(Nov. 02, 2020  8:28 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 02, 2020  8:20 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Free will probally get his deer to take care of the child

Lol free is the dad but he wants to back out

(Nov. 02, 2020  8:31 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:

(Nov. 02, 2020  8:28 PM)kai edits Wrote: Lol free is the dad but he wants to back out

Come on. This is going to ruin everyone’s favorite fanship, free x shun

(Nov. 02, 2020  8:33 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Free is still to young to be a dad. He is only 18

(Nov. 02, 2020  8:51 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 02, 2020  8:31 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Come on. This is going to ruin everyone’s favorite fanship, free x shun

It was a joke.

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Part 3 chapter 7 the perfect tag team Alice and Delta!
In Alice's dream.
Alice: Delta is that you.
Delta:yes it is.
Alice opens the door slowly.
Delta:Alice your here.
Delta kisses Alice in the lips.
Alice:um.
Alice blushes till she turns red.
Alice: Delta i-.
Alice wakes up.
Alice:dang it I hate it when I wake up in the middle of my dream.
Later.
Match 1 Delta and Alice vs Alexander and shu.
Alice:big brother I won't go easy on you even if we are family.
Delta:let's go Alice to the finals!
Alice:right!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Delta:go death Diabolos! Death shoot!
Diabolos hits dragoon towards Pegasus.
Delta:go Alice!
Alice:I got it. Go Pegasus! Rose collection!
Pegasus drains dragoon spin.
Delta:let's finish this go Diabolos!
Valkyrie blocks the attack.
Valt:you forgot about me?
Alice:are you sure about that?
Valkyrie is sent flying.
Valt:nani this power.
Alice:shun is not the only one can stop time you know.
Diabolos hits valkyrie then valkyrie bursts.
Alexander:go dragoon! Venom flow!
Diabolos and Pegasus dodges the attack.
Delta:go Alice let's show them our new move.
Alice:right.
Delta and Alice:burning recollection!
Both diabolos and Pegasus hit dragoon.
Alice:go Pegasus!
Delta:go Diabolos! Turn to ash!
Dragoon bursts.
Delta:we did it Alice.
Alice:yes we did.
Delta kisses Alice on the lips.
Chapter end
Skit 1
Shun:whoa whoa back up. Why she gets to be in episode and not me!
Free:your having issues remember.
Shun:to bad. Kai edits listen to me put me in the next episode or no more maiden for you.
Kai edits:sure thing shun.

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(Nov. 02, 2020  8:33 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Free is still to young to be a dad. He is only 18

New episode is out!

(Nov. 03, 2020  1:32 AM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 02, 2020  8:51 PM)kai edits Wrote: It was a joke.

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Part 3 chapter 7 the perfect tag team Alice and Delta!
In Alice's dream.
Alice: Delta is that you.
Delta:yes it is.
Alice opens the door slowly.
Delta:Alice your here.
Delta kisses Alice in the lips.
Alice:um.
Alice blushes till she turns red.
Alice: Delta i-.
Alice wakes up.
Alice:dang it I hate it when I wake up in the middle of my dream.
Later.
Match 1 Delta and Alice vs Alexander and shu.
Alice:big brother I won't go easy on you even if we are family.
Delta:let's go Alice to the finals!
Alice:right!
3 2 1 go shoot.
Delta:go death Diabolos! Death shoot!
Diabolos hits dragoon towards Pegasus.
Delta:go Alice!
Alice:I got it. Go Pegasus! Rose collection!
Pegasus drains dragoon spin.
Delta:let's finish this go Diabolos!
Valkyrie blocks the attack.
Valt:you forgot about me?
Alice:are you sure about that?
Valkyrie is sent flying.
Valt:nani this power.
Alice:shun is not the only one can stop time you know.
Diabolos hits valkyrie then valkyrie bursts.
Alexander:go dragoon! Venom flow!
Diabolos and Pegasus dodges the attack.
Delta:go Alice let's show them our new move.
Alice:right.
Delta and Alice:burning recollection!
Both diabolos and Pegasus hit dragoon.
Alice:go Pegasus!
Delta:go Diabolos! Turn to ash!
Dragoon bursts.
Delta:we did it Alice.
Alice:yes we did.
Delta kisses Alice on the lips.
Chapter end
Skit 1
Shun:whoa whoa back up. Why she gets to be in episode and not me!
Free:your having issues remember.
Shun:to bad. Kai edits listen to me put me in the next episode or no more maiden for you.
Kai edits:sure thing shun.

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New episode is out!

I see Delta X Alice

(Nov. 03, 2020  1:34 AM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 03, 2020  1:32 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: I see Delta X Alice

Yup I can't make shun x Delta but I sure can do Delta x Alice!
Can you guys predict what's going to happen now in the story?

(Nov. 03, 2020  2:16 AM)kai edits Wrote: How you guys like delta's appearance?

(Nov. 03, 2020  2:20 AM)kai edits Wrote: How you guys like the new ship ?
Alice x Delta

(Nov. 03, 2020  1:24 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 8 shun and free vs Alice and Delta!
Alice:that was amazing Delta!
Delta:that move we did?
Alice tackles Delta to the floor.
Alice: Delta I love you.
Alice kisses Delta on the lips.
Later in shun's mind.
Shun:so who is going to battle?
Kai:I mean I can.
Kisara:I can battle.
Erica:it's up to choice is yours.
Sarah:let shun pick.
Shun:Kai you can battle but when I will when we're about to lose.
In the real world.
Free:shun are you awake.
Shun:yes I am.
Shun walks out of her room and walks to free.
Free:shun you alright?
Shun:yes.
Shun was wearing all pink.
Free:shun are wearing all pink.
Shun realizes it.
Shun:um.
Shun blushes till she turns red.
Later at the tournament.
Alice:let's do our best Delta.
Delta:right.
Shun:let's go free let's show them how we battle.
Free:right.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Shun:go maiden!
Maiden speeds up and hits Diabolos into the air.
Delta:hmmm are you sure your going to win. Dual phantom!
Free:i will take on Alice you take on Delta.
Shun:right. Maiden! Maidens ignition!
Diabolos hits maiden and the min bey.
Shun:what?
Delta:die! Shining cross!
Maiden is knocked into the air.
Shun:I am about to lose. Lose? Lose? I will win win I will win.
A dark aura forms around shun and maiden.
Shun:do not cross me!
Delta:what?
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Pegasus hits maiden but the attack fails.
Shun:I will win.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kai:alright! Go maiden! Guardian's barrier!
Diabolos and Pegasus attacks maiden.
Alice:nice trick. Pegasus! Rose's time!
*time stops*
Kai:maidens time!
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose overdrive!
Pegasus hits maiden.
Kai:you thought you can stop time and stop me?
Pegasus is sent flying.
*time resumes*
Alice:I was waiting for that! Go Pegasus! Rose finish!
Pegasus hits maiden while in the air.
Kai:what?
Maiden bursts.
Kai:this can't be?
Kai unfuses.
Shun:maidens redo!
Time goes back before maiden bursts.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens recollection!
Alice:break through Pegasus!
Maiden and Pegasus were sent flying.
Free:go fafnir!
Fafnir hits maiden back in play.
Shun:thanks free.
The mark of maiden glows red.
Shun:let's go free.
Free:right.
Delta:your too slow. Diabolos! Burning upper.
Diabolos knocks fafnir into the air.
Free:what?
Fafnir bursts.
Shun:go maiden!
A aura appears around shun flickering in and off.
Delta:go Diabolos!
Shun:GO MAIDEN! MAIDENS FUSION!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright! Heaven's nova!
Deltaiabolos! Burning slash!
Both beys hit each other.
Delta:arghhhhhhhhhhhh!
Kisara:arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Alice:go Pegasus!
Maiden hits the wall. And kisara unfuses.
Shun:you did it.
Shun laughs.
Alice:go Delta.
Diabolos hits maiden one last time.
Shun:you did it now. Maidens recollection!
Shun smirked. A huge explosion hits Diabolos.
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Two huge explosion hits each other.
Alice:go now!
Maiden bursts midair.
Shun:you did it big sister.
Shun laughs.
Shun:you increased my flare.
Chapter end

(Nov. 03, 2020  2:57 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 03, 2020  1:24 PM)kai edits Wrote: Part 3 chapter 8 shun and free vs Alice and Delta!
Alice:that was amazing Delta!
Delta:that move we did?
Alice tackles Delta to the floor.
Alice: Delta I love you.
Alice kisses Delta on the lips.
Later in shun's mind.
Shun:so who is going to battle?
Kai:I mean I can.
Kisara:I can battle.
Erica:it's up to choice is yours.
Sarah:let shun pick.
Shun:Kai you can battle but when I will when we're about to lose.
In the real world.
Free:shun are you awake.
Shun:yes I am.
Shun walks out of her room and walks to free.
Free:shun you alright?
Shun:yes.
Shun was wearing all pink.
Free:shun are wearing all pink.
Shun realizes it.
Shun:um.
Shun blushes till she turns red.
Later at the tournament.
Alice:let's do our best Delta.
Delta:right.
Shun:let's go free let's show them how we battle.
Free:right.
3 2 1 go shoot.
Shun:go maiden!
Maiden speeds up and hits Diabolos into the air.
Delta:hmmm are you sure your going to win. Dual phantom!
Free:i will take on Alice you take on Delta.
Shun:right. Maiden! Maidens ignition!
Diabolos hits maiden and the min bey.
Shun:what?
Delta:die! Shining cross!
Maiden is knocked into the air.
Shun:I am about to lose. Lose? Lose? I will win win I will win.
A dark aura forms around shun and maiden.
Shun:do not cross me!
Delta:what?
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Pegasus hits maiden but the attack fails.
Shun:I will win.
A bright light comes from shun.
Kai:alright! Go maiden! Guardian's barrier!
Diabolos and Pegasus attacks maiden.
Alice:nice trick. Pegasus! Rose's time!
*time stops*
Kai:maidens time!
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose overdrive!
Pegasus hits maiden.
Kai:you thought you can stop time and stop me?
Pegasus is sent flying.
*time resumes*
Alice:I was waiting for that! Go Pegasus! Rose finish!
Pegasus hits maiden while in the air.
Kai:what?
Maiden bursts.
Kai:this can't be?
Kai unfuses.
Shun:maidens redo!
Time goes back before maiden bursts.
Shun:go maiden! Maidens recollection!
Alice:break through Pegasus!
Maiden and Pegasus were sent flying.
Free:go fafnir!
Fafnir hits maiden back in play.
Shun:thanks free.
The mark of maiden glows red.
Shun:let's go free.
Free:right.
Delta:your too slow. Diabolos! Burning upper.
Diabolos knocks fafnir into the air.
Free:what?
Fafnir bursts.
Shun:go maiden!
A aura appears around shun flickering in and off.
Delta:go Diabolos!
Shun:GO MAIDEN! MAIDENS FUSION!
A bright light comes from shun.
Kisara:alright! Heaven's nova!
Deltaiabolos! Burning slash!
Both beys hit each other.
Delta:arghhhhhhhhhhhh!
Kisara:arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Alice:go Pegasus!
Maiden hits the wall. And kisara unfuses.
Shun:you did it.
Shun laughs.
Alice:go Delta.
Diabolos hits maiden one last time.
Shun:you did it now. Maidens recollection!
Shun smirked. A huge explosion hits Diabolos.
Alice:go Pegasus! Rose recollection!
Two huge explosion hits each other.
Alice:go now!
Maiden bursts midair.
Shun:you did it big sister.
Shun laughs.
Shun:you increased my flare.
Chapter end

I can tell she is going to go insane. Wow this battle was intense

(Nov. 03, 2020  3:00 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 03, 2020  2:57 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I can tell she is going to go insane. Wow this battle was intense

Who shun is going insane? The battle was epic.

(Nov. 03, 2020  3:29 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 03, 2020  3:00 PM)kai edits Wrote: Who shun is going insane? The battle was epic.

Yeah Shun

(Nov. 03, 2020  3:33 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 03, 2020  3:29 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Yeah Shun

Her multiple personality disorder is going crazy.

(Nov. 03, 2020  3:34 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 03, 2020  3:33 PM)kai edits Wrote: Her multiple personality disorder is going crazy.

Not as crazy as her love for Free

(Nov. 03, 2020  3:46 PM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 03, 2020  3:34 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Not as crazy as her love for Free

Yeah can you imagine how much she loves free.

(Nov. 05, 2020  1:05 AM)kai edits Wrote: part 3 chapter 10 Lana vs shu/a new girl in town Mary Aizen!
Lana:dance dance spriggan!
Lana laughs as spriggan is moving closer to the edge of the stadium.
Shu:not good. Go spriggan!
Spriggan flys into the air.
Lana:I win! Maidens recollection control art!
A huge explosion hits spriggan.
???:mine if I drop in.
A beyblade knocks both spriggan and maiden out of the stadium.
???:weak as always.
Lana:who are you?
Mary:I am Mary aizen!
Lana releases shun from her control.
Shun:Mary you said?
Mary:yes why?
Akira runs into the room.
Akira:are you ok shun.
Mary:are you akira kurenai.
Akira:yes why.
Mary kisses akira on the lips.
Mary:I missed you.
Akira:I don't know you.
Flashback.
Mary:akira come on.
Akira:Mary hold on.
Akira pulls out a locket.
Mary:akira it's alright. Your ex will regret leaving you I promise.
Mary kisses akira on the lips.
Chapter end

(Nov. 05, 2020  1:06 AM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 05, 2020  1:05 AM)kai edits Wrote: part 3 chapter 10 Lana vs shu/a new girl in town Mary Aizen!
Lana:dance dance spriggan!
Lana laughs as spriggan is moving closer to the edge of the stadium.
Shu:not good. Go spriggan!
Spriggan flys into the air.
Lana:I win! Maidens recollection control art!
A huge explosion hits spriggan.
???:mine if I drop in.
A beyblade knocks both spriggan and maiden out of the stadium.
???:weak as always.
Lana:who are you?
Mary:I am Mary aizen!
Lana releases shun from her control.
Shun:Mary you said?
Mary:yes why?
Akira runs into the room.
Akira:are you ok shun.
Mary:are you akira kurenai.
Akira:yes why.
Mary kisses akira on the lips.
Mary:I missed you.
Akira:I don't know you.
Flashback.
Mary:akira come on.
Akira:Mary hold on.
Akira pulls out a locket.
Mary:akira it's alright. Your ex will regret leaving you I promise.
Mary kisses akira on the lips.
Chapter end

Nice chapter. But one question: Who is Mary