Epic Beystory!Characters & Names Wanted.

Bey of Power Ch.1 The Beginning (Tell Me if it is Good or Not)
Rukari Miyamoto was training with his bey,Energy Drago 90RF, when suddenly he heard a huge explosion."What the" said Rukari in awe as the top of Guardian Mountain exploded. Rukari heard a voice calling him "Come, Rukari, Come." He followed the voice down the street and in to the forest beside the mountain. A Shadowy figure stepped out from the bushes. "I''m Tristan, battle me" said a boy about 12 to 13 wearing a red jacket over a light purple T-shirt and black jeans. Long spikey hair covered the mysterious boys face. "Wha, ok?" said Rukari, scared.
"3,2,1, GOOOO SHOOOOOOOOOOT!" screamed the two bladers. "Go, Feather Gryfon 95MF!" yelled Tristan furiously. The two beys clashed together shooting sparks wherever they went. Gryfon slashed at drago, but drago returned the move."I will destroy you!" said Tristan. "Go, Special Move, Dragon Plasma Blast!" yelled Rukari. Drago flew in to the air and turned into a huge green fireball then shot down at Feather Gryfon. "Go, Special Move, Griffin Wing Slash!"yelled Tristan. Gryfon spun into a small silver tornado of sharp blades propelling itself up into drago. The enormous explosion was so fierce it blew Rukari and Tristan into a tree knocking them out before they could see the winner.
They woke up ten minutes later. "Aw great, just what wanted, a tie" said Rukari angrily. "Nice battle, but I gotta run" said Tristan. "Wait, are you going to the mountain?" said Rukari."Um, Yeah how did you know?" said Tristan puzzled. "Because I'm going to," said Rukari. The two bladers ran up the steps to the mountain and arrived twenty minutes later. "Go, Demon Orso 105HF/S, Special move, Arrow of Death!" said a boy with long red and black hair, a brown jacket, a black jeans and sneakers. His bey shot forward into the smoke and red hot energy arrows shot everywhere destroying everything they hit. Then a glowing, white-hot bey charged at Orso and it came flying into the air then back to the ground, black and smoking. Two glowing red eyes appeared from the mist. "Ha,ha,ha, I have defeated you Jet with my new dark powers!" said the a dark figure stepping out from the mist. A boy with spikey, crimson red hair standing on end, a orange jacket over a red shirt, black jeans with crimson tennis shoes, and a dark, fiery bey in his hand. "I will destroy all bladers who oppose me with my new dark bey, Crimson Hydra 85LRF2!" said the boy. End of Chapter 1
O.o nice
(Mar. 29, 2011  11:23 PM)XXXBeYsTeAleR Wrote: O.o nice
I will post the rest later and I will also post bios of all the characters and their beys.
hey here is a character request

name- Jet
age-12
look- Long red and black hair,brown long jacket over gray shirt,black jeans with spotches of red and black and white sneakers
bio- a crazy kid with super instincts and is an awesome blader.
Bey- Demon Orio105HF/S
special move- arrow of death( spins faster and creates energy then energy shoots out everywhere in form of arrows)...( red colored energy)

so wat ya think
(Mar. 30, 2011  12:37 AM)maroyasha Wrote: hey here is a character request

name- Jet
age-12
look- Long red and black hair,brown long jacket over gray shirt,black jeans with spotches of red and black and white sneakers
bio- a crazy kid with super instincts and is an awesome blader.
Bey- Demon Orio105HF/S
special move- arrow of death( spins faster and creates energy then energy shoots out everywhere in form of arrows)...( red colored energy)

so wat ya think
Awesome. He will probably come in as a minor character though but end as a bigger character. just finished ch.1 (I edited my first post).
Character Bio I only told what was not in the story
Name:Tristan
Bey:Feather Gryfon 90MF
BeyBio:Feather-A Storm metal wheel but instead of the three wings it has three feathers with sharpened points.
Gryphon-Two Eagle wings,heads, and Two lion tails in a circular pattern.Weight-3.0 Grams
SpecialMove:Griffin Slashing Tornado,Griffin Steel Claw, A Griffin flys up and slashing at the opposing beyblade.
Awesome story!!I have a character request:
NameTongue_outhantom
Bey:MF Haunting Phantom F135 IR2F
Gender:Boy
Side:Good or bad...doesnt reall matter to me as long as he's a main character.
Age:15
Type:Attack,Left spin
Bey Descripton:The face bolt says Phantom across and black surrounding the word.:The energy ring is black wth a little shade of dark purple there are P's on the left and right side of the energy ring with an oval in the middle of the ring and spikes surrounding the P's.The fusion wheel ,Haunting, is like pegasis energy ring with the wings only their stickin out of the side of the fusion wheel and there are 3 like the points of a triangle and in the gaps are little needles about 5 millimeters long sticking out too.The spin track ,F135, stands for fabric and it wobbles so when the opponent tries to attack the track they'll just fall over,but it's a mystery how it supports the fusion wheel,energy ring, and facebolt.The performance tip ,Ir2f,stands for invisibleR2f.If you take it off of the spintrack it becomes visible again.
Personality:Mysterious,dark,doesn't talk much,doesnt really use his full power,trustworthy until u make him mad,he's always cool and contained even when he loses,doesn't love any thing exept his family,friends,and bey.He knows karate and only battles strong opponents.
Looks like:He has black eyes,brown drooping hair like reiji over his right eye,he's about 5'11'',wears all black,black jordans,skinny jeans,black open sweatshirt with a black t-shirt,and black gloves that the UFC fighters wear.
Special Move(s):Haunting Soul StrikeTongue_outhantom's symbol flashes and Phantom's bit beast(Grim Reaper) comes out ans scrares the carp outta the opponent and just literally tears apart the other bey and it's spirit and the opponent has a nightmare that looks like his or her soul is being taken so it weakens them.If that doesn't work look at next move.
Absorbing MoveConfusedpirit stealerTongue_outhantom's eyes turn red and lifeless and his bey glows white and just steals spin and looks as if it's invisible and only Phantom can see the bey.
name Myst
age 13
male
look: green eyes brown hair that gos half way down his neck 5ft 5in white jacket orange shirt blue jeans black shoes
bey burnwolf145WD
special Blazing inferno. the bey moves around the stadium at blinding speed leaving a trail of fire behind it
personality calm with a habit of popping up at random places and at time saying completely irrelevant things.
goal to harness the hot iron it the center of the earth to make the ultimate bey
(Mar. 30, 2011  10:53 PM)the_kid98 Wrote: name Myst
age 13
male
look: green eyes brown hair that gos half way down his neck 5ft 5in white jacket orange shirt blue jeans black shoes
bey burnwolf145WD
special Blazing inferno. the bey moves around the stadium at blinding speed leaving a trail of fire behind it
personality calm with a habit of popping up at random places and at time saying completely irrelevant things.
goal to harness the hot iron it the center of the earth to make the ultimate bey
Awesome but he and phantom will not come in until the end of ch.2 because the first half will be the first battle with the main villain.
(Mar. 31, 2011  1:41 AM)BeybladeChaos Wrote:
(Mar. 30, 2011  10:53 PM)the_kid98 Wrote: name Myst
age 13
male
look: green eyes brown hair that gos half way down his neck 5ft 5in white jacket orange shirt blue jeans black shoes
bey burnwolf145WD
special Blazing inferno. the bey moves around the stadium at blinding speed leaving a trail of fire behind it
personality calm with a habit of popping up at random places and at time saying completely irrelevant things.
goal to harness the hot iron it the center of the earth to make the ultimate bey
Awesome but he and phantom will not come in until the end of ch.2 because the first half will be the first battle with the main villain.

kk that's koolio
(Mar. 31, 2011  1:45 AM)C-Dub Wrote:
(Mar. 31, 2011  1:41 AM)BeybladeChaos Wrote:
(Mar. 30, 2011  10:53 PM)the_kid98 Wrote: name Myst
age 13
male
look: green eyes brown hair that gos half way down his neck 5ft 5in white jacket orange shirt blue jeans black shoes
bey burnwolf145WD
special Blazing inferno. the bey moves around the stadium at blinding speed leaving a trail of fire behind it
personality calm with a habit of popping up at random places and at time saying completely irrelevant things.
goal to harness the hot iron it the center of the earth to make the ultimate bey
Awesome but he and phantom will not come in until the end of ch.2 because the first half will be the first battle with the main villain.

kk that's koolio
I need some girl characters!
ill give you TWO characters,one boy and one girl
awesome story,BTW
Bey of Power Chapter 2 A Blazing Battle!
3,2,1, Gooooooooo Shooooooooooooooooooot!!!!!! Drago and Hydra clashed together in a huge array of sparks. "I won't Lose!" said Rukari. "You can not defeat the ultimate bey, Go destroy him Hydra!" said the dark blader. Hydra shot forward chipping off pieces of metal from drago. "Drago, hang in there!"said Rukari. "Dark move, Hydra Inferno Death Destructioooooon, GO!" yelled the blader A Giant, flaming Hydra came out from the dark bey and each of it ten heads shot out a fiery beam blowing up drago and the rest of the stadium. Rukari was blown to the ground. He muttered the words "Who are you?". "Zero" said the the blader. Rukari passed out. (First half of Ch.2)
I have a boy character
Name:Tekashi Rogami
Looks:Long Brown Hair,Light skin,torn black tank top under a dark blue vest, Black fingerless gloves, torn blue jeans and blue eyes
Bey:Charge Capricorne 100MRF(Metal Right Flat)
Side:Good
Special Move:Thunder Storm Screwdriver (The bey Flys into the air so high that it starts to rain then coming down with speeds causing it to conduct electricity. Then hitting the other bey(s) causing them to lose all spin)
Personality:Fun-loving,entergetic
heres 4 characters, nice story

Name: Izuma Inzori
Name: Sonai Inzori
Name: Hatachi Inzori
Name: Rez Inzori
im back with another character
name blaze
beyblade Hell Aries D125DS
appearance he wears a leather long black long sleeve coat that goes down to his feet with black glasses black gloves and shoes a black hat with white hair coming from the back.
age 20s
attitude calm, cruel, smart.
bey special move: hell horn attack
goal to destroy all who are unworthy. and absorb their beys power to make his the perfect bey
Name: Xalpine Hall
Bey:MF Iridium Cepheus ED145 MWD(Metal Wide Defense)
Gender: Male
Side:Good
Age: 17
Appearance: Xalpine wears a black hoodie with a red crown in the upper left corner. He wears black jeans, and black shoes. He has spiky red hair, and red eyes.
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 177 lbs
Type: Defense(Left Spin)
Bey Descripton:
Face: A Crown with Cepheus written under it
Energy Ring: The energy ring is black with three red lines running across it. It resembles eagle.
Fusion Wheel: Iridium is perfectly rounded, and is painted black. There are three crowns engraved into it.
Spin Track: A normal ED145.
Performance Tip: A metal version of wide defense.
Personality: Energetic and Talkative.
Special Move: Execution: Cepheus launches itself into the air, and brings itself down onto the opposing bey. Using its weight, Cepheus forces the face bolt loose, and the opposing bey falls to pieces.