[Beyblade Story] Throughout the Beyges

Poll: What do you think?

Awesome!
75.00%
3
Fine
0%
0
Ehh....
25.00%
1
Bad.
0%
0
Total: 100% 4 vote(s)
This is my beyblade story! Enjoy!
Note: if you vote that this story is bad, please tell me why you think so. That way I can improve and hopefully make this story the best it can be.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Pretty good start! Maybe the battles could have been described more but overall good. Also, when Scout s thinking, it should be in italics. Can't wait for chapter 2!
I wasn't sure how to do italics....do you know how? Thanks.
When you do a full edit, a bar will appear over the text showing different things. Press the i to begin and i again to end.
Chapter 2 is up now!
Cool chapter! Just a small tip, take some time to describe the forest, and the beyblades, among other things. But good chapter nonetheless! Also, since i know you personally, i can say this is good work for you! Keep it up!
Thanks! I was planning to describe the beys in more detail a little later, but I understand. Like how would you have me describe the forest?
Well there seems to be some uneasiness that the main character feels upon entering the forest. Talk about the eerie feeling, the darkness, etc. We should probably take this to pms now.
I'm sorry for the wait, chapter 3 will be up by this Sunday.