EarthAries' Story:Fading Memories ACEPTING CHARACTER REQUEST!!!!!

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Chapter 1:
On an island called Tekrann,there were three friends.The modest one,Kaichi.The fearless one,Qrell.And the humble one,Airios.All three of them trained under their master,Master Nayrn.He taught them how to fight along side their Beys.He said on one day,they would all be whisked away on different journeys and meet together for one last battle against one great evil,and that one of them would be consumed by darkness,and the other two would have to save the warrior,and banish the darkness for ever,by sacrificing all three of them and their Beys.And now,the journey begins...
Master Nayrn:"Go,Chaos Armor!!!"
Master Nayrn rushed at Kaichi,Qrell,and Airios with his golden armor on and his Dawning Chaos blade in his hand running next to his Bey.
Qrell:"Come on Aqua Hydrus!!!"
Kaichi:"Let's get the master Lunar Lynx!!!"
Airios:"Aero Vulcan,atta-AHHHHHHH!!!!
Airios tripped and his Bey stopped right next to him.
Qrell and Konchi:Airios!
Master Nayrn:"Take this!"
Qrell and Konchi flipped back and dodged the master's attack while Nayrn was heading for Airios while he was still on the ground.
Airios:"AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!TELEPORT!!!!!!!"
Airios teleported up onto the roof of the hut castle they live in.
Master Nayrn:"Airios,your suppose to counter attack,not chicken out!"
Airios teleported down,got up,and still tripped.
Kaichi and Qrell chuckled.
Master Nayrn:"Really?"
Kaichi and Qrell quickly quieted down.
Master Nayrn:"Ok,trainning is over today.Meet me in the kitchen for a surprise."
All 3:"A SURPRISE?!?!?!?"
All 3 of them press the button that took of their armor,put their Bey's in their belt holders,and ran to the kitchen inside the castle.
As they ate the surprise(A red velvet cake!),a boy with a mask and armor watched faraway with a weapon in his hand that looks like one of the ones' Master Nayrn,Qrell,Kaichi,or Airios would wield.
???:"You guys won't know what's in store for you..."
End of Chapter 1.
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Chapter 2:
After the red velvet cake time,Airios went to watch TV,Kaichi went to update her Twitter status,and Qrell was reading on his bed.As nighttime arrived,all of them got into their pajamas and went to bed.As they were snoring,a thunderstorm stirred up and dark black and purple portals popped up out of the ground outside the castle.Out of the portals came all kinds of monsters with the same symbol on them.All three of them and the master woke up and raced outside with their Beys spinning next to them and their armor on.In front of them were 1000 of the monsters.And,the masked boy.
Master Nayrn:"Who are you?"
???:"I,am Colend.My Bey is Shadow Draco.I train under Velond and his Bey Blizzard Gryffon along with my sister,Junii, and her Bey Inferno Phoenix.
Qrell:"Why are you here?"
Colend:"I am here to destroy all of you and your island."
Kaichi:"Gasp You can't!It's our home!"
Colend:"Try and stop me!!!
Colend rushed at all four of them and shot out four beams of darkness.They dodged them and all leaped towards Colend.He leaped back and ordered the monsters to attack them while he teleported up to the top of the castle.Colend raised his blade and stabbed the castle.
Master Nayrn:"No!!!"
A vortex appeared and started sucking in all of the monsters and the island in.
Master Nayrn:"All of us must teleport to another world to survive or we will get banished into the Shadow Realm forever!"
All four of them teleported out of the island before the vortex could suck them in and Colend teleported back to his world laughing.At his world,he reported to Velond and was rewarded with another Bey to add to his collection of broken Beys.He looked at all of them and smiled...
End of Chapter 2
goood story character requests!!:
NameConfusedamuel Hasine
Bey:MF Deadly Sniper SD75 RB or MB
Side:Good
Gender:Boy
Age:13
Type:Attack/Stamina
Bey Descripton:The Sniper facebolt has a pistol in the middle and says U.S.A on the top and Army in black bold letters on the bottom with 3 blood spots as the background.The Energy ring is red and has a sniper on opposite sides and bullets curving around with semi circles near the center.The fuson wheel ,Deadly, has three of those blockes like L-Drago's fusion wheel on the top bottom left and right that shows on Rapid attack mode only it's gold and the other spaces are spin absorbing semi-circles made of rubber.The Spin track ,SD75, stands for SurpriseDagger75 it has a dagger that pops out every time an opponent tries to hit the spintrack and it's made of metal.The performance tip ,RB or MB, is shaped like a bullet and it is rubber and the other is metal.
Personality:Cares about his friends,beys,and blading,loyal,honest,trustworthy,ALWAYS wants to battle with someone like Yuu or Ginga,doesn't really like to show full power,funny,takes alot to keep him down and never bakes down from a challange!
Special move #1Eeexpert Sniping Bey Atack:Army turns invisible and hits with deadly attacks then if that doesn't work it just attacks viciously for 30 seconds and uses it's hooks to grab on and slam it to the ground and attack it or fling it at a wall.
Special move #2:Retreating Counterstrike/Escape:This depends on the performance tip if it's on MB it's escape if it's on RB it's counterstrike.
Looks Like:Wears a t-shirt that's gold colered on the front and silver on the back,and wears fingerless ninja gloves the right one is white and the left one is black, and wears red Jordans, and bage shorts,and his skin tone is african american,and has a black small fro, and brown eyes.

Name:Nathainel Hasine
Bey:MF Fierce Hawk Ch135 MT
Age:10
Type:Balance
Bey Description:The facebolt shows the side of a hawks face and the hawk is white and the background is sky blue and it says Hawk in Bold on the bottom.The Energy ring ,Hawk, shows a hawk wings on opposite sides of eack others with lines trailing behind them.The fusion wheel ,Fierce, has beak and talons (metal) on the top,bottom,left,and right side like Flame.The Spintrack ,Ch135, is like Ch120 only it starts at 135 and changes to 230.The tip MT stands for MetalTalon.
Personality:Funny well thinks he's funny,smart for his age,he's loyal like his brothers, and will do ANYTHING to protect them,he likes hawks Alot almost as much as his parents!Good liar,kinda harsh sometimes,and a little bit rough at times.
Looks like:african american skin tone,wears a red t-shirt that says "Hawks KILL!!!" and blue skinny jeans and gray Nike's, and a Lakers hat backwards,and has blue eyes,with a black fade.
Special MoveGrineadly Wing Strike:Hawk flies up and uses it's talons to hook on the other bey and just slams it repedately to the ground.

Name:Keith Hasine
Bey:MF Core Shark F145 CES
Age:12
TypeConfusedtamina
Bey Description:Core is like lightning only it has little fangs and a huge fang like metal in a compartment behind on of the blades and instead of the three blades it's a fin kinda.Shark energy ring:it's like libra only with a shark on the top and bottom and an open jaw (like wolf) on the sides.F145:fangs(rubber) stick down on every little time it gets shorter in length.CES:just like CS but it's plastic is eternal sharp.
Personality:confident in battle and always wants to battle,loyal,trustworthy,couragous too.Side:good
Special Move:Fang Ripper:the extra fang pops out and shark attacks and then does like pegasis starblast attack if it's still spinning.
he wears:an layered tee (Red and Green) Black jeans and red skateboarding sneakers, and has black spikey hair like sora and is african american.