True XD Unless I sign in into my other acc I forgot the passwy two So I created this one and give you a sidekick for that evil person
Also make sure to rate my story on Tue poll.
This is q pretty good story so far, considering its on your phone.
Guys, I'm allowing fire element for today and tomorrow so you better give your character requests quick.
I have added 60% of chapter 2, the rest, I will put up tomorrow morning, or even today night. Let me know how it is.
It is quite good but I expected there to be more detail on the battle rather than just that, so I may change my vote to ok from pretty good. Don't take this as offense, I am trying to help out.
Can I put fire element in my descrpition then.
Um.. You'll have to make a side character or I'll allow one special move to be chqnged to fire
Ok I'll change one special move.
Second chapter's cool! Lol Ryu's a bey mechanic!
Also can I change one special move to a fire element?
Yes, you can all do that, just post the move soon, as I am working on chapter 3 right now. your charactecr is not a beymechanic, she just knows a lot about beys which is why she can make beyblades and improve them.
Oh cool! that sounds like the real me!XD I'm going to change one special move to fire!
Like I said, post it SOO preferably in the next hour.
Awesome I can't wait for chapter three and awesome skills ryukiba
(Aug. 25, 2013 9:27 PM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: [ -> ]Awesome I can't wait for chapter three and awesome skills ryukiba
Yeah can't wait either! And thanks!
I've added chapter 3, and I will make it bigger tomorrow(hopefully).
Ok great.Im going to love it.
How was it, feed back is appreciated, rather than sayng it is awesome, put more detail and actually tell me how it was.
Ok lol!XD I rated it!
It was how do you say great it was fasted paced s bit but the new level UPS ir upgrades are really. Unique to. Our bets it shows our personality and eb
Yeah this was short chapter but now the new ones will be at least 1.5 pages Lon word.
Lol sorry I was typing. To fast on my phone so its messy but I'm filled in joy for chapter4
I'll pm you what is coming up in q mo
Ok great that way I can help you.
Also ill try not to rush the battles this time. Thanks for the input.