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I made this topic after KoD's idea for us to post out articles here for revising. I am currently in the process of writing a Dragoon S article.
... so why did you post this?
Tamer Brad Wrote:... so why did you post this?

Shhhhh
That's the thing that drives people away from this :p
I would understand if he'd posted this with his draft, but he didn't. Lips_sealed
I thought it'd be some like sample on the wiki, but I guess I'm wrong.
Okay so this is my draft. Is there anything that needs to be worked on? I think there is another version of Dragoon S that has different color stickers, but I didn't put it with other versions because I am not sure of the name.

{{Beybox
| image = Dragoon_S.gif
| full item name = Dragoon S (Storm)
| item number = 34
| beyblade system = [[5-Layer]]
| beyblade type = [[Attack]]
| starter or booster =
}}

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== Attack Ring (AR): Reverse Dragon ==

* '''Weight:''' 5 grams

Reverse Dragon is pretty much useless. It is severely outdated and there are many better choices for attack type purposes.Reverse Dragon was the first attack ring designed for attacking in left spin.


== Weight Disk (WD): 8-Wide ==

See [[8-Wide]].

== Spin Gear (SG): Left SG ==

See [[Left SG]].

== Blade Base (BB): Storm Grip ==

* '''Weight:''' 4 grams

Storm Grip is one of the most popular bases for upper attack types. Storm Grip comes with a flat, rubber tip. This makes combos with Storm Grip very fast and aggressive. One reason why this is one of the best bases for upper attack is it's height. Storm Grip is the lowest base ever created. In order for upper attack to work, your beyblade must me lower than your opponent's. Storm Grip is also the lightest blade base ever created.



=== Use in [Attack]] Customization ===

* '''AR:''' Upper Dragoon ([[Dragoon S]])
* '''WD:''' [[10-Heavy]]
* '''SG:''' [[Neo Right SG]]
* '''SG Core:''' Heavy Metal Core ([[Takara]] [[Metal Driger]])
* '''BB:''' Storm Grip ([[Dragoon S]])

The amazing Upper Attack ability of Upper Dragoon combined with Storm Grip's height and speed makes one of the most effective Upper Attack combinations made.

=== Rule Clarification: Tip Exchange ===

It is '''illegal''' to exchange the tip of SG Metal Change with any other tip.

== Other Versions ==

* [[Dragoon S]] - [[Phantom Force]] Version
* [[Dragoon S]] - [[BBA Championship]] Version
* [[Dragoon S]] - Limited Edition Blue Dragon Version

== Overall ==

Storm Grip Base is an extremely useful part, however the tip wears down very quickly. All serious players should own many copies of Dragoon S.

[[Category:Beyblade]]
Just post the article and show it to us; we can always change it later.
http://beywiki.com/index.php?title=Drago...tomization
It's okay, though one of your links isn't working, the grammar needs to be checked, your spacing is a little off ... I want to see if you can fix the errors yourself. Please double-check it yourself before asking us.
Okay. I fixed it up a bit.
You didn't capitalize or link many terms.
You copied a little from driger s, lol

Quote: Rule Clarification: Tip Exchange

It is illegal to exchange the tip of SG Metal Change with any other tip.

I'll take that part out
More details can be added later from what I skimmed though.

Quote: * AR: Upper Dragoon (Dragoon S)
The amazing Upper Attack ability of Upper Dragoon combined with Storm Grip's height and speed makes one of the most effective Upper Attack combinations made.

I take it you meant Master/Kid Dragoon?
Quote:[edit] Rule Clarification: Tip Exchange

It is illegal to exchange the tip of SG Metal Change with any other tip.
Is that supposed to be there?

Edit:
nm
G Wrote:More details can be added later from what I skimmed though.

Quote: * AR: Upper Dragoon (Dragoon S)
The amazing Upper Attack ability of Upper Dragoon combined with Storm Grip's height and speed makes one of the most effective Upper Attack combinations made.

I take it you meant Master/Kid Dragoon?
Quote:[edit] Rule Clarification: Tip Exchange

It is illegal to exchange the tip of SG Metal Change with any other tip.
Is that supposed to be there?

Edit:
nm


I changed both of those for Cye. Also, is it ok if I move the Master Dragoon article and Kids Dragoon article from ZP to Beywiki? They're not mine, but why not move them?
I think it was done by Brad so it's ok to move it.
Yeah, it's fine. Be sure to add

[[Category:Beyblade]]

to the bottom.
Maybe mention how the flower like pattern meant to beat endurancers in the middle of the stadium is very easy to obtain with Storm Grip base (this mostly for TAKARA stadiums).