Dawn Writers (COMPLETE)

Hi, I'm BladingKiller, a writer, on the WBO. I would like to introduce to you a new teamGrinawn Writers! If you are looking for a writing team, well here's one of them! If you would like to defeat Sparta's writing team come join here. We also give out some information on writing a story. We will never lose hope. We always have a positive attitude. Joining us will be better for you, better for us. You decide whether we win or lose. But in this team Win or Lose doesn't matter as long as you have a fun. 3 heads are better than 1, right? We might have less experience, but it doesn't matter to this team. No matter how much less experience we have we will win. We will push everything to its limit.


We are not accepting people. We are full!

Members


Enjoy!


Preferred name in the team:Misunderstandings
How many stories have you put on the WBO: 0
The best paragraph you can think of:


TITLE : Deception

Chapter One : Uncontrollable

Tatagami Hatakashi first led a very simple life until he met the dark

Tatagami Hakashi had a very simple life. His mom Perlin Hatakashi work at Beyblade Liednict Incorperated. His dad Tatakashi Hatakashi....was a loner and didnt like telling him carp.



"Tatagami, Come eat your breakfast,"Perlin said.
"Mom I have to prepre for school no time for breakfast,"he said.
"Ok son have a good day,"Perlin Said.
"Bye Dad,"Tatagami said.
Takata looked at Tatagami with a very angrilly look and said,"Have a nice day son."

He grabbed his bey gear and went off to school.

Minutes Later At Black Hawk Middle School

"Hi Ashley,"Tatagami said blushing as red s a ripe tamatoe
"Hey,"She replied as if she didnt care
Down And Out Tatagami ran to class because he was going to be late.
Mtsteriously a kid no one had ever seen befor popped up.
"Hey you; you want to battle ." He Said
"Sure my EvilLeoneED145WD will defeat you.
The Mybstery Boy pulled out of his bey pouch a RayHurcleoGb145CS
Tatagami Loaded His Leone Onto His Red Light Launcher, with black grip, angle compass, and beypointer.
They Count Down "3....2...1... Go Shoot"
"Go Ray Hercleo finish him fast Speial Move Blazing Howler Fist."
"Not So Fast!"Tatagami yelled.
"Special move Darkness Growling Strike."
Leone Turned Black And Went Burzerker.
"Ahhh Destroy Him," Tatagami Hair Flying Towards the air
Out of Nowhere A Green Bey Comes To Stop The Battle And Attacks Leone.
Leone Stops Spinning And Tatagami Blacks Out.
Well you have some wrong spelling mistakes in there. But so far so good. Accepted!
More applications please!
Good luck with your team Smile
hmm........i'll join.
Apply fast before Yoku gets the last spot
I got a story but is to long to write i had been working on it for a while!!!
I am an awesome writer i come up with every detail fast!!! Plus if the story needs a drawing i can so it also!!!
(Oct. 18, 2011  5:42 PM)sparkman321lir Wrote: I got a story but is to long to write i had been working on it for a while!!!
I am an awesome writer i come up with every detail fast!!! Plus if the story needs a drawing i can so it also!!!
I'll be reading your story, and you forgot to post the format.
EDIT: You only have a story on beyblade battles. Denied request!
Hi I would like to be in your team.


Preferred name in team:Wii Not Fit
How many stories have you put on the WBO:0
The best paragraph you can think of:

It was a warm, cool, crisp August day while I was shuffling through the leaves of the Ritlet Park. I had nothing to do but to just walk. Some people were staring at me as like I am homeless. I never had what all kids have, a beyblade. I have wanted a beyblade for my whole life. It looked fun to play with.
As I was walking, I heard laughter, shouting, and metal clanging together. If only my mom would buy me a beyblade. Just one.
I walked back home and opened the front door to my house.
"Hey mom," I said.
She asked," Why do you have a sad look on your face?"
"I just wanted to get a beyblade," I said.
She added,"Well okay then let's go!"
I exclaimed,"Really?"
We opened the garage while my mom turned on the car. We drove and drove to Target. We finally arrived. My mom and I walked through the sliding door. Once we passed the sliding doors I told my mom to run. She followed me around turns. Finally we reached the beyblade section.
"I only have 30 dollars.",she said. I looked at all the beyblades. Dark gasher, Flame libra, Storm pegasus, Burn Fireblaze, and Rock orso. I didn't know what to get.
I was at the Self checkout aisle while holding an L-Drago stadium, Rock orso, and Flame Libra.
When we finished the check out I had to wait until we reach home to open it.
I thought,"Oh I can't wait to open it."
When I got home, I rushed in the house forgetting to take off my shoes. I opened the beyblades as fast as I can. I remembered this Youtube video on how to straighten your ripcord. I went in the restroom to do it. When I was finished, I put my ripcord in the launcher attacked the bey and launched Flame libra first. Then I launched Rock orso into he stadium.
I thought to myself while the beys were clashing,"I'll keep training them until I mastered their special moves and the bey itself. I'll try Flame libra first." I trained everyday until I knew I mastered it and that day was the first of school.
"Perfect timing", I said. I then put my beyblades away except for Flame libra and his launcher, and got ready for school.
I then went to school,ate breakfast and talked to my friends until the bell rings for class. I was a normal 5th grader walking to class.
When school was over, I launched straight out of the classroom. I was paying attention to where I was going so I bumped into a 6th grader.
"Watch where you are going, kid. Well I'm not letting you off the hook. Let's battle." he said.
"Okay," I said nervously.






(Oct. 19, 2011  4:41 AM)litlleboy92 Wrote: Hi I would like to be in your team.


Preferred name in team:Wii Not Fit
How many stories have you put on the WBO:0
The best paragraph you can think of:

It was a warm, cool, crisp August day while I was shuffling through the leaves of the Ritlet Park. I had nothing to do but to just walk. Some people were staring at me as like I am homeless. I never had what all kids have, a beyblade. I have wanted a beyblade for my whole life. It looked fun to play with.
As I was walking, I heard laughter, shouting, and metal clanging together. If only my mom would buy me a beyblade. Just one.
I walked back home and opened the front door to my house.
"Hey mom," I said.
She asked," Why do you have a sad look on your face?"
"I just wanted to get a beyblade," I said.
She added,"Well okay then let's go!"
I exclaimed,"Really?"
We opened the garage while my mom turned on the car. We drove and drove to Target. We finally arrived. My mom and I walked through the sliding door. Once we passed the sliding doors I told my mom to run. She followed me around turns. Finally we reached the beyblade section.
"I only have 30 dollars.",she said. I looked at all the beyblades. Dark gasher, Flame libra, Storm pegasus, Burn Fireblaze, and Rock orso. I didn't know what to get.
I was at the Self checkout aisle while holding an L-Drago stadium, Rock orso, and Flame Libra.
When we finished the check out I had to wait until we reach home to open it.
I thought,"Oh I can't wait to open it."
When I got home, I rushed in the house forgetting to take off my shoes. I opened the beyblades as fast as I can. I remembered this Youtube video on how to straighten your ripcord. I went in the restroom to do it. When I was finished, I put my ripcord in the launcher attacked the bey and launched Flame libra first. Then I launched Rock orso into he stadium.
I thought to myself while the beys were clashing,"I'll keep training them until I mastered their special moves and the bey itself. I'll try Flame libra first." I trained everyday until I knew I mastered it and that day was the first of school.
"Perfect timing", I said. I then put my beyblades away except for Flame libra and his launcher, and got ready for school.
I then went to school,ate breakfast and talked to my friends until the bell rings for class. I was a normal 5th grader walking to class.
When school was over, I launched straight out of the classroom. I was paying attention to where I was going so I bumped into a 6th grader.
"Watch where you are going, kid. Well I'm not letting you off the hook. Let's battle." he said.
"Okay," I said nervously.

Wow I like that. WOW! You are so accepted!

Sorry for those who wanted to get in.

Hi,bladingkeller
What do yoi mean denied?
Wait what format the one so you can enter?
Okay i will write the story only a part because is to long!!!
the format in the top post. It was denied because I don't want any beyblade battles stories. Anyways we already have a enough people.
Sorry For The Late Post Been Grounded Lately sneeking on computer
It's okay just remember to be active as possible!
ok im being somewhat let offf of punish ment
ok PM me later about what's in your mind. I have some few ideas. Also PM litlleboy92.
Ok But I Think We Should Have A Team Banner
can i join ill post format etc after you reply
so who do we go aginst in a writting battle first