Stoked Once Again (Accepting Character Requests)

So this is a sequel to the TV show "Stoked" I don't know why I want to write it but I do. So Here it is.

Prolouge
Chapter 1


Chapter 2

Chap 3

Character request

Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Surfing level: 0-10
Board Appearance:
You switch from first to second person in the fourth paragraph.
Sorry for the typo I went back and changed it.
I'm liking this, you're doing well!

I have a request:

Name: Matthew Crax
Age: 15
Appearance: Medium black hair with blue t-shirt. Wears a belt, and shorts with red sneakers. When surfing he's shirtless and wears blue swim trunks and grey sandals
Personality: Very talented and is very short tempered. Very serious while in trying to get free time to surf, and hates to be betrayed.
Surfing level: 7- as the story goes on eventually progresses to around 8.
Note: Drums
It's a a requirement for a main character.

Also, I was afraid you were going to make a character request like this, Jake Hagane is in too many stories He seems a bit overdone. In no way am I saying that it is a bad character but, "too much of a good thing" Y'now?
OK, I'll change it!

K i changed the name to Matthew Crax, that's based on my old username and i may change the persona and appearance wen i get good ideas for them.
Alright also someone wouldn't just be a level ten surfer you should tone that down a bit.
Also one last thing, it's summertime And I'm pretty sure Matthew would experiance a slow painfull death in those clothes...
Okay, now I only need one more MC before I start Chapter one.
soory but one last thing, what does his board look like?
Name: Logan trikson
Age: 15
Apearance: a black under armour shirt, slick black hair and black shorts
Personalality: funny and always joking around.
Surfing level: 8
Note: electric guitar

Black surfboard with a white tribal shark design In The center.
It's a dark blue board with a marking of a demon face, black stripe down the middle.
sorry one FINAL final thing, you can't have drums and electric guitar and drums you can have electric guitar and viola but if you have drums thats the only instrument your character can have.
alright I'll start working on chapter one.
Got Chapter 1 done

Thanks I'm currently working on the next chap of the last of us it should be done tonight but you should expect chap 2 on saturday
i hav a suggestion:
For a list of characters, do this,
Characters
(Jan. 17, 2014  9:48 PM)Jake Hagane Wrote: i hav a suggestion:
For a list of characters, do this,
Characters
haha, I'm the first one started doing that Tongue_out, it's a good way to keep track of them Wink
yea i thot that waaaaaaaaaaay was useful and damn my keyboard wont work so sorry for constant aa's