped Beyblade!

Bully 1: For only a few days! Plus even if you did stop nobody would want to be friends with you!

Alex: Hey back off!

The bullies look at Alex then walk off

Bully 2: You guys are both losers anyway!

Alex makes a angry face

Alex then looks around and realizes Ron is gone

Alex: Not again… Ron!?

Ron is walking down the sidewalk crying

Ron then wiped his tears away

Ron: Enough of this. It’s time for me to do what I love!

Ron takes off his black jacket and runs home

Ron: I’m going to create my own Beyblade and start my own new era!

Ron while at home in basement

Ron is typing on computer

Ron: Hmmm…

The computer shows facts about the Cyber Crush system

Ron: So there’s these parts: Core, Superweight, Blade, Disk and of course the driver huh!?

Ron: Well let’s see more about it…

The computer says that the Superweight helps add a lot of weight to the bey and gives it more power

Ron smiles

Two hours later…

Ron holds up his bey

Ron: It’s complete! Guardian Roc!

Ron (thoughts): Now it’s time to show Alex my new creation! He he! And it’s now time for me to make my mark on the world!

Meanwhile at  bc sol…

???: Go Valkyrie!

Valkyrie spins around the stadium

Random kid runs up to the person while holding a iPad

Random Kid: Valt! Valt! Look at this!

Video of Alex vs Ron’s battle shows

Valt: Cyber system huh?

Valt smiles

Someone walks up to Valt

???: Seems like a new era of Beyblade begins huh?

Valt: Yes Free!

We see a shot of Free smiling

To be continued…

Next Episode: Cyber Battle!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!

Hope you enjoyed that episode! Next Episode releases next Wednesday! Remember character contest ends Saturday!
Ratings would also be welcomed. See ya later ✌️

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The title is a weak start.
Ron seems a bit too fragile for his age, though he is bullied and I'd never been so idk how he'd act.
Alex isn't much there and that's fine, it's not his chapter per say.
Seeing Ron try to befriend them is... Odd. It's established that they bully him so I'd expect him to not do that, but maybe he's innocent idk, it's your character. The bullies were also done oddly, and by that I mean they feel generic (well, they are meant to I guess, but calling someone a baby is just... How can I say it... ¿Retro? Idk)
The length is a hard thing to judge, everyone has their preferences. For me it was bit short.
The computer scenes feel weird, and by that I mean you describing what it says, it feels exposition-y in a way with the "the computer says ...", Maybe Ron could read and react?
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Example: Ron: "Well, let's see more about it."
Ron clicks on superweight
Ron: "Hm, 'a metal piece that gives weight and power'..."
Ron smiles
Ron: "Now we're talking!"
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Something like that I guess.
Anyways, Ron getting Roc because he notices that he rathers doing something he loves than follow the "big guys" is cool, didn't reach it's full potential, but cool nonetheless. Alex was fine there too, hopefully he's still worried for Ron after that. Valt section is fine, it's the classical "the legends are watching" scene.
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I'm just offering my POV on things. Hopefully I wasn't mean or too critical or anything like that (I do struggle with that)

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I'm the original creator of "Welcome to the WBO".
Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 2:
Protection! Guardian Roc!

Spoiler (Click to View)

We see Ron walking down the sidewalk

Ron: Hmm..

Two bullies then come out of nowhere and push him

Ron falls to the ground

Ron: Hey!

The two bullies laugh

Bully 1: Such a loser and a baby!

Bully 2: Yeah!

Ron eyes start to tear up

Ron: Why are you doing this to me!?

Bully 1: Because you play Beyblade which only little kids play!

Bully 2: Yeah!

Ron: No Beyblade is for everyone!

Bully 1: Nah only 5 year olds play that! Grow up.

Both bullies laugh and walks off

Ron: Is Beyblade really just for little kids?

A few days later…

Alex is standing outside looking around for Ron

Alex: Ron where did ya go!?

Ron appears in a black shirt and jacket with sun glasses

Alex: Uh why are you dressed like this?

Ron: I quit Beyblade.

Alex makes a shocked face

Alex: Why!? you love it.

Ron: Only losers play that!

Alex sighs

Alex: Did those guys bully you again?

Ron: What if they did…?

Alex: Ron, you shouldn’t let jerks hurt you and change you just be yourself!

Ron: The old me long gone!

Alex uses his hand to slap his face

Alex: Oh man…

The two bullies then come

Ron: Ay! What’s up!

The bullies look at Ron confused

Ron: Uh… dab me up!

The bullies then laugh

Bully 1: Really!?

Ron looks confused and takes off glasses

Ron: What’s wrong? You don’t want to be my friend?

Bully 2: Uh no.

Ron: But I stopped Beyblade!

Bully 1: For only a few days! Plus even if you did stop nobody would want to be friends with you!

Alex: Hey back off!

The bullies look at Alex then walk off

Bully 2: You guys are both losers anyway!

Alex makes a angry face

Alex then looks around and realizes Ron is gone

Alex: Not again… Ron!?

Ron is walking down the sidewalk crying

Ron then wiped his tears away

Ron: Enough of this. It’s time for me to do what I love!

Ron takes off his black jacket and runs home

Ron: I’m going to create my own Beyblade and start my own new era!

Ron while at home in basement

Ron is typing on computer

Ron: Hmmm…

The computer shows facts about the Cyber Crush system

Ron: So there’s these parts: Core, Superweight, Blade, Disk and of course the driver huh!?

Ron: Well let’s see more about it…

The computer says that the Superweight helps add a lot of weight to the bey and gives it more power

Ron smiles

Two hours later…

Ron holds up his bey

Ron: It’s complete! Guardian Roc!

Ron (thoughts): Now it’s time to show Alex my new creation! He he! And it’s now time for me to make my mark on the world!

Meanwhile at  bc sol…

???: Go Valkyrie!

Valkyrie spins around the stadium

Random kid runs up to the person while holding a iPad

Random Kid: Valt! Valt! Look at this!

Video of Alex vs Ron’s battle shows

Valt: Cyber system huh?

Valt smiles

Someone walks up to Valt

???: Seems like a new era of Beyblade begins huh?

Valt: Yes Free!

We see a shot of Free smiling

To be continued…

Next Episode: Cyber Battle!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!

Hope you enjoyed that episode! Next Episode releases next Wednesday! Remember character contest ends Saturday!
Ratings would also be welcomed. See ya later ✌️

. 
The title is a weak start.
Ron seems a bit too fragile for his age, though he is bullied and I'd never been so idk how he'd act.
Alex isn't much there and that's fine, it's not his chapter per say.
Seeing Ron try to befriend them is... Odd. It's established that they bully him so I'd expect him to not do that, but maybe he's innocent idk, it's your character. The bullies were also done oddly, and by that I mean they feel generic (well, they are meant to I guess, but calling someone a baby is just... How can I say it... ¿Retro? Idk)
The length is a hard thing to judge, everyone has their preferences. For me it was bit short.
The computer scenes feel weird, and by that I mean you describing what it says, it feels exposition-y in a way with the "the computer says ...", Maybe Ron could read and react?
.
Example: Ron: "Well, let's see more about it."
Ron clicks on superweight
Ron: "Hm, 'a metal piece that gives weight and power'..."
Ron smiles
Ron: "Now we're talking!"
.
Something like that I guess.
Anyways, Ron getting Roc because he notices that he rathers doing something he loves than follow the "big guys" is cool, didn't reach it's full potential, but cool nonetheless. Alex was fine there too, hopefully he's still worried for Ron after that. Valt section is fine, it's the classical "the legends are watching" scene.
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I'm just offering my POV on things. Hopefully I wasn't mean or too critical or anything like that (I do struggle with that) :dj2002:

Nah it's all good thanks for the criticism. I'll try to improve with the next episodes!
One question I do have is what do you mean by weak start?

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Spoiler (Click to View)

The title is a weak start.
Ron seems a bit too fragile for his age, though he is bullied and I'd never been so idk how he'd act.
Alex isn't much there and that's fine, it's not his chapter per say.
Seeing Ron try to befriend them is... Odd. It's established that they bully him so I'd expect him to not do that, but maybe he's innocent idk, it's your character. The bullies were also done oddly, and by that I mean they feel generic (well, they are meant to I guess, but calling someone a baby is just... How can I say it... ¿Retro? Idk)
The length is a hard thing to judge, everyone has their preferences. For me it was bit short.
The computer scenes feel weird, and by that I mean you describing what it says, it feels exposition-y in a way with the "the computer says ...", Maybe Ron could read and react?
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Example: Ron: "Well, let's see more about it."
Ron clicks on superweight
Ron: "Hm, 'a metal piece that gives weight and power'..."
Ron smiles
Ron: "Now we're talking!"
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Something like that I guess.
Anyways, Ron getting Roc because he notices that he rathers doing something he loves than follow the "big guys" is cool, didn't reach it's full potential, but cool nonetheless. Alex was fine there too, hopefully he's still worried for Ron after that. Valt section is fine, it's the classical "the legends are watching" scene.

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I'm just offering my POV on things. Hopefully I wasn't mean or too critical or anything like that (I do struggle with that)

Nah it's all good thanks for the criticism. I'll try to improve with the next episodes!
One question I do have is what do you mean by weak start?

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I mean that the title is not that great, imo at least.

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Rank 0 means I'm better than 1°

So since I want to be different there is going to be a different way for you to know if you won the character contest

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Basically I’ll send you something special (nothing crazy but nice), and if you get that message that’s how you pretty much know if you won the contest or not. You would get it on Saturday if you won. Also if you don’t win don’t feel discouraged. It’s not going to be because your character and bey is bad, it’s just that only one can win. Anyways wanted to give an little update.

Happy Birthday To Alex Akane!
Alex is now 12 years old! (you should probably like this post I think that will make Alex very happy)
Here's something nice I made (not connected to the main series)

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Alex Mom: Happy birthday sweetie!
Alex: Thanks mom!
Ron: Yeah happy birthday bro.
Alex: You guys are awesome!
We see Alex standing in front of his birthday cake
Alex Mom: What do you wish for?
Alex: To be the best blader in the world!
Alex blows his candle
Ron: Nice.
Alex smiles
To find out if his wish comes true check out new episodes of Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush every Wednesday!

Tomorrow the character contest ends…so today is your last chance to join…
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Greg8972 is officially the winner of the character contest!
Please Please Please don’t feel discouraged for anyone who lost… losing is apart of life and it’s okay.
Thanks to everyone who joined this contest and put in the hard work to create their character and bey!
I’ll definitely do something like this again in the future if I decide to do Cyber Crush season 2!