Beyblade Metal Somptin

Airus · Feb. 24, 2012 10:47 PM

"Go Pegasis!" I heard. "Ummm",I said."I needa take a carp!" I yelled.

"WOW,I just got in trouble for swearing!Wats so bad about dat?"
"It's bad",my brother sed.
I held out my bey.It was a Screamin Carp takin a carp 70WD.(really weird)
"I WANNTA BATTOW!!!" I said.
A random voice screamed,"GO CARP YURSELF U CARP!!!I DON'T WANNTA CARPING BATTLE!!!"
I readied my launcher and bey.
"3...",I said
"ummmmmmmm 2!" The random guy with the random voice said
"1!" we yelled.
"Go Shoot!" We screamd.

My Screamin Carp takin a carp went shooting way below the wheel.
"OH NO!!!RANDOM BEY!SPECIAL MOVE!!!SPAZ ATTAK!!!" The random guy screamed during a spaz attack.
I said,"Go Screamin Carp takin a carp!Special move!Carp on the foe!!!"
The foes bey got pooped on and snaps.
"DIE RANDOM GUY!!!" I said,while holding a poket nife in my hand,stabbing the random guy in the hart."HA,HA HA HA HA!HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!"

Dun dun dun dun.................

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JayRoss899 · Feb. 24, 2012 11:29 PM

Like it!R u posting more chapters?

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XXaron · Feb. 24, 2012 11:48 PM

Uh, yo do realize this is a joke, right?
I hope it's a joke.
I really, really hope it is.

Credit to DeX for this amazing signature!
Want a ok story that's readable? With actual grammar? Check out Everything Spins Into Chaos: A beyblade story
I use Hasbro beys. Because I have no acsess to TT or Sonokong beys. Hopefully that'll change soon.
~X

Goldchain2 · Feb. 25, 2012 4:00 AM

This story, if you could call it that... is terrible. No grammar, really, carp?, rediculous. The worst I have ever read.

Thanks to JCx06 for this insane Sig!
Call me GC2.

TenshouTsubasa · Feb. 25, 2012 4:22 AM

Too short.
No stories.
What the heck is that poll thing?

Let the wings of hope spread to the whole world!

New story :
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Yoku-s-s...ary-Hereos

Ga' · Feb. 25, 2012 5:12 AM

Wow. Just wow.

This is literally all I can say:
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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)