Burst after 17 years new character coming through..

Hey guys ,wanted to make a story of burst character after 17 years so start with first character 
Valt:-
At the age of 14 this guys got no fame and became a ordinary blader which hurted him lot that's why he left his bey and became an ordinary boy..
After 17 years his Son ,Varun got his father bey ,Valtreyek then he thought what his father said him 2 days ago ,He said in his birthday he will give him anything he want because he will become 11 after this week .He said his father that he want the bey. Valt was drinking tea .He got suprised that his aur was strong than him . But he said "No need".He got shocked because valt said No to anyone.
CHAPTER
Power of Wonder Boy

Got stories PM me
Thinking about what to do in next chapter
Adding The pictures of Varun and 30 years old Valt

Chapter 2:- New powers gained ! Spryzen!

(Oct. 19, 2018  3:55 PM)Turbo blader Wrote: Hey guys ,wanted to make a story of burst character after 17 years so start with first character 
Valt:-
At the age of 14 this guys got no fame and became a ordinary blader which hurted him lot that's why he left his bey and became an ordinary boy..
After 17 years his Son ,Varun got his father bey ,Valtreyek then he thought what his father said him 2 days ago ,He said in his birthday he will give him anything he want because he will become 11 after this week .He said his father that he want the bey. Valt was drinking tea .He got suprised that his aur was strong than him . But he said "No need".He got shocked because valt said No to anyone.
CHAPTER
Power of Wonder Boy

Got stories PM me
Thinking about what to do in next chapter
Adding The pictures of Varun and 30 years old Valt

Chapter 2:- New powers gained ! Spryzen! 
Coming soon! New chapter every saturday and sunday
But wasn't valt the no. #1 blader in the world ,so why couldn't he get fame
(Oct. 19, 2018  6:05 PM)Nightmarefafnir Wrote: But wasn't valt the no. #1 blader in the world ,so why couldn't he get fame
Know it in chapter 7..