Definitely some great work, Azhar, they're awesome!
There are definitely areas that you improved on throughout time. For example, you used way to many effects in your previous edits, like the rain and the focus effect. They look a lot better now!
I also see you based a lot of your own edits off of my own, as well, haha; Take the motif with the rain effect that was black and white, with a blurred out panel from the manga and the pixelated text, along with the one with a Date A Live character, which I believe yours was Kotori and a white low-opacity box with text. Again, I'm fine with it, though!