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This is BeyBlade Product 71 and it is of the Hybrid Wheel System.

Unnecessary. Also, Beyblade has only one capital 'b'.

The clear wheel has three notches emulating a Unicorn's horn, the symbol of its design it is influenced by.

Very poorly worded.

Translucent Green is the predominant color of Unicorno.

"The original release of Unicorno was green."

Ray is consisted of a three-winged design with two square indents and seperated protrusions to provide Smash Attack.

"Ray has a..." or "Ray consists of..." are better. "is consisted of" is grammatically incorrect.

Each protrusion has a flat front with a tip slightly slanted upwards on the end.Ray does suffer from some recoil, but this problem can easily be rectified with both MF and RF.

You're missing a space after the full stop (period).
"Ray suffers from some recoil, but this can be rectified by using both a Metal Face and RF."

Paired with the right Track, Ray can provide a ferocious Smash Attack. Although a formidable Attack wheel, it is outclassed by Vulcan and Lightning in attack.

While Ray does provide adequte Smash Attack, it is outclassed by other Metal Wheels such as Vulcan and Lightning.

Mold Variations:
The first mold of Ray can be found in the starter pack released by Takara-Tomy. This mold had breakage problems and was later rectified by the release of the 2nd mold. The second mold can be found in the Booster, Ray Unicorno Aurora Version, Ray Gill 100RSF and the SonoKong Starters. The second mold is heavier thus reducing breakage.

Lots of problems here. Type out "second".
"The second mold is found in every other release of Ray, and is less prone to breaking."
Find out how much heavier the second mold is, and mention that number.

Use in attack customization:
Ray is best utilized with a low track: Ray Unicorno 100RF

Why do you say to use Ray with a metal face earlier, and then don't use one with this combo?

As its name suggests,it it is a Sharp tip coated with rubber.

Missing a space after the comma. You also say "it it is". Additionally, this sentence does not make sense, strictly speaking. There is nothing to suggest the coat to be rubber.
"CS derives its name from being a Sharp tip coated with rubber."

The pointed tip allows for very little friction between the Bottom and the stadium, which helps reduce the loss of spin velocity. When launched without banking, its movement is similar to that of the Sharp series bottoms. When launched with banking or on the outer section of the stadium, the tip has a large amount of traction against the stadium floor, resulting in a such a fast and powerful attack pattern similar to RF and R²F. Due to the versatility of this tip, it is chosen for Defense, Attack, and De-stabilizer combinations.

Overall, poorly worded.

Use in Attack Customization:
MF Vulcan Horuseus 85CS, MF Quetzalcoatl CH120CS

Pick one and write an introductory statement.

Use in Defense Customization:
MF-H Earth Bull GB145CS

Needs an introductory statment.

Use in Destabilizers:
Flame Cancer 90CS

Until and unless we decide destabilizers are a different type, this is an attack combo. This is therefore unnecessary. If you want to use it, put it under attack and make a note of it being a destabilizer in the introductory statement.

D125 is the staple track for mid-height attackers, CS is a very versatile tip.

You need an "and" in there.

Although Ray has left much to be desired, D125 and CS make up for it.

"Although Ray leaves much to be desired..."

This is a must buy for Attack enthusiasts.

Is this true? From what I've seen, people don't seem to actually use it for attack, prefering RF and R2F. They seem to use it for defense more often than attack.

You mention how CS is good for attack and defense, but never mention how or why this is. You don't mention the CS duds. Overall, this needs a lot more work. Pretty much every section that was written specifically for this article (Ray, Unicorno, CS, Overall) needs to be rewritten.

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I tested the defense combo and it's more like a balance combo because if you think of it this way, CS is basically just SD with rubber wrapped around it. it is really for attack but for defense, you should you RS instead because R(ubber) S(harp) creates alot of friction while CS creates less friction because it has plastic too besides rubber. As described in your article as "SD with a rubber coat), SD is made from plastic and when it is launched, it may have a chance of landing on the plastic tip and it may also land on the rubber part, hence having to make a gamble during each battle. So, CS should only be used when RS is not available.

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I tested the defense combo and it's more like a balance combo because if you think of it this way, CS is basically just SD with rubber wrapped around it. it is really for attack but for defense, you should you RS instead because R(ubber) S(harp) creates alot of friction while CS creates less friction because it has plastic too besides rubber. As described in your article as "SD with a rubber coat), SD is made from plastic and when it is launched, it may have a chance of landing on the plastic tip and it may also land on the rubber part, hence having to make a gamble during each battle. So, CS should only be used when RS is not available.

Should you really have necroed this old thread? If you read around CS is better in a tournament situation and is widely preferred. Sure, RS is better at Defence, but it falls against left-spin Attack types, and those are quite popular these days.

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add the hasbro name change
Ray Unicorno was re-named Ray Striker by Hasbro

Dude, just let this die. And stop saying that on every thread, we've realized that there are name changes...

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Don't forget the name change to striker in hasbro's version.

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