Bey Series - The Four Pillars, Chapter 5 is up! Review Please!

Poll: How good is my story

Awesome
20.00%
3
Quite Good
33.33%
5
OK
33.33%
5
Bad
13.33%
2
Total: 100% 15 vote(s)
I would appreciate it if someone was able to review this. Thank you in advance. Sorry for this short post, however, I wanted to notify everyone. Sorry once again.
I read your chapter 5. I am very fond of it. Don't really see any mistakes. Keep it up...