this will be the battles in the first 20

Poll: are the battlse cool or is it bad and i should change

its good you should keep it going with round 2!
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i should change it
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its great dont change anything
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its ok but it cold use a tweak
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Total: 0% 0 vote(s)
THE ULTIMATE TOURNAMENT battle scheduke[/size]


Blader guy yells"THE PRELIMANRY ROUNDS ARE OVER IN THE A ARENA KENTA AND YUKI IN THE B ARENA NILE AND KYOYA IN THE C ARENA TSUBASA AND YU AND IN THE D ARENA TOBI AND ZEO ALSO IN THE E ARENA DASHAN AND CHI YUN ARENA ,F ARENA AGUMA AND CHRIS , ARENA G KING AND MASAMUNE , AND LAST BUT NOT LEAST ISA AND CALEB. Every one waves at the crowd.in the first round it will be ,tsu yu vs to zeo,isa cal vs agu chr,kyo nil vs chy das,king masa vs yuki kenta.
Are you trolling or was this a serious attempt? It makes my eyes burn just reading it...
no this is not a serious attempt to a story its not close to a story its the first round battles like the first 20 minutes if it was a movie so leave it be.
why do you even think that way thats why i put it as a poll smart and ya didnt have to say it like that just say it wasnt good keep trying. that way makes me SICK.

and some people in the story
gah.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................scrub....................... so BACK OFF!
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Uh ...

Yeah. You should get a legitimate plot and some sentences together before putting another thread up.