Ikishiru was watching some beybattles, after the watching he said "Wow! i must get a bey!", He asked his dad. His dad asked "Whats a bey?", Ikshiru then screamed "ARE YOU THE ONLY PERSON WHO DOESNT KNOW BEYBLADE?!?!?!?!?!", his dad was confused. Ikishiru asked his dad to go on a journey, his dad said "Ok, dont go too far" he said "I will go on a journey by myself to find a beyblade, bye dad!", his dad said "No wait!".

To be continued...

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Fun stuff (Click to View)

LOL Quotes (Click to View)

I thought Dark Bull C145FS was the greatest defense combo O_O

http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Dark-Bull-C145FS

I thought a tool was a spin track !

I spent hours searching for the stats of each bey so I could make the best combo possible , ended up making Dark Pegasis SW145JB
Also was going to buy a thermal lacerta of basalt horogium :/

People are babies that need to be spoonfed these days.

^my desktops are always sexy women

How do you make a evil Scorpio 100df and what parts do you need[/i]

-LDrago could corrupt me

I thought rock aries was the best bey ever even though he lost every battle lol!

Fun Videos (Click to View)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ld3PpWUgO...gw&index=3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hHt22XzFW...gw&index=9

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_4I0VwGe4...gw&index=7

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFztjgfDW...gw&index=8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xSp2I0Obd...gw&index=6

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f-23rdUl5...w&index=12

For the people who watched the videos and read the quotes... (Click to View)

I will add more when I feel like to.
:DJ2002:
~Ryuuga Forever~

Kind of short, and weird. Out of the blue, the character finds a beybattle, says he has to get a bey then just leaves? It would be better if it was longer, and if it was Ikishiru who had not known about beyblade, learned about it then decided to get a beyblade, got one, then left overtime. Not in the third sentence..

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Thanks Kai V, For the sig
Thanks BeyUK.Net for Icon
Thanks Fyrewyrm for the bar

Funny Quotes

Spoiler (Click to View)

Sorry to be off topic, but this thread has given me a new thing to put in my sig.

Seeing to how he reacted to other posts, your signature will be botched because he'll either:
1. PM you to take it down or,
2. Tell you to take it down, here.

I just told you your entire solution. I promote tournaments like crazy, I've gotten elementary school kids to do their homework twice as fast with Beyblading as a reward, and I can sell light bulb sockets to the Amish.

What more do you want?

Dan you don't have to be so well mean it makes me mad a blader would tease another your not a true blader

Okay thanks for that.
We give the best advice you have available, but you are too shy to do it. It isn't really our problem, we shouldn't even deal with this.. C:

Want to follow my goal to get one of each HMS? Check out the crosslist (in the spoiler) 1/28
Want to trade/sell me your HMS to help my goal? Pm me please

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Gaia Dragoon MS
Driger MS
Draciel MS
Dragoon MS *#1
Dranzer MS
Einstein MS/Hopper Attack
Dragoon MS UV
Dark Effigy MS
Wolborg MS
Thunder Dragon
Sea Dragon
Wyvern DJ
Advance Averazer
Advance Guardian
Advance Striker
Advance Eterner
Phantom Fox MS
Slash Riger MS
Dark Leopard MS
Magical Ape MS
Round Shell MS
Dragoon MF
Dranzer MF
Samurai Changer MS
Aero Knight MS
Jiraiya MS
Bloody Devil MS
Shining God MS

Thats all i can think of, so thats why it is a bit short, i will post chapter 2 soon.

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Chapter 2: The journey

Ikishiru rides his bike in the on the sidewalk, he wasnt paying attention to where he was going to after 90 seconds... Bang! he hit someone, Then Ikishiru said "Sorry, didnt mean to do that, you alright?" The boy said "Yea, my name is Rikmi". Ikishiru asked "Wanna be friends?", Rikmi said "Sure, where are you going since you were in a hurry?", Ikishiru answered "Well, Im going on a journey to find a beyblade". They went together, after a few minutes they were out of town. Ikishiru asked "You have a tent to set up?", Rikmi answered "I do, I was going to summer camp", Ikishiru said "Wow! look over there!". Rikmi said "Wow!, ive seen that thing before!", Ikishiru said "Really?", Rikmi said "Thats were the greatest of all beys are, inside that mountain seals the mysterious Beyblade: Galactic Galaxy U105HRF" Rikmi said. They started running to the mountain.

End of chapter 2.

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[ Signature Gonna Come ]

Fun stuff (Click to View)

LOL Quotes (Click to View)

I thought Dark Bull C145FS was the greatest defense combo O_O

http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Dark-Bull-C145FS

I thought a tool was a spin track !

I spent hours searching for the stats of each bey so I could make the best combo possible , ended up making Dark Pegasis SW145JB
Also was going to buy a thermal lacerta of basalt horogium :/

People are babies that need to be spoonfed these days.

^my desktops are always sexy women

How do you make a evil Scorpio 100df and what parts do you need[/i]

-LDrago could corrupt me

I thought rock aries was the best bey ever even though he lost every battle lol!

Fun Videos (Click to View)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ld3PpWUgO...gw&index=3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hHt22XzFW...gw&index=9

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_4I0VwGe4...gw&index=7

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFztjgfDW...gw&index=8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xSp2I0Obd...gw&index=6

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f-23rdUl5...w&index=12

For the people who watched the videos and read the quotes... (Click to View)

I will add more when I feel like to.
:DJ2002:
~Ryuuga Forever~

Nice story! Cant wait for chapter 3

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Chuck Norris is Ginga.

... "Wanna be friends?" ? This reminds me of kindergarten. Try to extend your story's length and make it flow more. You're going from one event to the next abruptly. Use filler events, transitions, etc.

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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

Forgot to mention, this is my first time writing a story so its not that good.
Oh yea,

Chapter 3: The mountain

When they were at the mountain they met someone, Ikishiru asked "Whats wrong?", The climber said "When i was 2 feet away from the top, i fell down, and all i want to say is... Hi! my name is Joe, im from Texas", Ikishiru asked "So.... your from the US?", Joe answered "Yes, of course", They climbed the mountain while Joe was waiting have his injuries healed. Ikishiru fell down, he screamed "AHHHH!!!", Rikmi said "Ill get you!", Rikmi grabbed Ikishiru before he got injuired liike Joe. They climbed to the top. They found something at the top, Ikishiru asked "Is this where the mysterious bey is?", Rikmi answered "Yes, no one has ever obtained this bey yet, its your chance"

End of chapter 3

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[ Signature Gonna Come ]

Fun stuff (Click to View)

LOL Quotes (Click to View)

I thought Dark Bull C145FS was the greatest defense combo O_O

http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Dark-Bull-C145FS

I thought a tool was a spin track !

I spent hours searching for the stats of each bey so I could make the best combo possible , ended up making Dark Pegasis SW145JB
Also was going to buy a thermal lacerta of basalt horogium :/

People are babies that need to be spoonfed these days.

^my desktops are always sexy women

How do you make a evil Scorpio 100df and what parts do you need[/i]

-LDrago could corrupt me

I thought rock aries was the best bey ever even though he lost every battle lol!

Fun Videos (Click to View)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ld3PpWUgO...gw&index=3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hHt22XzFW...gw&index=9

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_4I0VwGe4...gw&index=7

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFztjgfDW...gw&index=8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xSp2I0Obd...gw&index=6

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f-23rdUl5...w&index=12

For the people who watched the videos and read the quotes... (Click to View)

I will add more when I feel like to.
:DJ2002:
~Ryuuga Forever~

Good chapters!! but try to extend dem alittle more

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