Beyblade Zero Evolution (a fanfic/doujinshi/radioplay/videogame)

Grey · Nov 23 2008 10:52 PM

(Nov 21 2008 04:37 AM)EverlastingBlader wrote ... Meh, Reading beyblade is dumb without images. I don't care how well you describe the blade, it's going to be different to others imagination.

That's, like, one of the greatest things about writing. You're free to interpret each scene in your own mind, whereas on TV, everything is set out for you, giving you no room for interpretation.

(Nov 21 2008 03:51 PM)utsavkotrial wrote ... P.S. dont wrry bout the other guys their veteran bladers not anime fans.

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I'm an anime fan, and yet I really don't think most of this is a good idea.

Nov 24 2008 01:01 AM

I think 99% of the people on the forums like anime.

utsavkotrial · Nov 24 2008 05:28 AM

okkk okkk i was just yapping. but come on this stuff can work!!!

Grey · Nov 25 2008 02:41 AM

(Nov 24 2008 01:01 AM)B wrote ... I think 99% of the people on the forums like anime.

I was referring specifically to the Beyblade anime. I'm not really much of an anime fan, though I was a few years ago.

Now, I'll watch it if it's convenient, or if I happen to turn it on. That's really it.

Pikachao · Nov 30 2008 12:07 AM

Quote:No need to make 8 year olds kick the crap out of each other.

Could NOT stop laughing at this thought. Pinching_grin

This is taking a while though, even kenny writes faster than this... (quality should CLEARLY be over quanitity though but seeing the first page I can't tell that this has either tbh).

Is it just me that thinks 'Zero Evolution' is a dumb name? I know it's REALLY stupid but every time I think of "zero evolution" I think of this:

[Image: zeroevol-1.png]

Sorry, but that's the best way I could think of to describe how I feel about the name. Pinching_eyes_2

Bey Brad · Nov 30 2008 12:21 AM

i'm glad someone finally pointed out that zero evolution is a bad name

SavatoEX · Nov 30 2008 02:16 AM

the name makes zero sense its sound like a cool idea but change the name and make the main character a female who's main blade is dems or somethin or an evil main caracter btw if u need an editor ill help u out.

bbgoldflame · Nov 30 2008 09:03 AM

I'm the editor for this story. Dranzer will hopefully post the edited version of it later on - you'll see an improvement in the writing standard. Dranzer's writing style is very different to mine and as it is his fanfic to begin with, I'm going to keep to his style and not override it with my own. Please make only constructive critcism about this, not shallow, juvenile remarks such as how "dumb" it is since it is the only way a writer can improve.

Roan · Nov 30 2008 09:09 AM

Ok there's a difference between being a writer looking to improve and being a writer who's stuck on a lame concept that they won't let go of.

Honestly his writing is fine, its just the subject matter and overall plot that is holding him back.

Grey No Return	Post: #61 (Nov 21 2008 04:37 AM)EverlastingBlader wrote ... Meh, Reading beyblade is dumb without images. I don't care how well you describe the blade, it's going to be different to others imagination. That's, like, one of the greatest things about writing. You're free to interpret each scene in your own mind, whereas on TV, everything is set out for you, giving you no room for interpretation. (Nov 21 2008 03:51 PM)utsavkotrial wrote ... P.S. dont wrry bout the other guys their veteran bladers not anime fans. ... I'm an anime fan, and yet I really don't think most of this is a good idea.
Nov 23 2008 10:52 PM

B king of carp	Post: #62 (This post was last modified: Nov 24 2008 01:01 AM by B.) I think 99% of the people on the forums like anime.
Nov 24 2008 01:01 AM

utsavkotrial	Post: #63 okkk okkk i was just yapping. but come on this stuff can work!!!
Nov 24 2008 05:28 AM

Grey No Return	Post: #64 (Nov 24 2008 01:01 AM)B wrote ... I think 99% of the people on the forums like anime. I was referring specifically to the Beyblade anime. I'm not really much of an anime fan, though I was a few years ago. Now, I'll watch it if it's convenient, or if I happen to turn it on. That's really it.
Nov 25 2008 02:41 AM

Pikachao "Unique"	Post: #65 Quote:No need to make 8 year olds kick the crap out of each other. Could NOT stop laughing at this thought. This is taking a while though, even kenny writes faster than this... (quality should CLEARLY be over quanitity though but seeing the first page I can't tell that this has either tbh). Is it just me that thinks 'Zero Evolution' is a dumb name? I know it's REALLY stupid but every time I think of "zero evolution" I think of this: Sorry, but that's the best way I could think of to describe how I feel about the name. ~Pikachao I almost never post here anymore, you don't have to send PMs asking where I've gone, I only check back occasionally. :')
Nov 30 2008 12:07 AM

Bey Brad MAXIMUM POWER	Post: #66 i'm glad someone finally pointed out that zero evolution is a bad name I no longer manage nor work for the WBO. Do not PM or e-mail me questions about Beyblade! I will not respond!
Nov 30 2008 12:21 AM

SavatoEX	Post: #67 (This post was last modified: Nov 30 2008 02:22 AM by SavatoEX.) the name makes zero sense its sound like a cool idea but change the name and make the main character a female who's main blade is dems or somethin or an evil main caracter btw if u need an editor ill help u out.
Nov 30 2008 02:16 AM

bbgoldflame	Post: #68 I'm the editor for this story. Dranzer will hopefully post the edited version of it later on - you'll see an improvement in the writing standard. Dranzer's writing style is very different to mine and as it is his fanfic to begin with, I'm going to keep to his style and not override it with my own. Please make only constructive critcism about this, not shallow, juvenile remarks such as how "dumb" it is since it is the only way a writer can improve.
Nov 30 2008 09:03 AM

Roan Living Color	Post: #69 Ok there's a difference between being a writer looking to improve and being a writer who's stuck on a lame concept that they won't let go of. Honestly his writing is fine, its just the subject matter and overall plot that is holding him back. My Poetry \| My Twitter
Nov 30 2008 09:09 AM