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i got bored and drew a tie
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i got bored and drew a tie
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(Feb. 15, 2009 4:53 PM)Grey Wrote: Grey the Critic says:haha good advice
-Unless the clothes are made with indents for breasts, boobs don't look this way when someone wears a shirt. Just sayin'.
-Ties don't look like that (hers kind of looks like a cross between a bowtie and a necktie), and the blush lines are too thick (frankly, it looks like she was branded across the face ).
-The shine in the hair doesn't match the flow of the hair either, and makes her look really Naruto-y.
-Also, the eyes are too emotionless (you could draw them looking off to the side, or down, or something. Right now, she's just staring off into space).
Otherwise, the drawing looks good. Like Blue said, try adding shading and stuff, but make sure you know where the light is coming from. Shadows going any which way just makes it look odd.