Beyblade comic idea Help

I got the basic's of my first 10 volume's done episode's 1-52 all 5 saga's complete i need a bit of advise for my second half of my series and tell me if it's good please it'll mean a lot

"After the Bey tornament in Canada was over the Surge savage's continue there compitition in the europian challenge tornaments where a viertity of bladers will be entering to choose and fight for these nation's metal surge member's Budo-Ken and Foxy leave the team and go there own seprate way's the members get a new team member by the name of Chii who use's the bey Thermal Gemios T125RS the team is now ready for this tornament they first set up there team spot's James/Alecwho use's MG soviet(Rock capricorn GB145WB) is the team Leader Vidish how use's thunder geos-near(Thunder aquario T125F)is the team's secondary member there team's support member is Mei who use's the same bey as Chii they go to Spain to take on the team Serpants terror EX (havent had much information on them)

after there team had won they go to France to battle Team Forgotten Dream they're leader goes by the name of Jenn who use's a Midnight wolf C125ES he is there team leader jenn belive's that his beyblade holds a bit-beast and he want's to unleash it on the world his sub member Gregg Use's a Rock Capricorn B125MB his mission is to take down all the team leaders on each team they begin there team matches in the end Team Forgotten Dream was beaten and they admit a plan dealing with the WBBA and they don't see team Metal surge again the final match up of the A block is about to begin the Russian team contact's Team metal surge and ask's them to watch them take down team Gravity gear(the russian team is called team Icecale Romance)

The semi final's of the A block begin team Gravity gear puts out the member's
Den and Daniel(Both use Rock pegasis ED145WD)and the russian team counter's with Isabella and Maxinum(Flame Wolf H125 Isabella's bey Poison Libra ED145ES Maxinum's bey)Den and Daniel's joint special move "Angel Rider's" Completly crush maxinum and isabella the second match begin between the newest member of team Gravity Gear Vladimir(Use's Planet Russia/Earth ketus DF145S) and take's on Sabrina(Oil Gravity/Counter aquario T125RF) sabrina lose's and in the process Vidish take's her bey meanwhile team metal surge prepare's to battle team Gravity gear they travel to Itally to take them on the first match is Vidish vs Vladimir with Vidish being the winner the second was a joint match requested by team gravity gear Den and Daniel's special move was broken by Meii her newest special move gated them to victory "Phykick Nova" and then team Metal surge immerged the victor the leader(Robert) was not ammused and requested a match against James/Alec they battle it out Robert's special move"Echo Shockwave" was strong enought to almost win but he lost due to a sleep out the Block champion's are set they are

Teams' Metal Surge,Golden Gem,Time Twister's, and Victory the first match is team victory vs team golden gem(Victory is team Belguim and Time Twister's team Germany)
It's a complete defeat tornament the first 2 matches were won by team time twister's the last 2 were pushed the sub member of time twisters(Anthony use's Flame Pegasis 155HF/S) in order to defeat Greece(use's Cyclone Bull 125SF team victory's secondary) he had to gon the defence but his winning streak was interupted by the leader of Team Victory Armor(Use's Ray Armor MKII/Ray Eagle W105RF)but was betten by Devin(use's Thermal Devil/Sargintario UW145W2D) he used his speical move "The Devil's Call"And Armor get's beatten badly the second match is Metal surge vs Golden gem

First it's Chii vs Vandana(use's Beautiful Ali/Night Ketus DF145D) Vandana unleashes her bit-beast quickly and completly cracks chii's beyblade in half the match was over the second match is Vidish vs Budo-ken(MG Virgo/Rock Virgo SW145JB) which ends in a tie the 3rd tying match is James/Alec vs Racki and james/alec wins it the 4th match is a battle royal between all 8 team members they all went out Meii,Racki,Daiicha,Chii,Budo-ken,James/Alec and Vandana the winner was Vidish the finals are about to begin between Team Time Twisters vs Team Metal Surge

Chii and Meii quit beyblading after there win against team golden gem the first match is Vidish vs Anthony and the battle turn's up and down with Anthony beating Vidish without delay the second match was Vidish's last chance before he used all of his bey's power and using all of it too win against micheal(Mysterous member of his team use's Killer Spider/Killer Scorpio H125WD)Micheal was depending on winning against vidish no problem but was side tracked his special move "Bleeding Infection" Had no effect vidish used all of us bey's power and won against micheal in the process his bey falls apart and he passes out his Energy ring,Fusion whell,Spin-track and preformance tip all turn into ash all that remianed was his facebolt which james picked up and kept it safe until vidish came back to health