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Poll: How do you like my story?

Dude, your story is lame.
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Its okay. Needs improvement
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You are a talented writer
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Mar. 19, 2011  9:50 PM
 
Character Requests:
Name: Haruki
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Bey: Sun Apollo BS145XRF
Type: Balance
Apollo: Is gold and has the sun's rays around the edges
Sun: Is red and has circles around the edges
BS145: Stands for Blazing Sun 145 looks like BD145 except it's gold and is narrower
XRF: Stands for Xtreme Rubber Flat just a wider RF
Bio: He is the older brother of Tsukiko. He is very aggressive. Like Tsukiko, he is a very strong blader. He is stronger when the sun is shining.
Appearance: Wears a red t-shirt, denim shorts and white sneakers. Has hair similar to Wells's.
Special Moves: Blazing Sun Strike: BS145 catches on fire. Then, Apollo uses XRF to charge at the opponent at the speed of light. Then, Apollo burns a hole in the opponent.
Double Strike: (With Tsukiko) Both blades create one blast that destroys the opponent.

Name: Tsukiko
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Bey: Moon Artemis SM145XRF
Type: Balance
Artemis: Is white and has arrows around the edge
Moon: Is black and has rings for defense
SM145: Stands for Shining Moon 145 looks like D125 with multiple rings
XRF: Stands for Xtreme Rubber Flat just a wider RF
Bio: She is the younger sister of Haruki. She is very calm. Like Haruki, she is a very strong blader. She is stronger when the moon is shining.
Appearance: Wears white t-shirt, black jeans and grey sneakers. Has hair similar to Sophie's.
Special Moves: Shining Moon Strike: The bey starts glowing. Then, it delivers a smashing blow,
forcing a stadium out.
Double Strike: (With Haruki) Both blades create one blast that destroys the opponent.
Mar. 20, 2011  3:56 PM
 
When's the next chapter?
Mar. 20, 2011  7:20 PM
 
(Mar. 19, 2011  9:50 PM)L-Drago rules Wrote: Character Requests:
Name: Haruki
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Bey: Sun Apollo BS145XRF
Type: Balance
Apollo: Is gold and has the sun's rays around the edges
Sun: Is red and has circles around the edges
BS145: Stands for Blazing Sun 145 looks like BD145 except it's gold and is narrower
XRF: Stands for Xtreme Rubber Flat just a wider RF
Bio: He is the older brother of Tsukiko. He is very aggressive. Like Tsukiko, he is a very strong blader. He is stronger when the sun is shining.
Appearance: Wears a red t-shirt, denim shorts and white sneakers. Has hair similar to Wells's.
Special Moves: Blazing Sun Strike: BS145 catches on fire. Then, Apollo uses XRF to charge at the opponent at the speed of light. Then, Apollo burns a hole in the opponent.
Double Strike: (With Tsukiko) Both blades create one blast that destroys the opponent.

Name: Tsukiko
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Bey: Moon Artemis SM145XRF
Type: Balance
Artemis: Is white and has arrows around the edge
Moon: Is black and has rings for defense
SM145: Stands for Shining Moon 145 looks like D125 with multiple rings
XRF: Stands for Xtreme Rubber Flat just a wider RF
Bio: She is the younger sister of Haruki. She is very calm. Like Haruki, she is a very strong blader. She is stronger when the moon is shining.
Appearance: Wears white t-shirt, black jeans and grey sneakers. Has hair similar to Sophie's.
Special Moves: Shining Moon Strike: The bey starts glowing. Then, it delivers a smashing blow,
forcing a stadium out.
Double Strike: (With Haruki) Both blades create one blast that destroys the opponent.
They will not be in the story until the next book.
Mar. 20, 2011  7:24 PM
 
I think it's great can have some room for improvement!
Mar. 20, 2011  8:09 PM
 
Chapter 13- First Battle
We were not that shocked because we had already decided who would be first. Amulina and Joseph stepped up to the Bey Stadium. The countdown started. "3,2,1, GO SHOOT!" yelled both bladers. Both beys started spinning around stadium. "My Storm Hera C145RF/WD was designed to dodge attacks." said Amulina. "Yeah right," said Joseph. With that said, he attempted to attack head on, but Amulina changed the tip at the exact time, and hit Batousai with a blow. "What??" said Joseph confused. Amulina grinned. Batousai kept on try to attack, but failed. Joseph saw that this wasn't taking him anywhere. That's when he figured it out. Joseph attacked, but when Amulina changed the tip, Batousai went around the bey and hit it. At first Amulina thought it was just luck, and the result of that was getting whopped by Batousai 5 more times. "So you discovered my trick. Well you obviously have less stamina, so i will finish it of now!" she said "Go Hera, Hypnosis Strike!". Suddenly Batousai was hitting itself against the wall. Then Joseph found out that there is a gap between each blow. If he makes a counter between that gap, he can attack head on and win. So Joseph went between the gap. "Batousai, Control Central!" commanded Joseph. Batousai immediately stopped being tortured. Amulina tried to use her special move again, but it had no effect. Then Joseph finished it of with his blazing sword attack. We had won the next battle, and it was time for us to pick the next battler. (end of chapter) If you make character requests, they won't be in until a while.
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