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LimiTTrickster

Dec. 07, 2013  6:01 PM
I would appreciate it if someone was able to review this. Thank you in advance. Sorry for this short post, however, I wanted to notify everyone. Sorry once again.

DefStamina88

Dec. 08, 2013  4:43 AM
I read your chapter 5. I am very fond of it. Don't really see any mistakes. Keep it up...
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World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc. > Off-Topic Forums > Your Creations > Bey Series - The Four Pillars, Chapter 5 is up! Review Please!