Try making your chapter have something it focuses on

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The One Piece is the friends we made a long the way.

Chapter 7
Treasure

Jayden: aww man
Damian: what are you frowning for we have legends coming to a tournament
Jayden: well you know that shun kazami who is coming to the tournament
Damian: yeah
Jayden: his dad is rich he definitely has a strong bey
Damian: hmmm okay
Jayden: well my moms calling me *ends face time*
Jayden: hey a

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USN your character is coming soon I’m still thinking of a role for him
And strikegamerv6 hope you like this chapter

Here's my challenge to make this better. I want each chapter to be at least 50 lines (Double the current amount.) and I want you to double check your grammar and punctuation.

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If ya'll need any help, feel free to reach out to me!
"We all have different backgrounds, but we all come together to celebrate our excitement over Beyblade..."
-6Jupiter5

Chapter 7
Treasure

Jayden: aww man
Damian: what are you frowning for we have legends coming to a tournament
Jayden: well you know that shun kazami who is coming to the tournament
Damian: yeah
Jayden: his dad is rich he definitely has a strong bey
Damian: hmmm okay
Jayden: well my moms calling me *ends face time*
Jayden: hey a

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USN your character is coming soon I’m still thinking of a role for him
And strikegamerv6 hope you like this chapter

Here's my challenge to make this better. I want each chapter to be at least 50 lines (Double the current amount.) and I want you to double check your grammar and punctuation.

Challenge accepted.

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*enables bad boy mode*

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Alright guys I found this realy cool webriste where I can create my character so I’m here is what I tested it on blob:https://charactercreator.org/43e73b75-f367-4417-ae37-016384763700

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Here's my challenge to make this better. I want each chapter to be at least 50 lines (Double the current amount.) and I want you to double check your grammar and punctuation.

Challenge accepted.

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*enables bad boy mode*

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Chapter 8 preview

Penoki: hmmm this tournament is getting extremely good.
Penoki: alright wait I forgot where I am ok let’s see oh I’m in a ware house.
Penoki: hmmm me and perceus will win this any way.

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Alright so and won else wanna join the characters contest

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   "From this moment on... You shall be know as Darth Vader" - Palpatine probably