The blader’s apprentice
Every great blader needs an apprentice but sometimes, just sometimes it happens by accident.
‘’Next!’’ a booming voice said from behind desk.
‘’Yeah’’ I reply.
‘’Here for the tourney?’’
Yup’’ I replied clutching my blade in my hand.
‘’What type?’’
‘’Well umm’’ I said thinking about a lie I could tell.
‘’Hurry up!’’ he snapped.
‘’Attack’’ I replied hoping he wouldn’t check.
‘’Your name?’’
‘’Josh’’
‘’Age’’ he asked raising an eyebrow.
‘’13’’ I said looking down at my bey.
‘’Your through’’ he said opening the door.
‘’Woah’’ I said as I entered.
It seemed that thousands of people had flocked here to Haeki to battle for the chance to travel to Bladeworld, the only place where you blade with the top ten of every country. There were 30 stadiums surrounded by bunting tape so only two bladers could battle at once. The judge stood there watching intently.
‘’Will the blader Michael Jones come to stadium 23 to battle Josh Parke’’ the loudspeaker boomed.
‘That’s me’’ I thought.
I slowly walked to stadium 23.
‘’Are you ready to blade?’’
‘’Yes we are!’’ we shouted simultaneously
‘’ 3.2.1 Let it rip!!!!

Is it good?

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Keiwannabe Attached a moderator to this post for looking funny.Hope this.

Good start. Hard to tell if the story is good though because nothing has happened yet. So you've abandoned Leopards revenge *sigh*. Just out of interest where was the leopard part going to come in?

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No It's just the leopards revenge is bad.

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Keiwannabe Attached a moderator to this post for looking funny.Hope this.