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*depression cure rate increased*
(Feb. 03, 2022  7:40 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: [ -> ]*depression cure rate increased*
That would be good! Also Chapter 25 tonight!
YASSSSSSSS
Chapter 25: Keith has broken after his defeat, and Obito's Story is unfolded.

I hope that Baki and Keith have a other fight and Irene gets so mad that she knocks them both out
Hey , I ended a OC entry a while ago, but would you like to add a custom Oc and Bey? And do you know the Mystical System?
(Feb. 04, 2022  4:11 AM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]Hey , I ended a OC entry a while ago, but would you like to add a custom Oc and Bey? And do you know the Mystical System?

Can I add one as well? I have a good idea for one at least imo
(Feb. 04, 2022  4:21 AM)We do not care Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 04, 2022  4:11 AM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]Hey , I ended a OC entry a while ago, but would you like to add a custom Oc and Bey? And do you know the Mystical System?

Can I add one as well? I have a good idea for one at least imo
Sure, I have a arc that needs some characters.
(Feb. 04, 2022  1:41 PM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 04, 2022  4:21 AM)We do not care Wrote: [ -> ]Can I add one as well? I have a good idea for one at least imo
Sure, I have a arc that needs some characters.

Alright thank you

my character:
If you don't like it I can change him to another oc I have since I have many characters I created with different motives and backstories.
Would you mind if I added a Character? I have an Idea for a New Character and it'd be cool if I could add him in your Fanfic. I know I already added Percy but if you need any more Characters I'd be more than happy to share my Character.
(Feb. 05, 2022  12:47 AM)We do not care Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 04, 2022  1:41 PM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]Sure, I have a arc that needs some characters.

Alright thank you

my character:
If you don't like it I can change him to another oc I have since I have many characters I created with different motives and backstories.
I like this OC, only thing I have to change is the armor, which is already Output, which is featured on Fafnir and Fallen Valkyrie
(Feb. 05, 2022  12:47 AM)We do not care Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 04, 2022  1:41 PM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]Sure, I have a arc that needs some characters.

Alright thank you

my character:
If you don't like it I can change him to another oc I have since I have many characters I created with different motives and backstories.

I’m trying not to be offensive here but this is a bit too similar to Light Yagami
(Feb. 05, 2022  1:22 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]Would you mind if I added a Character? I have an Idea for a New Character and it'd be cool if I could add him in your Fanfic. I know I already added Percy but if you need any more Characters I'd be more than happy to share my Character.
New character from Unseen? Yeah, that's fine, you'll be taking the 2nd OC slot from the Forums.
I’d like to make a new character too
(Feb. 05, 2022  1:58 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: [ -> ]I’d like to make a new character too
Alright, Pika with one. Sounds great dude, I'd love to see what you can come up with.
(Btw can you make Barry more powerful than Thomas because I wanna emphasize the part where he can keep up and possibly surpass older bladers. Also I just like him slightly more because it was the first OC I created.)
Thomas Patterson
Age: 13
Height: 5’0
Weight: 87 lbs
Personality: An easygoing , but earnest boy who is Barry’s cousin and good friend and can get quite rude and aggressive in battle due to him feeling the need to toughen up. He gets bothered by laziness and sometimes slaps them if he gets agitated enough. He was inspired by Fubuki Sumiye to train as hard as he can
Appearance: A short tan-skinned 13 year old with hazel eyes and red hair with teal highlights.
Backstory: In third grade he got beaten up by 3 5th graders after losing a Beyblade battle to one of the bullies and he went home bleeding. The next day he shut himself off from everyone and dedicated his time to Beyblade,
practicing 9 hours each day and when the Mythical System was announced he created his Beyblade, Perseverance Typhon
Beyblade:
Type: Attack
Core: A Right-Spin core with a rubber burst stopper akin to Judgement
Blade: Perseverance: A 4-bladed Blade with 2 rubber wings that pop out of the rubber upper blades and 2 plastic blades sticking out for a impact-like attack
Armor: Hammer: An armor with 2 points on 1 side and 3 points on the other side for an unbalanced attack
Disc: Anvil(same as Forge Vulcan’s Disc)
Driver: Switch: A Driver with a metal semi-flat tip that turns into a rubber flat tip
Special Moves: Fang Impact, Perseverance Slash, Perseverance Awakening(when the rubber wings pop out of the rubber upper blades), Perseverance Upper, Switch Counter(when the metal semi-flat tip retracts and it goes for a counter-attack
(Feb. 05, 2022  1:29 AM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 05, 2022  12:47 AM)We do not care Wrote: [ -> ]Alright thank you

my character:
If you don't like it I can change him to another oc I have since I have many characters I created with different motives and backstories.
I like this OC, only thing I have to change is the armor, which is already Output, which is featured on Fafnir and Fallen Valkyrie

Alright im fine with you changing it

(Feb. 05, 2022  1:42 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 05, 2022  12:47 AM)We do not care Wrote: [ -> ]Alright thank you

my character:
If you don't like it I can change him to another oc I have since I have many characters I created with different motives and backstories.

I’m trying not to be offensive here but this is a bit too similar to Light Yagami

Its fine my character being considered like Light is more of a complement to me due to Light being my favorite fictional character of all time.
(Feb. 05, 2022  2:34 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: [ -> ](Btw can you make Barry more powerful than Thomas because I wanna emphasize the part where he can keep up and possibly surpass older bladers. Also I just like him slightly more because it was the first OC I created.)
Thomas Patterson
Age: 13
Height: 5’0
Weight: 87 lbs
Personality: An easygoing , but earnest boy who is Barry’s cousin and good friend and can get quite rude and aggressive in battle due to him feeling the need to toughen up. He gets bothered by laziness and sometimes slaps them if he gets agitated enough. He was inspired by Fubuki Sumiye to train as hard as he can
Appearance: A short tan-skinned 13 year old with hazel eyes and red hair with teal highlights.
Backstory: In third grade he got beaten up by 3 5th graders after losing a Beyblade battle to one of the bullies and he went home bleeding. The next day he shut himself off from everyone and dedicated his time to Beyblade,
practicing 9 hours each day and when the Mythical System was announced he created his Beyblade, Perseverance Typhon
Beyblade:
Type: Attack
Core: A Right-Spin core with a rubber burst stopper akin to Judgement
Blade: Perseverance: A 4-bladed Blade with 2 rubber wings that pop out of the rubber upper blades and 2 plastic blades sticking out for a impact-like attack
Armor: Hammer: An armor with 2 points on 1 side and 3 points on the other side for an unbalanced attack
Disc: Anvil(same as Forge Vulcan’s Disc)
Driver: Switch: A Driver with a metal semi-flat tip that turns into a rubber flat tip
Special Moves: Fang Impact, Perseverance Slash, Perseverance Awakening(when the rubber wings pop out of the rubber upper blades), Perseverance Upper, Switch Counter(when the metal semi-flat tip retracts and it goes for a counter-attack
Alright sounds good, I have to switch(No pun) the driver name because Switch is already the name of Aiga's disc, so would you be able to find a different name if not, I can change Aiga's disc name.
Can I make 1?
(Feb. 05, 2022  3:49 AM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: [ -> ]Can I make 1?
Sure sounds fine to me.
Switch was the only name I could come up with so I’d like you to change Aiga’s disc

(Feb. 05, 2022  2:38 AM)We do not care Wrote: [ -> ]
(Feb. 05, 2022  1:29 AM)beansworth Wrote: [ -> ]I like this OC, only thing I have to change is the armor, which is already Output, which is featured on Fafnir and Fallen Valkyrie

Alright im fine with you changing it

(Feb. 05, 2022  1:42 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: [ -> ]I’m trying not to be offensive here but this is a bit too similar to Light Yagami

Its fine my character being considered like Light is more of a complement to me due to Light being my favorite fictional character of all time.

I can tell because both your pfp and the gif below ur posts are Light
Himawari akchiyo

Age-15

Height- 4,9

Personality-a tomboy who says what she thinks about people, she also enjoys sleeping, she likes war, nice and sometimes messes with people

Friends-everyone in Valhalla

Enemies-everyone in requiem + her sis

Rival-war or anyone that you want

Appearance-she has blue hair , a white jacket ,she wears That black net clothes thingy, she has she has short hair that reaches to the end of her neck

Bey- viral hooligan,viral,titan,crack

Blade-viral (the intense blade is a circle with 2 sharp blades colored White , black and blue)

Core-hooligan (looks like a dragon that’s blue and white with black flames)

Armor-intense (looks like anything you want)

Disk-titan (a big disk that’s kinda like blitz but has 4 flaps colored black blue)

Tip-nuke (kinda like atomic tip but is shorter and has metal)

Moves-viral slash, viral breaker, viral shield, titan dive, cracked flash, viral spin,

Special move-ULTIMATE VIRAL WHIP!

type- balance
(Feb. 06, 2022  5:18 PM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: [ -> ]Himawari akchiyo

Age-15

Height- 4,9

Personality-a tomboy who says what she thinks about people, she also enjoys sleeping, she likes war, nice and sometimes messes with people

Friends-everyone in Valhalla

Enemies-everyone in requiem + her sis

Rival-war or anyone that you want

Appearance-she has blue hair , a white jacket ,she wears That black net clothes thingy, she has she has short hair that reaches to the end of her neck

Bey- viral hooligan,viral,titan,crack

Blade-viral (the intense blade is a circle with 2 sharp blades colored White , black and blue)

Core-hooligan (looks like a dragon that’s blue and white with black flames)

Armor-intense  (looks like anything you want)

Disk-titan (a big disk that’s kinda like blitz but has 4 flaps colored black blue)

Tip-nuke (kinda like  atomic tip but is shorter and has metal)

Moves-viral slash, viral  breaker, viral shield, titan dive, cracked flash, viral spin,

Special move-ULTIMATE VIRAL WHIP!

type- balance
@We do not care, and , I got your ocs for the Yacht Battle Arc, down.
Too much my Hero Academia.
If there is anything that needs to be added just lemme know really quickly. I hope this is Good Enough for you and I'm sorry it took me a while to make this. I'm too obsessed with MHA. Lol.

Forgot about Moves. Sorry!

Ravage Saber: Iapetus uses its Large Blades to slash at its Opposing Bey usually scoring an Over Finish or Burst.

Ravage Shoot: Iapetus leans on its driver and accelerates unleashing a Barrage of Attacks.

Feel Free to add as many more moves as you want! Smile
(Feb. 07, 2022  5:32 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: [ -> ]Too much my Hero Academia.
If there is anything that needs to be added just lemme know really quickly. I hope this is Good Enough for you and I'm sorry it took me a while to make this. I'm too obsessed with MHA. Lol.

Forgot about Moves. Sorry!

Ravage Saber: Iapetus uses its Large Blades to slash at its Opposing Bey usually scoring an Over Finish or Burst.

Ravage Shoot: Iapetus leans on its driver and accelerates unleashing a Barrage of Attacks.

Feel Free to add as many more moves as you want! Smile
I like Izuku, definitely one of the cooler people coming to the Yacht Battle Arc, can't wait to see him and Iapetus battle.
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