(Dec. 30, 2018 10:09 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Special Chapter 1: A Bad Case of Freezer Burn!
“Tsk tsk. What’s taking them so long?” A young boy wondered out loud. He wore a zipped up deep blue coat, darker blue jeans, and black shoes, and was sitting on a long bench with a faded blue paint job that may have once been pretty.
He checked a small watch on his wrist and saw it was 1:12 pm. They were supposed to arrive at 1:00. Bored, the boy began to twirl his curly brown hair.
Suddenly, a figure bounded past to a stadium, followed by a walking girl. “Alright, where’s this Rian guy?”
“Patience, idiot."
“Hey! That’s rude!”
She grinned.
“I’m this Rian guy! What took you two so long?”
The girl looked at him. She wore a thin white jacket over an ice blue shirt and plain black jeans and sneakers. The boy was finally still enough for Rian to see him. He wore a thin black jacket over a deep maroon shirt, long black pants, and dark red boots.
“You’re younger than I thought, kid. Your bey probably can’t handle Drake! Go home.” The girl, who he realized was Misuki, began to walk away.
Misuku jumped and flipped over Misuki and landed in front of her. “Don’t leave yet! He might be a good Blader!”
“As if.” She began to step around him, but he reached out and blocked her.
“Wait, don’t leave yet!” Rian called to her. “Another Blader will come too and he’s older than me!”
A freezing cold wind seemed to pass through as Misuki turned around, her eyes glowing a bright shade of blood red. “You mean a 2 on 2?” An evil grin spread across her face.
“Alright! When’s this other person coming?” Misuku asked.
“He seems late like you too were.”
“We weren’t late, we were just, um, not here in time.” It came out more like a question.
Suddenly, somebody jumped down from a tree. “Hello! My name is Colin and I’m here to battle you!"
“Is this the other guy?”
“Probably.” Rian responded.
“Alright! Let’s begin this battle!”
They all stood around the stadium, Misuki and Misuku on a team against Colin and Rian. “Three! Two! One! Let it...
Rip!” Drake began to shoot around the stadium, while Draco quickly locked down the center. “Burning Fortress! Go!” Misuki roared, eyes a vibrant red that matched her glowing Beyblade. The bottom of the driver glowed as red cracks spread through the stadium like a spider’s web coming from Draco’s tip.
Colin’s Crusher Beyblade was spinning extremely fast and circling the stadium, clearly in its stamina mode. “Go! Ultimate Launch!” A tornado began to form around Crusher as it began to glide towards Draco. Crusher struck Draco, causing more and more cracks to spread throughout the stadium.
“Inferno Fortress!” The stadium suddenly exploded, sending every bey into the air. The stadium had become a dark red color with bright lava flowing over it. Rian grinned. His Beyblade, Revenge, which had quietly been circling the stadium ridge, was sent flying higher than all of theirs. “Go! Revenge Smash!” Revenge turned and smashed on top of Drake, bursting it. Revenge’s momentum caused it to crash into the stadium, where it quickly began to circle the stadium. When Draco landed, it perfectly took the center.
Crusher was falling very slowly because of it’s personal tornado.
“Crusher! Use Ultra Zeta Shift!” It’s Zeta driver quickly changed modes into Attack. It’s tornado disintegrated. It struck the stadium and bounced into the air. “Go! Ultimate Slash!” The beyblade landed so that the underside of the layer hit the side of Draco. “Revenge Strike!” Revenge shot towards Draco and quickly attacked its other side.
The three beys kept clashing. “Draco! Fortress Counter!” Draco’s fortress side glowed as it spun. Suddenly, Revenge and Crusher were both flung into the air. Misuku grinned. “Drake! Frozen Revive!” Crusher burst midair, while Revenge struck the stadium. The parts of Drake were flung into the air by the impact, and they landed directly on top of each other. The parts glowed as the beyblade began to wobble back upright before speeding up. “Drake! Dragonic Whip!” Drake struck Revenge, flinging it up into the air. Rian’s eyes glowed a bright shade of blood red as Revenge’s beast appeared around him.
It was a large Warrior with glowing red skin and dark maroon armor. Revenge wielded a long golden-edged red broadsword. Both Revenge and Rian slashed their arms down as though swinging a sword and they together roared, “Ultra Revenge Smash!” Revenge smashed on top of Draco, using it’s angled driver like a hammer, before bouncing onto Drake, and then bouncing back. It continued the rapid attack, both Drake and Draco losing stamina from the attacks and shifting to their last clicks. Then Revenge dropped between the two, striking them both rapidly, eventually bursting Draco. It was just Drake against Revenge.
“Let’s go! Frostbite Blast!” Drake shot towards Revenge and struck it with it’s jagged edge, sending Revenge shooting into a wall, knocking Revenge onto it’s last click. Misuku grinned as Drake’s beast formed around him. Drake was a long blue dragon with white eyes, and long white wings. It reared back, claws ready for attack. “Now, Drake! Frozen Claw!” Drake shot towards Revenge for a final attack. “Go! Revenge Counter!” The two beyblades clashed for a long time, before both of them burst. Colin and Misuki both had opposing reactions. Colin seemed sad, while Misuki grinned. “Drake won! That means our team won!”
Misuku and Rian both looked at their teammates oddly. “No, Revenge won!” They both said in unison.
Misuki raised an eyebrow. “What?”
“His bey burst after mine just slightly!”
Misuki rolled her eyes and her and Misuku both began to walk away. “Well, that was a fun match!” Misuki’s eye glowed brightly. “Perfect.”
Pretty good. Just a little clarification.
Misuku uses Drake.
Misuki uses Draco.
The original design was a little confusing.
To fit the system better, here are the evolutions:
Frost drake: The two sides have strong contact points designed after glaciers. The leading edge in left spin is flat and the side of the wing is jaggy for barrage impacts. uses 7B.Dm
Burning Draco: The two sides have large defensive walls uses 00B.Dm
when combined:
Burning Drake: Uses the Drake core. The contact points lead to strong impacts. Uses 00B.Dm
Frost Draco: Uses the Draco core. The contact points deflect attacks. Uses 7B.Dm
Special moves:
Frost Drake: Glacial Impact. A barrage of small attacks that lead into a powerful impact.
Burning Draco: Blazing guard. A defensive guard that uses its driver to roll around attacks.
Burning Drake: Infernal Counter. Uses the rough contact surface of the wall to catch impacts before hitting with the glacial wall.
Frost Draco: Frozen Shield. Uses the wall to block before deflecting with the glacial wall.
Mind if I write a chapter?
Could you give me some detail on Trident and Nyke separate and fused? I have an idea.
Frost Drake and Burning Draco vs Hydro Trident and Victor Nyke
then Burning Drake and Frost Draco vs Victor Trident and Hydro Nyke
Highly Observant Hasbro Blader.
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