Continuations of GREV fanfics

My friends and I were all writing continuations to GREV and we're each taking a different approach... 1 is doing a angsty sort of fic, one is doing a yaoi and another is doing a Tyson fic... so I decided to do an OC fic... but I'm not sure how it's turning out... if anyone wants to have a look i could use some opinions =]

be nice though, the characters are really underdeveloped

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5076896/1/Be...ving_Grace
nice Grin