Beyblade War Of the Gods

So my other stories have not gone well so I decided to try one last attempt at making one. I will try to get one up often so this doesn't end up like my others.

Chapter 1:Rage of Hermes
Chapter 2:Let the Tournament BEGIN!
I hope you enjoy!
Cool story but right spin version of lf=r2f. Anyway, one thing. The redundancy of the word wimp is making it sound a bit overused. Try to use synonyms to make the overall story flow better. Keep up the good work!
Thanks a lot.

FYI this is not sarcastic.
If that was sarcastic, I really think its a good story, I was just commenting on small details.
it wasn't explained what the knight slayers goal was idk if your going to reveal that later or something but either way good story!
Hrm... It could use some grammatical work. There are more than a few missing commas. Honestly, the story would read a lot better if that was fixed.

Also: Change "pasted" to "passed" and "confident" to "confidence." Minor details, for now, seem to be the issue.
Thanks for the help and the nice comments guys. I'll try my best to not mess up on those things.
Chapter 2 is up.