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RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Will I AmBlader - Jul. 11, 2011 Man. that was EPIIIIC RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 11, 2011 Thank you. Chapter 5 is nearly ready. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Smart Blader - Jul. 12, 2011 Yay!!! Can't wait 2 read it! RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - galaxyninja - Jul. 12, 2011 yo dude im gonna take this and put it all together by copy and paste and then send it to you by email RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Smart Blader - Jul. 12, 2011 Tips on your story 1. Everyone can't have blonde hair. It would look like u have no imagination or good ideas. U see my character has blue hair and Gingka has red hair etc. 2. Everyone can't have blue eyes either. Same thing that I told u in tip 1. 3. Make every characters different than each other except the ones already made. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 12, 2011 (Jul. 12, 2011 1:46 AM)galaxyninja Wrote: yo dude im gonna take this and put it all together by copy and paste and then send it to you by email Why would you do that? RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011 I just want to add on a little bit to the end of chapter 4. Spoiler (Click to View) Hope you enjoy chapter 5. I didn't have a lot of time to work on it but here it is: Spoiler (Click to View) RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011 All character requests will be added in Chapter 6 and 7. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Clefairy - Jul. 14, 2011 I got a character. Name: Akune Okita Hair:black Bey:Burn Libra ED145 RF (Balance and Stamina type) Special Moves:Burning Tornado.When the beyblade is about to lose all its stamina it boosts the stamina half way so it wont fall yet. Sand Spin track.ED145(spin track)turns into sand and gets a little bit bigger than the bey and when the opponent's bey attacks the spin track sand will go all over the bey and will slow it down. Skin color:tan Eye color:light blue Personality ![]() Clothes:A white Tee with his name on the front signed by other people.Blue Jeans.Blue Wristband if he sweats.Black High tops Converse.Slanted Red Belt with a skull in the front. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011 Accepted but I might change a few things. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Clefairy - Jul. 14, 2011 ok and theres another personality i forgot ![]() RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011 Ok. He might be in chapter 6 or 7. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Clefairy - Jul. 14, 2011 When will it be released? And GREAT story! RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011 Thank you. I'm very busy these days so maybe tomorrow or Saturday. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Imperial - Jul. 14, 2011 Can i Request a character Name ![]() Bey:Raze Fox BD230CS Appereance:Black hair with red highlights. Black puffy no sleeve shirt. Dark jeans. Personality:Brave and takes lots of chances in battles, Skin color:Tan Eyes:green RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - CocoaPuffs - Jul. 14, 2011 I have a character request It is a boy Name: Hoozuki Amias Clothes: Black Tank Top, Blue Jeans, sandals Eye Color: yellow Hair Color: Purple, covers his left eye Beyblade: Fang Kerbecs R145D Personality: Friendly (except to the darkness bladers) Special Move: Triple Fang Strike, Kerbecs' spin track glows, Cerberus bit beast appears and all thhree heads strike oponent I forgot one thing about my character beyblade gear: Rev up launcher, Grey launcher grip, Angle compus RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011 All Accepted. I can only take a few more character requests. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Septentrione - Jul. 16, 2011 Ok I hope this one gets in Name: Kyro Kiba Gender: Male Personality: Very Jolly but has a more serious side Bey: Beat Fox 145MF (Balance) Special move: Killing Claw Deals damage at the opponent... But deals damage to itself too. Wears a purple and black T-shirt and wears black pants with white sneakers. Oh and and awesome story!!! RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 16, 2011 Accepted. I am currently not taking anymore requests. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - CyberBlader27 - Jul. 17, 2011 Sorry I wasn't here for the last week. Nice story! Chapter 5 was short yet interesting. It says Jet has a bey... Hmm... YAY! RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 18, 2011 I forgot to mention his Bey... Midnight Eagle 85 XF He decided to change his performance tip. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - ControL_ - Jul. 18, 2011 Read the comment I made: http://beybladefiction.freeforums.org/cross-black-excalibur-t104.html As it says, it is extremely bland, you jump right into a dull battle which gives no scenery description. The battle is over before the scenario is introduced. We want more depth! If you want, you can read my battle scenes (link in sig). http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-The-Wilderness-Falls-Story-Not-Accepting-Characters-ATM RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 18, 2011 Thank you for your opinion. I will do my best to make it better. RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 19, 2011 Hope you like Chapter 6. Spoiler (Click to View) RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - Primal - Jul. 19, 2011 Haha, Rei is finally here! ![]() |