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RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Will I AmBlader - Jul. 11, 2011

Man. that was EPIIIIC


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 11, 2011

Thank you. Chapter 5 is nearly ready.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Smart Blader - Jul. 12, 2011

Yay!!! Can't wait 2 read it!


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - galaxyninja - Jul. 12, 2011

yo dude im gonna take this and put it all together by copy and paste and then send it to you by email


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Smart Blader - Jul. 12, 2011

Tips on your story
1. Everyone can't have blonde hair. It would look like u have no imagination or good ideas. U see my character has blue hair and Gingka has red hair etc.
2. Everyone can't have blue eyes either. Same thing that I told u in tip 1.
3. Make every characters different than each other except the ones already made.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 12, 2011

(Jul. 12, 2011  1:46 AM)galaxyninja Wrote: yo dude im gonna take this and put it all together by copy and paste and then send it to you by email

Why would you do that?


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011

I just want to add on a little bit to the end of chapter 4.

Chapter 5 is based 2 months later.
Hope you enjoy chapter 5. I didn't have a lot of time to work on it but here it is:




RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011

All character requests will be added in Chapter 6 and 7.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Clefairy - Jul. 14, 2011

I got a character.
Name: Akune Okita
Hair:black
Bey:Burn Libra ED145 RF (Balance and Stamina type)
Special Moves:Burning Tornado.When the beyblade is about to lose all its stamina it boosts the stamina half way so it wont fall yet. Sand Spin track.ED145(spin track)turns into sand and gets a little bit bigger than the bey and when the opponent's bey attacks the spin track sand will go all over the bey and will slow it down.
Skin color:tan
Eye color:light blue
PersonalityConfusedmart,Quiet,Competitive
Clothes:A white Tee with his name on the front signed by other people.Blue Jeans.Blue Wristband if he sweats.Black High tops Converse.Slanted Red Belt with a skull in the front.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011

Accepted but I might change a few things.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Clefairy - Jul. 14, 2011

ok and theres another personality i forgotEeevil.Can u also make him be part of the the Darkness bladers?


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011

Ok. He might be in chapter 6 or 7.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Clefairy - Jul. 14, 2011

When will it be released? And GREAT story!


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011

Thank you. I'm very busy these days so maybe tomorrow or Saturday.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Imperial - Jul. 14, 2011

Can i Request a character
NameGrinorikore
Bey:Raze Fox BD230CS
Appereance:Black hair with red highlights. Black puffy no sleeve shirt. Dark jeans.
Personality:Brave and takes lots of chances in battles,
Skin color:Tan
Eyes:green


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - CocoaPuffs - Jul. 14, 2011

I have a character request

It is a boy
Name: Hoozuki Amias
Clothes: Black Tank Top, Blue Jeans, sandals
Eye Color: yellow
Hair Color: Purple, covers his left eye
Beyblade: Fang Kerbecs R145D
Personality: Friendly (except to the darkness bladers)
Special Move: Triple Fang Strike, Kerbecs' spin track glows, Cerberus bit beast appears and all thhree heads strike oponent
I forgot one thing about my character beyblade gear: Rev up launcher, Grey launcher grip, Angle compus


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 14, 2011

All Accepted. I can only take a few more character requests.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Septentrione - Jul. 16, 2011

Ok I hope this one gets in
Name: Kyro Kiba
Gender: Male
Personality: Very Jolly but has a more serious side
Bey: Beat Fox 145MF (Balance)
Special move: Killing Claw
Deals damage at the opponent... But deals damage to itself too.
Wears a purple and black T-shirt and wears black pants with white sneakers.
Oh and and awesome story!!!


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 16, 2011

Accepted. I am currently not taking anymore requests.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - CyberBlader27 - Jul. 17, 2011

Sorry I wasn't here for the last week. Nice story! Chapter 5 was short yet interesting. It says Jet has a bey... Hmm... YAY!


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 18, 2011

I forgot to mention his Bey...
Midnight Eagle 85 XF

He decided to change his performance tip.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - ControL_ - Jul. 18, 2011

Read the comment I made:

http://beybladefiction.freeforums.org/cross-black-excalibur-t104.html

As it says, it is extremely bland, you jump right into a dull battle which gives no scenery description. The battle is over before the scenario is introduced. We want more depth!

If you want, you can read my battle scenes (link in sig). http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-The-Wilderness-Falls-Story-Not-Accepting-Characters-ATM


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 18, 2011

Thank you for your opinion. I will do my best to make it better.


RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - Cygnus - Jul. 19, 2011

Hope you like Chapter 6.




RE: [BurnBlader] My BeyStory - Cross Black Excalibur (NOT Accepting Character Requests) - Primal - Jul. 19, 2011

Haha, Rei is finally here! Grin Can't wait to see (or read, rather) more of him.