Fallen Uprising [Non Beyblade Related Story]

NOTE: This story is based of SAO/SAO II and the characters are based off of real people

After waking up from a coma Keedan Rain is re-adjusting to life and enjoying all its pleasure,including video games.When a new V/RMMO made by the famous developers of Demon Day,Blade Uprising, is set to come out three weeks after Keedans birthday.B.U. has got everyone buzzing.But when the game releases a week early,Teens rush and download it.Turns out that a group known as the "Irregulars" hacked into Vorpal and changed the download date.Teens around the world download it and get an unpleasant supriseGrinie 10 times your memories are erased forever. Now Keedan must beat every boss on Overrealm,Center Earth and Underrealm,to free everyone.


-Prologue-

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