Beyblade : A New Beginning

Poll: How is the story?

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Total: 100% 2 vote(s)
So, I'm starting a new story called Beyblade : A New Beginning. This is what I'm calling it now, and I might change its name afterwards, depending on how the story goes. School starts soon, so I might not be able to make much progress then, but I'll do as much as I can. Please read, and give positive(maybe negative?) feedback.
FIRST OF ALL, yOU WOULD MAKE IT LONGER OR IT WOULD BE NO POINT IN READING IT.(sorry,pressed all caps by acdiant) Second if you do, you shoud put it into spoilers Wink
You would actually need to write the story, before opening the thread, hah.

Anyways, when the text is up, I'll be sure to read, as well as give positive feedback and criticism on it. (:
(May. 19, 2014  12:42 PM)Pokemo Wrote: FIRST OF ALL, yOU WOULD MAKE IT LONGER OR IT WOULD BE NO POINT IN READING IT.(sorry,pressed all caps by acdiant) Second if you do, you shoud put it into spoilers Wink

That's not my story, that's my signature.(Look below)
Sorry it took a day, guys, but I finally managed to perfect my first chapter. Read through. I know its a little long and boring, but I had to make it a single chapter(its an important chapter) .

Chapter 1: Towards Freedom
Chapter 2: The Next Morning