Deleting this one. The only "shot in the dark" was my method for picking names because my main character in this one was named "Symun." Oof.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Looks nice, I haven't read a fanfiction for awhile.
Good luck!

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Was warned for liking T.K. more then me.

Not a fan fiction though, haha. Though Symun is similar to Shumon now that I look at it, haha.
Haven't seen you on for awhile, glad you're back!
Chapter 1 will probably be up tomorrow.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 1 is up!
Its starting slow, but it will pick up soon, don't worry!
I may put up the second chapter soon, we'll see.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Sorry for the double post, but chapter 2 is up!
Two chapters and no B-Daman whatsoever. Sorry bout that Don't worry, it'll start to pick up soon!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Looks good so far. It's always good to have a few chapters that explain the characters and such before you get in to the action. Keep it up!

Thanks, and yah, that's what I'm trying to do.
Chapter 3 may be up tomorrow, but if not by then, I haven't a clue when, haha.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Not a fan fiction though, haha. Though Symun is similar to Shumon now that I look at it, haha.
Haven't seen you on for awhile, glad you're back!
Chapter 1 will probably be up tomorrow.

Haha, yeah. I really consider a fanfiction as a fanstory of a different series.
Can't wait for more!

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Ah, ok then, haha.
Chapter 3 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 4 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 5 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 6 is up too!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 7 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

This is awesome Ultramarine!

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I am your dog.
Thanks for the sig, Rock kyoya!

Thanks! Chapter 8 may be up today, if not, it may not be up for awhile.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 8 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Oh gosh, I can't keep up.
I can't wait for more!

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Sorry for the wait, and the short chapter, but chapter 9 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

After like 3 months, chapter 10 is up! For the wait, I made the chapter a bit longer than usual, enjoy!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 11 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

I'm not a fan of "B-Daman," but I like this story. I guess It's because I think this Is the original lol.

Thanks! Chapter 12 is up by the way.

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)

Chapter 13 is up!

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“In the course of twenty crowded years, one parts with many illusions. I did not wish to lose the early ones. Some memories are realities, and are better than anything that can ever happen again.” -Jim Burden (My Ántonia)