Here's the first part:
CHAPTER 1
My name is Denji. I am an orphan. I never new my parents. I was forced to grow up on the streets. Alone. People despised me. They treated me like dirt. I was bullied. I was shunned. It was a living nightmare. But through that whole mess, I had one group of people to look up to: Beybladers. They didn't care what other people thought; when the crowd booed them, and said they couldn't win, they proved them wrong. When the odds were stacked against them, they gave it there all. I decided to become a Beyblader, and when I became succsesful, all the people who treated me like dirt would be forced to cheer for me. I would never have to live in that nightmare again. With my bey, Razor Helios H145 XF I would rise to great heights!
To be continued
So, what do you think?
CHAPTER 1
My name is Denji. I am an orphan. I never new my parents. I was forced to grow up on the streets. Alone. People despised me. They treated me like dirt. I was bullied. I was shunned. It was a living nightmare. But through that whole mess, I had one group of people to look up to: Beybladers. They didn't care what other people thought; when the crowd booed them, and said they couldn't win, they proved them wrong. When the odds were stacked against them, they gave it there all. I decided to become a Beyblader, and when I became succsesful, all the people who treated me like dirt would be forced to cheer for me. I would never have to live in that nightmare again. With my bey, Razor Helios H145 XF I would rise to great heights!
To be continued
So, what do you think?