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(Feb. 04, 2022  4:11 AM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]Hey , I ended a OC entry a while ago, but would you like to add a custom Oc and Bey? And do you know the Mystical System?

I would but i'm afraid it will be called overpowered, the OC I would enter i've had for the past 7-8 years

i'll go ahead and say what his bey is (its a Spriggan, cry about it) (yes its a DB bey cause I wait to see if the bey will evolve before evolving it in my AU and DB ain't ended in my AU yet)

(this bey is Astral Spriggan but modified)
Core: Spriggan (it has metal in the center of it to resemble a "Metal God Chip, it also has better teeth (yes it is tighter than Lord Spriggan)
Blade: Astral (yes it can attack in left spin cause Astral in left is underrated ((the blase also has a rounder shape than regular Astral)) it also has tabs to make it harder to burst)
Armor: 0 (just a heavier 0, that's it)
Disc: Over (just a heavier version of Over, instead of 33 grams it's 40 grams)
Driver: Quattro' (just a dash version of Quattro)

hopefully the Shu and Spriggan fans don't kill me for this

yes my OC is VERY strong (when you have had an OC for 7-8 and you stack powers on to him it is bound to be OP, especially after him existing as long as he has)

btw has anybody seen the pattern with Spriggan evolutions? Here i'll show you.
Spriggan Requiem: Rubber
Cho-Z Spriggan: No Rubber
Lord Spriggan: Rubber
World Spriggan: No Rubber
Astral Spriggan: Rubber
(Feb. 07, 2022  1:53 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 04, 2022  4:11 AM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]Hey , I ended a OC entry a while ago, but would you like to add a custom Oc and Bey? And do you know the Mystical System?

I would but i'm afraid it will be called overpowered, the OC I would enter i've had for the past 7-8 years

i'll go ahead and say what his bey is (its a Spriggan, cry about it) (yes its a DB bey cause I wait to see if the bey will evolve before evolving it in my AU and DB ain't ended in my AU yet)

(this bey is Astral Spriggan but modified)
Core: Spriggan (it has metal in the center of it to resemble a "Metal God Chip, it also has better teeth (yes it is tighter than Lord Spriggan)
Blade: Astral (yes it can attack in left spin cause Astral in left is underrated ((the blase also has a rounder shape than regular Astral)) it also has tabs to make it harder to burst)
Armor: 0 (just a heavier 0, that's it)
Disc: Over (just a heavier version of Over, instead of 33 grams it's 40 grams)
Driver: Quattro' (just a dash version of Quattro)

hopefully the Shu and Spriggan fans don't kill me for this

yes my OC is VERY strong (when you have had an OC for 7-8 and you stack powers on to him it is bound to be OP, especially after him existing as long as he has)

btw has anybody seen the pattern with Spriggan evolutions? Here i'll show you.
Spriggan Requiem: Rubber
Cho-Z Spriggan: No Rubber
Lord Spriggan: Rubber
World Spriggan: No Rubber
Astral Spriggan: Rubber
I would have to deny this, as every bey in the series is a Mystic System bey, although if you want me to, I could make the bey like this.
i'm fine with that

oh btw could you or someone else draw a design for Legacy Spriggan

I just remembered in my AU there is a true form for Rainbow Flux and the only beys that have it are Spriggan and Valkyrie lol

I came up with Rainbow Flux true form cause it sounded cool
(Feb. 07, 2022  4:06 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]i'm fine with that

oh btw could you or someone else draw a design for Legacy Spriggan

I just remembered in my AU there is a true form for Rainbow Flux and the only beys that have it are Spriggan and Valkyrie lol

I came up with Rainbow Flux true form cause it sounded cool
Yeah, I can post it's design at some point. For terms, it is 3 sided, and in Left Spin, it has upper attack+rubber, and Right Spin has Smash Attack+Rubber. The design has metal inside the rubber axes like Lord. And Over' won't have the gap that Over normally does.

Oh yeah, guess I haven't posted a Chapter either in a little, well chapter time then.
please don't tell me it looks like this
(uhh how do I insert an image)

no one replied ._.
(Feb. 07, 2022  4:17 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]please don't tell me it looks like this
(uhh how do I insert an image)

no one replied ._.
I'd tell you if I knew how to.
(Feb. 07, 2022  4:06 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]i'm fine with that

oh btw could you or someone else draw a design for Legacy Spriggan

I just remembered in my AU there is a true form for Rainbow Flux and the only beys that have it are Spriggan and Valkyrie lol

I came up with Rainbow Flux true form cause it sounded cool
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I consider myself quite the drawer of beys, although I do need to say I might not draw them because time.
Btw, take it easy on posting stuff, yoy can just edit the post instead of posting a lot of posts.
(Feb. 07, 2022  7:08 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 07, 2022  4:06 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]i'm fine with that

oh btw could you or someone else draw a design for Legacy Spriggan

I just remembered in my AU there is a true form for Rainbow Flux and the only beys that have it are Spriggan and Valkyrie lol

I came up with Rainbow Flux true form cause it sounded cool
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I consider myself quite the drawer of beys, although I do need to say I might not draw them because time.
Btw, take it easy on posting stuff, yoy can just edit the post instead of posting a lot of posts.
Chapter 26: Baki calls out to Lucy, and Requiem battles, to see who's the strongest.

Next Chapter, Valhalla Versus Requiem, and the end of Keith's Requiem Arc, and the beginning of the Yacht Battle Royale Arc.
nice chapter

Van do be strong tho (i'd still beat him tho)

we all know that no matter how many battles Van wins he will get his butt kicked in the end

here is the url for the design the shape is too aggressive so I hope you didn't pick this
https://www.google.com/search?q=legacy+s...O1vpubLayM
(Feb. 07, 2022  7:21 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]nice chapter

Van do be strong tho (i'd still beat him tho)

we all know that no matter how many battles Van wins he will get his butt kicked in the end

here is the url for the design the shape is too aggressive so I hope you didn't pick this
https://www.google.com/search?q=legacy+s...O1vpubLayM
It's similar to that, but modified shape, like the axes are the shape of lord's rubber axes.
good, it just doesn't need to be too agressive

oh and what is the average weight for a mythical bey so I can do the math on the weight of my OC's Legacy Spriggan
(Feb. 08, 2022  1:44 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]good, it just doesn't need to be too agressive

oh and what is the average weight for a mythical bey so I can do the math on the weight of my OC's Legacy Spriggan
Most beys come around 82-95 grams, but some are lighter, some are heavier. But thats just stock combos, the heaviest is Mythical Kratos.Change-Axe is 94.3 grams.
doing the math than Over' would be 45 grams and 0 would be 35 meaning that my OC's Legacy Spriggan would be 92.8 grams

so it a heavy boi
(Feb. 08, 2022  3:40 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]doing the math than Over' would be 45 grams and 0 would be 35 meaning that my OC's Legacy Spriggan would be 92.8 grams

so it a heavy boi
Heavy boy, it hits hard and tanks attacks, then.
time to make my OC a custom launcher, a Mythical Launcher with a string that is 3 feet long and the gears inside the launcher are metal

the only reason the string is 3 feet long is to compensate for my OC's launching power, plus his arms have more joint movement

no my OC is not OP he trained day in and day out to get as strong as he is

OC description: name: DJ CAT, Appearance: a long haired grey cat able to walk on 2 legs (he pretty much has a human skeleton) with cyan eyes (his iris are cyan) he has normal human shaped hands (they are just furry) he has short cat ears on the top of his head (they are actual cat ears, he is a cat) he also has a high IQ and is able to adapt and counter his opponent's battle style, temperament/personality:  chill unless provoked, loyal to people he cares about, very smart, Clothes: a long sleeved cyan shirt with a black trench coat over it, his pants are black and his boots are black, Age: 38 (he ages very slowly meaning he is older than he actually appears)


I'm not the best at writing so hopefully this works
(Feb. 08, 2022  3:48 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]time to make my OC a custom launcher, a Mythical Launcher with a string that is 3 feet long and the gears inside the launcher are metal

the only reason the string is 3 feet long is to compensate for my OC's launching power, plus his arms have more joint movement

no my OC is not OP he trained day in and day out to get as strong as he is

OC description: name: DJ CAT, Appearance: a long haired grey cat able to walk on 2 legs (he pretty much has a human skeleton) with cyan eyes (his iris are cyan) he has normal human shaped hands (they are just furry) he has short cat ears on the top of his head (they are actual cat ears, he is a cat) he also has a high IQ and is able to adapt and counter his opponent's battle style, temperament/personality:  chill unless provoked, loyal to people he cares about, very smart, Clothes: a long sleeved cyan shirt with a black trench coat over it, his pants are black and his boots are black, Age: 38 (he ages very slowly meaning he is older than he actually appears)

I'm not the best at writing so hopefully this works
For the OC, would it be fine if I made it a girl who dresses like your oc, and wears cat ears? It would make more sense, and for the launcher, I'll shorten the string to 2 feet.
my OC is male

but shortening the launcher is ok
time for the multiverse plot stuff to come in lol cause my OC is not from the universe

the reason i'm not to keen to changing my OC is he has been around for so long (7 years) that I don't really like to have him changed

oh and here are the list of moves: Counterbreak, Upper Launch, Spin Steal, Legacy Slash, Legacy Upper, Legacy Slash (flying/in the air)
(Feb. 08, 2022  4:13 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]my OC is male

but shortening the launcher is ok
time for the multiverse plot stuff to come in lol cause my OC is not from the universe

the reason i'm not to keen to changing my OC is he has been around for so long (7 years) that I don't really like to have him changed

oh and here are the list of moves: Counterbreak, Upper Launch, Spin Steal, Legacy Slash, Legacy Upper, Legacy Slash (flying/in the air)
Alright, sounds good, we'll see them in a few chapters.
nice, i'm glad this works out
Alright, bad news, Chapter 27 will be delayed. The chapter's length is very long, and I'm only half way done with it, so my assumption is the chapter will only be out end of the week aka(Thursday/Friday)

(Feb. 08, 2022  11:36 PM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]Alright, bad news, Chapter 27 will be delayed. The chapter's length is very long, and I'm only half way done with it, so my assumption is the chapter will only be out end of the week aka(Thursday/Friday)
Ok one, Chapter is done.

Two, I have a random idea, pick one of these beys to get evolved into the Mythological System, because more sub system beys are cool.

And here would be the combos for the evolutions.

I vote Baki he hasn’t gotten as much focus as he should have
Maybe Samson he needs character evolution
(Feb. 08, 2022  3:34 PM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 08, 2022  1:44 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]good, it just doesn't need to be too agressive

oh and what is the average weight for a mythical bey so I can do the math on the weight of my OC's Legacy Spriggan
Most beys come around 82-95 grams, but some are lighter, some are heavier. But thats just stock combos, the heaviest is Mythical Kratos.Change-Axe is 94.3 grams.

I would say Bellerophon would be 93.9 grams(stock it just has heavy parts even though it has Xtreme’
(Feb. 08, 2022  11:36 PM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]Alright, bad news, Chapter 27 will be delayed. The chapter's length is very long, and I'm only half way done with it, so my assumption is the chapter will only be out end of the week aka(Thursday/Friday)

(Feb. 08, 2022  11:36 PM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]Alright, bad news, Chapter 27 will be delayed. The chapter's length is very long, and I'm only half way done with it, so my assumption is the chapter will only be out end of the week aka(Thursday/Friday)
Ok one, Chapter is done.

Two, I have a random idea, pick one of these beys to get evolved into the Mythological System, because more sub system beys are cool.

And here would be the combos for the evolutions.

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Irene wouldn’t get one because she is the chillest of Valhalla, so she won't battle that much nor has much relevance in her battle (as I see it)
Baki is a good choice, as he is quite relevant in his battles and would make sense.
Obito doesn't make much sense, but it is a option if you want one on the opposing team to have.
Samson is not that good of an option, but it is there.
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So Baki?
(Feb. 09, 2022  8:47 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 08, 2022  11:36 PM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]Alright, bad news, Chapter 27 will be delayed. The chapter's length is very long, and I'm only half way done with it, so my assumption is the chapter will only be out end of the week aka(Thursday/Friday)

Ok one, Chapter is done.

Two, I have a random idea, pick one of these beys to get evolved into the Mythological System, because more sub system beys are cool.

And here would be the combos for the evolutions.

.
Irene wouldn’t get one because she is the chillest of Valhalla, so she won't battle that much nor has much relevance in her battle (as I see it)
Baki is a good choice, as he is quite relevant in his battles and would make sense.
Obito doesn't make much sense, but it is a option if you want one on the opposing team to have.
Samson is not that good of an option, but it is there.
.
So Baki?
Alright, sounds like Baki, gets the Mythological Upgrade to Bahamut.

Panic Bahamut.Sheltered-Outburst, will be his bey then.
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