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Poll: Should I make more stories?

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BATHE ME IN YOUR POETIC FUNNESS
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Aug. 30, 2012  12:47 PM
 
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Aug. 30, 2012  11:08 PM
 
(Aug. 30, 2012  12:47 PM)Ajitumari Wrote: “And this is how to make an orange,roll.
You forgot a quotation mark here.

And, it feels too confusing with the switching POVs. Its hard to understand. The changes in location are confusing...

I think you should try to make it less confusing...
Aug. 30, 2012  11:54 PM
 
It's going good,but like Takasu said you shouldn't switch through POVs so many times.It can get really confusing
Aug. 31, 2012  8:10 AM
 
Quote:You forgot a quotation mark here.

And, it feels too confusing with the switching POVs. Its hard to understand. The changes in location are confusing...

I think you should try to make it less confusing...
Quote:It's going good,but like Takasu said you shouldn't switch through POVs so many times.It can get really confusing

I'll try shifting it to mainly Mike's POV
PS. Michael=Mike
Sep. 05, 2012  3:41 PM
 
Sorry for the long time no post, but I'm back! With more fun chapters this time!