Hey guys I'm making a story and I am taking Character requests! I will probably start getting to the main story when almost everyone gets a request in! I'm hoping it will turn out well but i'll need your guy's support

Chapter 1: 'A TALKING B-DAMAN!!?'

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3. 2. 1. Cross Fight!
"So this is a Cross Fight!? This is soo awesome!"
This is the story of a young boy named Darui.
The Day Before
"Alright mom I'm off!"
"Okay honey just remember to-" I was too excited to hear the rest of her lecture. Why? Because todays the day I get my first B-Daman! I had heard a lot about it on T.V and I finally get to try it out!

I found myself in front of a B-Daman shop called: 'B-Da Shop!'
"Okay, I'm ready!"
"Welcome to B-Da Shop. How may I help you?" The female clerk said as I bursted through the door with too much anticipation.
"I'm here to get my first B-Daman!" I replied trying to calm myself down.
"I see. It's nice to see more and more people joining the fun. You know what, I'll give you a beginners dicount on any purchase!"
"Okay Thanks!"
I looked around to the shop but I didn't find one that got my attention.
"Excuse me miss but I'm having trouble findi-" All of a sudden I felt like my body wouldn't work. Like I was being possessed.
"Hey kid are you okay!!" I couldn't find the words to answer.

I began to feel myself walking over to a case with a Black B-Daman with orange accents in it. I pointed at it and said,
"I want this one."
"That's not a B-Daman a beginner can handle but I see a fire in your eyes. So I'll give it to you for free! Come again!"
As I walked out of the store into the bright summer sun I felt myself coming out of my trance-like state.
"What happened?"
"I tuned in to your inner self to grab me. You are the Chosen One."
I looked at my hand and noticed the Black B-Daman gazing at me with It's beaming red eyes.
"What the. A TALKING B-DAMAN!!??"

Chapter 2: 'A Road Fight to the Finish!'

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"How can a B-Daman talk!"
"Calm down."
"That's just ludacris"
"Calm down!"
"I think I'm dreaming. Someone pinch me!"
"CALM DOWN!! Look Darui, I'm not sure why either but lets go over to that B-Daman registration over there and we might find something out."
"Do people still use those? I mean it looks pretty run down"
"Darui. Trust me" As I stood in front of the table I took a deep breath.
"Alright Tigre, this is the start of a grand adventure!" I then slammed him on the pad. Out of nowhere Electricity poured out of Tigre causing bright lights that blinded me. When I regained sight the computer read: Here is the tournament location. Come alone in secrecy. It seemed kinda sketchy, but I decided to go.

On my where there I found myself in an alley blocked by a shady looking guy.
"Out of the way. I'm trying to get somewhere important."
"Heh. Looks like you need some manners taught to you kid. I challenge you to a Road Fight!"
"Road Fight? What's that?"
"Are you an idiot or somethin' kid? It's a challenge where you chose a stage and you have to beat your opponent. However, If you lose, you must submit to anything the winner says. Got it!?"
"Sounds interesting, I accept." I said confidently
"Good." Then this globe looking thing with balls floating around inside opened up
"Go ahead. Take one of those out. It will be our stage."
"Alright then. Here we go!" I grabbed one out. It then expanded and said Break Bomber. Good I've seen this on T.V I know what to do. All you have to do is get at least 3 of the 5 red blocks at the top of the tower on your opponents side.
"Get ready kid." the shady guy snarled.
3. 2. 1. B-Fight!
As I started to fire I noticed the shots were very fast.
"Darui listen up!" Drive=Tigre exclaimed. "I'm a Power/Rapid Fire type so I shoot with a lot of power fast. We've got the upper hand here. So let's fire our way to victory!"

I kept shooting until I found myself on the last block on the far right side.
"There's Our chance Tigre! Here we go." As I shot I noticed the block go on my side instead of my opponents.
"Too slow kid. You see my B-Daman is a control type so as you were firing I fixated myself so that when you got it to the lowest block, I could make my move. I should thank you for helping me kid."
"Dang it!" I thought to myself. If I was going to win I would have to change my strategy. So I decided to shoot two B-Dama at tower that was next to the now empty one so that he get fixated on that one. Then I quickly change my line of fire to left one catching him off guard. I quickly got to the red block.
"Our chance!" I shot. But yet again he shot and got it before me. I was so frustrated. He only needed one more block to win and I didn't have any. I started to get teary eyed as I said,
"I don't want to lose. I don't want to lose! I DON'T WANT TO LOSE!!" At that moment I felt myself go into that trance-like state again. I felt myself going over to the 2 orange buttons located on both arms of Tigre. I slammed them down while saying,
"Tear them apart Tigre. Striking Claw!" It's Drive Core started to glow orange and I started to shoot B-Dama so fast that I couldn't see them. My opponent was overwhelmed. Smoke began to rise. And when it cleared, the score was 2-3 and I had won. Then Tigre's arms shattered and I blacked out.

Character Descriptions:

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Darui:

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A fairly tall (5'3) 13 Year old African American boy. He has hair Identical to him

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He wears A Plain black T-shirt With a White Tiger on it and Black Skinny Jeans with a Pocket Watch.

B-Daman Descriptions:

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Name: Drive=Tigre (Tiger)

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Type: Power/Rapid Fire
Color Scheme: Black and a Brownish Orange
Head Part: Like Garuburn but without the Wings. Black head with an orange whisker looking thing on both sides for comfort
Arm Parts: Black Cannon Arms with an orange Tiger Emblem Charge
Feet Part: Like Right Drake but Has Black feet with Orange claws
Core Part: Black Drive core with Orange Rubber and orange rollers
Gimmick: The B-dama will have a drive effect
Tune Up Gear: Tornado Magazine and Cannon Arms
eCharge Shot: Striking Claw. The Core part starts to glow Orange and he shoots B-Dama Faster than most rapid fire types but with way more power than almost all power types.

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Cool story! I love it so far!

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Wolf's Rain Quotes

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Dying or getting killed isn’t something unnatural. Living aimlessly without a purpose is.
Kiba
That's not your true form. Why do you hide yourself?
Kiba
Everyone's gonna die. It's a natural part of life. But if life has no purpose, you're dead already.
Kiba

My rap by earthwolf1404

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Her attacks are like diamond to the flesh
She's already seen all the HTTYD movies
And Ryukiba is her address,
In a Texas town, no bey part envy

But every blader's like Synchrome, Metal Face, Stallin' on Tornado Ridge,
Giga Flats, Spin Steal , trashin' the whole stadium,
She don't care, She's chillin' with Ryuga in her dreams.
But Blader's like Cristal Wheel, Tall Track, Wear Tempo like a timepiece.
4-D, Zero-G, Byakkus and Garudas.
She don't care, She's made a different Top Tier.

And You'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of Power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz.
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.


My friends and I—we've cracked the code.
We count our dollars on the train to the party.
And everyone who knows us knows that we're fine with this,
We didn't come for money.

But every blader's like Synchrome, Metal Face, Stallin' on Tornado Ridge,
Giga Flats, Spin Steal , trashin' the whole stadium,
She don't care, She's chillin' with Ryuga in her dreams.
But Blader's like Cristal Wheel, Tall Track, Wear Tempo like a timepiece.
4-D, Zero-G, Byakkus and Garudas.
She don't care, She's made a different Top Tier.


And we'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz.
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.

Ooh ooh oh, Ooh ooh oh
She's stonger than you'll ever be,
The one and only Dragon queen.
Ooh ooh oh, Ooh ooh oh
Was born L-drago's lair
To be the best is her affair.

And we'll never beat Ryukiba (-kiba).
She's got Ryuga's Dragon Blood,
That kind of power just ain't for us.
Her Beyblade style's all the buzz
She will be your ruler (ruler),
You can call her Fishy
And baby She rules, She rules, She rules, She rules.
To beat her is a fantasy.

It's a good story but it needs some improvement, for example the story needs a lot more narration and character development. I'd give it a 6/10

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Natsu smiles at his opponent, ready for combat. His reawakened spirit shines through his body, as he lights his fists. He jumps, as he breathes in the flames of hell itself, his lungs expanding rapidly... His 2 opponents stare in fear of their ferocious enemy and ready themselves...


Members I wish to battle:

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1. Switchblad3r
   
2. XKai_DranzerX
   
3. Bularieleone
   
4. Kyler_the best
   
5. Luck
   
6. Blitz
   
7. Manicben
   
8. Akio314
   
9. Rnold201
   
10. Kai-v
    
11. Shining God MS
    
12. Ryukiba
    
13. Hakumen
    
14. SoulNinja
    
15. AZL
    
16. UltimiteOrion
    
17. Ingulit
    
18. Ga'Hooleone
    

I try and help the WBO, so here's some important threads, and some important posts. I haven't been on for a while, so pm me on updates please!! [spoiler]

1. BEYWIKI
   
2. The beywiki project
   
3. Difference between duo and phantom
   
4. WBO community rules
   
5. Comprtitive MFB discussions
   
6. Build me a combo
   
7. Competitive Heavy Metal System Combos
   
8. Misconception of R vs R2F and possibility of LRF
   
9. Bey Marketplace
   
10. Beginner's guide to custom MFB construction
    
11. A new, Experimental RuleSet?!
    
12. RS vs RDF vs RB vs CS vs RSF