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Idk about this fan-fic (No offense) It's like Unova loses when his opponent first gets his bey, then turns around and wins right after. Other than that it's good.
Idk about this chapter. (No offense) It's like Unova loses when his opponent first gets his bey, then turns around and wins right after. Other than that it's good.
(Aug. 02, 2021 1:21 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 10 is out! (Or is it)
Spoiler (Click to View)Beyblade Burst TechnoX
Chapter 10
Never-Ending Rivalry!
Me: End it, Techno Counter!
(Ultravor leans on its driver and speeds up, Ultravor slams into Aion and sends it flying out of the stadium)
Aleph: *Gasps*
Anton: It’s Techno Ultravor, with a ring-out finish! Unova wins!
Aleph: Nice one!
Me: Thanks.
Aleph: Wanna call it a day?
Me: Nah, I’ve gotta get stronger, I just really wanna get strong enough to beat Valt!
Aleph: Alright, let’s get training!
~Deep In The Forest~
Valt: Go, Shoot!
(Valt pulls off an explosive shoot)
Valt: Go, Valkyrie!
(Valkyrie hits the wall and bounces into the sky, Valkyrie goes flying)
Valt: *Gasps* Valkyrie!
(Someone catches Valkyrie)
Free: Hard at work, huh?
Valt: Yeah, I wanna get way stronger, like stronger than everyone!
Free: *Chuckles* You're gonna have to beat me if you wanna be the strongest.
Valt: Then let’s battle, I’ll show you how much stronger I’ve gotten!
Free: I’d like to see!
Valt: Ready?
Free/Valt: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
(Free pulls off a Techno Shoot, Valt pulls off an explosive Shoot)
~That Night In BC Sol’s Gym~
(I sit down on the bleachers, Valt sits next to me)
Valt: Shouldn’t you be asleep?
Me: I could say the same thing to you.
Valt: *Laughs* I guess you're right! What’s on your mind?
Me: I’ve been training… to beat you.
Valt: Really? I’ve been training just for fun!
Me: For fun?
Valt: Yeah, getting to know Valkyrie, and having fun while I’m Blading!
Me: That’s awesome, I wanna practice now!
Valt: I’ll practice with you!
Me: That would be--
(I fall asleep)
Valt: *Gasps* Well, looks like he was tired! I guess I should go to bed.
~The Next Morning~
(I walk up with a blanket on me)
Me: Oh man, looks like I fell asleep.
(Aleph runs up to me)
Aleph: There you are! I was looking everywhere for you!
Me: Sorry about that! I was talking to Valt and fell asleep!
Aleph: Why would Valt be up that late?
Me: He said he was training.
Aleph: That sounds like Valt.
(Valt walks up to us)
Me: Hi, Valt!
Valt: Hi Unova! I talked to Kris and she said we can battle, in front of everyone!
Aleph/Me: Seriously?!
Valt: Yeah, first thing after breakfast!
Aleph: Breakfast?! We’re going to be late, come on!
(Aleph grabs me by the arm and runs off with me)
Me: Catch you later, Valt!
~In The Cafeteria~
(Everyone looks at me)
Me: Didn’t anyone tell them it’s rude to stare at someone when they’re eating?
Aleph: Yeah, I dunno what their problem is.
(Oliver walks up to us slamming his hand on the table)
Oliver: We’d like an explanation!
Me: Excuse me?
Oliver: Don’t act like you don’t know!
Aleph: Oliver, back--
Oliver: Can it! I’m talking to Unova!
Me: I seriously don’t know what you're talking about.
Oliver: You get to battle Valt, we’ve worked hard too, why don’t we get to battle him too!
Me: He asked me, I don’t know why, but he asked me!
Oliver: You’re just a nobody who just joined, this is so unfair!
Ange: Oliver Agawa, stop it now!
Oliver: Ange, you’ve gotta back me up, it’s unfair!
Ange: Valt has his reasons for who he battles and why, he knows what he’s doing!
Oliver: Grr!!
(Oliver storms off)
Ange: Unova, I’m sorry about him. He can get really riled up sometimes!
Me: It’s good, I just don’t know what his problem is!
Aleph: Unova, your match with Valt is about to start!
Me: You’re right, it’s time to get ready!
~In BC Sol’s Main Gym~
Brandon: Hello everyone! I’m BC Sol’s new announcer, Branden! Anyways, we’ve got a match with the new Shining Star Of BC Sol! Unova Bashida!
(I run out to the stage)
Me: Hey everyone!
Brandon: And we’ve got BC Sol’s Defender! Valt Aoi!
(Valt walks up to the stage)
Valt: We’re gonna give you the match of your life!
Brandon: Both of our Bladers are fired up and ready! So let’s get right into this!
Anton: First battle!
Me: Savior Valkyrie's going down!
Valt: Trust me, I’ll be showing you our true power in this match!
Anton: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Go, Shoot!!
(I pull off a Techno shoot, Valt pulls off an explosive shoot)
Brandon: Two strong shoots right out the gate!
Valt: Rush Shoot!
Me: Techno Shoot!
(Valkyrie and Ultravor hit each other with a powerful flurry of attacks)
Brandon: Valkyrie and Ultravor hit each other with an onslaught of powerful blows!
Valt: Bound Savior!
(Valkyrie slams into Ultravor with its bound blade, Ultravor gets sent flying)
Me: Come on, hang in there!
(Ultravor slams into the wall and picks up speed)
Brandon: Ultravor survives a deadly attack that could’ve cost it the match!
Me: Techno Bomb!
(Ultravor speeds up and slams into Valkyrie, Valkyrie gets sent flying across the stadium)
Valt: *Gasps*
Brandon: Ultravor attacks Valkyrie with all its might and sends it flying!!
Me: Techno Strike!
(Ultravor leans on its driver and picks up speed, Ultravor heads straight for Valkyrie)
Valt: Shot Driver!
(Valkyrie jumps over Ultravor)
Brandon: Valkyrie just dodged a huge attack!
Me: I knew you’d do that!
Valt: *Gasps*
Me: Now!
(Ultravor picks up speed on the Dynamite ramps)
Valt: I’ll do that too!
(Valkyrie picks up speed on the Dynamite ramp)
Brandon: Looks like Ultravor and Valkyrie have both picked up some serious speed!
Valt: Valkyrie!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valkyrie blazes out of the bey)
Me: Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the bey)
Valt: True Savior Slash!!
Me: Techno Discharge!
(Ultravor and Valkyrie start clashing wildly, a huge explosion ouccers blowing smoke in all directions)
All (Except Me and Valt): Ah!!
(Valkyrie gets blown high up in the air and bursts)
Valt: *Gasps*
Me: What the-- Yes!
Anton: It’s Techno Ultravor with a burst finish! The winner is Unova Bashida!
(The whole club goes quiet)
Brandon: Our New Shining Star has just beat BC Sol’s Defender!
Aleph: He did it, yes!
(The whole club starts cheering)
Valt: Good game, that was seriously fun!
Me: It really was!
Kris: Attention please, everyone!
All: *Gasps*
Kris: After watching this incredible battle, I’ve decided something. Aleph Murphy and Unova Bashida are on the top team!
Me/Aleph: *Gasps*
Valt: You deserved it, but that’s not all, there’s another class called Legends, you need to be super strong to get there!
Me: I’ll get there, with Ultravor!
Ultravor: That’s right!
Idk about this chapter. (No offense) It's like Unova loses when his opponent first gets his bey, then turns around and wins right after. Other than that it's good.
